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Mark Daffen's Metropolice Force Application
« on: March 14, 2014, 04:28:53 PM »
Mark Daffen's Metropolice Force Application

OOC Name: Napalmmoney

IC Character Name: Mark Daffen

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Metropolice Force and what lead your character to do so.
My character has seen the civil protection officers patrol the streets and guard his whole life. Ever since he was a little boy he dreamed of being one. He sometimes thought about how he would look in the white and gray outfit with the shinny boots. Oh how he lacks entertainment in district 1, he only wishes to be one of the brave men and women who protect the citizens.

My character doesn't only want this job to benefit his fellow citizen but to assist his family. As I presume many are poor such as my characters family. This job could bring in an extra few coins to assist in taking care of his family that has helped him always in his time of need.

He wishes to get respect in this world, and he believe this will help greatly, to help him be important and life and to have meaning. He wishes to make his family proud and bring them honor and glory for their sons accomplishments.

2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
My chacter is trustworth, loyal, helpfull, honest, cautious, intelegent, logical, serious, devoted, aggressive, and calm. These are my characters traits but not limited to.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
I expect the Combine Civil authority to be serious and hardcore job. Meaning that every moment is life or death, that every action has repercussions and possible rewards. I think that I will get into a firefight or two while on the force.

I believe I could really assist the citizens of all the districts and also serve and protect my superiors and fellow officers. I will most likely give my life to protect someone no matter who they are. I will fulfill my duty as a CCA and do my best to protect the Universal Union and every one under it.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
My characters name is Mark Daffen, Mark grew up with his parents and at the age of 20 he finally decided to come to district 1. Upon arriving he was low on coins and hurried to find an occupation. Upon walking around for a few hours at last he found a piece of paper telling him how to make an application to join the CCA. He jumps to the opportunity and thinks back to when he was a child and how he would see the CCA patrolling the streets keeping him safe from the dangers of the world. He remembered how his father would tell him stories about the CCA, he always talked well of them but my mother was lets say had a different opinion. She always warned me “Stay away from those demons”, I of course didn’t listen and investigated in these weird masked men. I stalked them from a distance knowing that if I was caught I would be punished by the CCA but worse of all my mother would scream and yell until the head crabs came home. My father one day found me lurking in the shadows, feet away from a CCA, He picked me up and carried me right next to home and bought me a soda. He had a long talk about the harsh punishments that the CCA gave to people. But he never once during that talk did he say stop, I think he supported me and wanted me to continue but he wanted me to be more cautious. So I continued with my research on them and found that they very often make people pick up cans that they themselves had knocked over. I hoped to learn one day why they did this and if there was a reason for this behind it. One day I found out though if you refuse to pick up the can, As I walked to lunch with my father we saw a man talking to a CCA, he knocked over a can and said “Pick up that can”. But that man was feed up with it, he refused and was punished brutally. Right in front of my very eyes a man was beaten with a stun stick until he no longer had the strength to resist. As the man slowly stood up he picked up the can and placed it in the trash can. This made being a CCA a deal breaker for me until one day, as I was asleep a man broke the window of my home and came into are house to loot are belongings. Just as he had stolen a few things the sound of a door being broken shattered through the house. The man was quickly tackled to the ground and he was arrested. The CCA quickly returned are belonging and took the man to jail. This made me admire these brave men and women. When that CCA kicked in the door he had no clue what was on the other side a side from a criminal. He was unaware if he was armed or if there was more than one perp. He risked his life for my family, from that day on I knew I was safe and that I wanted to become a CCA.

5) Have you ever had a MPF character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
I have never had a CCA character on Cataylst Gaming.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
I have played on RP servers for about 1 and a half years now.

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
I have played on serious roleplay servers for atleast 8 monthes now.

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
I have been a member of Catayst gaming for a while now, I have over 11 days in-game on HRP.

4. What Time zone are you in?
I live in

5. In what country do you live?
Eastern Time Zone A.K.A. UTC-5

6. How old are you?
I am 15 years of age

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
My most memorable RP moment would be on Clockwork Military RP, As I played as a soldier we were being attacked. Men and a few other men gathered in the barracks and await the commanding officer. As the door opens the CO stands there and begins to talk. Just as he finishes his sentence a bullet pierces through his chest and he dies, The CCO was no where to be found either and we needed a commander. All of us just being privates I decided I shows be the one, As I was the only one actually in a platoon Marauder 2-1 Rifleman Bravo Company. We where brave fighters who specialized in search and destroy missions. I'm not going to lie commanding 30 people at once is very hard, I had to assign people jobs as algida members ran in and shot at us. Eventually we exhausted their supply of ammo and they ran, we retook the base and ever thing went back to normal. And did I get promoted for this? Hell no because the server shut down 4 days later! Still pretty memorable and fun.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
I do consider my self a good listener.




IC Section

Full Name: Mark Daffen
CID: 54912
Age: 26 years of age
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 9
Hair Colour Black Hair
Eye Colour: Blue Eyes
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 180 lbs.
Mental Distinctions: N/A
Mental Defects: Sometimes stutters
Mental Advantages: Intellgent, and logical
Notable Qualities: Some notable qualities are, trustworth, loyal, helpfull, honest, cautious, intelegent, logical, serious, devoted, aggressive, and calm.


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
I have never been detained by the CCA, one time I was interigated after I reported a man with a weapon. I was there by will and was never searched, pointed at by a gun, or yelled at by a CCA offcial.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
I occasionally eat combine rations.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
I will most certainly give my life to protect the Universal Union and protect it's members.

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
I am responsible for all actions that I do, being good or bad. I also take all responbility for anyone who is under my command.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
I will remain loyal and faithful unter the last breath.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I want to join to assist the citizens of the UU and to make my family and frined proud of me. I wish to help those in need and to protect any one no matter if they are above or below me in command.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Mark Daffen hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
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Re: Mark Daffen's Metropolice Force Application
« Reply #1 on: March 14, 2014, 05:36:04 PM »
Im doing to deny this application for the following reasons:

-You've said you have 11 days playtime on HRP however I have reason to believe you don't have much HL2RP experience

-Related to above: In your backstory it says
thinks back to when he was a child and how he would see the CCA patrolling the streets keeping him safe from the dangers of the world. He remembered how his father would tell him stories about the CCA

-After the 7 hour war; the elderly, the young, disabled etc were killed off. As such your backstory doesnt fit because it is form a perspective that your character was a child during the Combine occupation which would infact mean he would be dead.

-From the points noted above I think you could do with more experience in the HL2 server before your ready for a character in the CCA.

Please re-apply no earlier than the 21/03/2014 (21st March 2014)


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Re: Mark Daffen's Metropolice Force Application
« Reply #2 on: March 14, 2014, 06:37:24 PM »
I agree with every thing you said, but I question why these points where not brought up the first time I did my applications.
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Re: Mark Daffen's Metropolice Force Application
« Reply #3 on: March 14, 2014, 07:26:05 PM »
I agree with every thing you said, but I question why these points where not brought up the first time I did my applications.

Your right, this is my own fault for not taking my time and reading the first application properly. On that note i'm going to shorten the re-apply time to 17/03/2014 (Monday). By this time you will have hopefully been on the HL2RP server over the weekend, gaining a bit more knowledge in to how it works.


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Re: Mark Daffen's Metropolice Force Application
« Reply #4 on: March 14, 2014, 07:40:40 PM »
Thank you, I really appreciate that you will allow me to re-apply on Monday.
Quotes from my hero Liberty Prime
"Communism is the very definition of failure!"
"Democracy is non-negotiable."
"Death is a preferable alternative to Communism!"

 

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