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[DENIED]I am Dustin Lee LaRosa's Civil Authority Application
« on: March 19, 2012, 11:14:14 PM »
I am Dustin Lee LaRosa's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: bG |:. Derpy Hooves

IC Character Name: I am Dustin Lee LaRosa

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
My character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority because he wishes to embrace laws and stop rebels from murder. This takes place in D6: One day he found his friend, Covered in blood, Almost dead, His legs were broken, His name was Aaron, Aaron told Dustin that a Rebel group tried to kill him before he came, Dustin didn't know his last name, But Aaron was bleeding badly, He looked like he was going to die of blood  loose soon, So he rushed him to the Civil Authority, Hoping to save his life, The Unit 531 helped him and his friend's live,  He soon found out he may be amputated, Dustin Helped as much as he could, And the next day, He found Aaron alive, He was happy, But he was mad at the rebels that did this to Aaron.

2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Dustin is Trustworthy: He would not stab you in the back, Or disobey orders. Shy: He's Shy around Superiors, He would barely talk to them unless they talk to him. Truthful: He would not tell a lie to a fellow Unit, Or a Citizen unless it's classified. Responsible: Dustin is most responsible for his actions, If he messes up, He will make a mental note of not messing up again. Good team worker and Good Communication Skills: He will be able to have good communication with his fellow Units after a while of getting used to the codes.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
What i expect from the Combine Civil Authority is: For me and my character, I think it's going to be rough, Getting used to the codes, The Units, Whose the most friendly Unit to talk to, Me and Dustin Think it will be very, [/b] VERY [/b] Hard to get used too, But, We think we may have a chance of it.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Dustin LaRosa was born in London England, His mother was Emily LaRosa, He never met his real dad, His Mother only had boyfriends, Never got re-married. But Dustin Learned to live a life without a father, He spent most of his time with his brother Damon LaRosa when he was Three to Ten. But at the age of Thirteen, Dustin and Damon Soon split apart, Because Damon was hard-headed and Stubborn and somewhat insane, While Dustin was Calm, Obedient, And Kind. After Damon stopped talking to Dustin, Dustin only talked to his Mother, And some of his only friends in school, He was the Typical "Nerd" while his brother was the "Cool Kid", And Damon would ALWAYS break things and rules, Damon Thought he was a god, While Dustin though Damon was an Idiot. When Dustin turned 18, He dyed his Hair brown, To look different from his Twin Damon, Three years later: The Seven hour war came, The only way Dustin knew what was happening, Was by the Gunfire noises and Explosions, And a lot of people Tweeted and Facebooked about it before the power shut off, Damon and his Mother was on the Deck, On the ground, Guns pointed at them, They were crying, Dustin Opened the door and was knocked out by a CCA with the butt of the gun. And when he woke up, His family and everyone outside was in Ties, Damon Tried to Struggle, But it was Impossible to break, Dustin Smirked at Damon, Before noticing that there was many dead bodies, and blood and bullets everywhere, So Dustin took the smart root: Be nice to the Combine, While Damon took the Idiotic way: Try to kill the Combine. Damon and Dustin were shoved in a train, Their Mother, On a different one, They were in tears saying "Goodbye!" To eachother. When Dustin and Damon LaRosa got Set into City 45, They split ways, Damon meeting a Resistance team in D6, And Dustin Applying to be a Combine Civil Authority Unit.

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
I have not been removed, Nor had, from a Combine Civil Authority Unit.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
About Two Years

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
A year or so.

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
Three months or so

4. What Time zone are you in?
Western US

5. In what country do you live?
United State of America

6. How old are you?
I am Twelve

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
When and my Josh Wolfe Character That is now Pk'd, He gave ALL the Information of his Rebel group, And the APEX OfC Threw him across the Room, Then he limped back to D6, They already knew, And they started to attack him, But Clyde, He HATED Josh, He engraved "TRAITOR" On his forehead with a burning knife, After that, He started to cry about all he has done, After that, Josh saw Scout Being escorted into the Nexus, Josh screamed out "Scout!", Then a Unit started to detain him, He got away into D6, Then someone started to question him about Scout's death, Then he almost killed Josh, But then Clyde came...Then Josh was caught by Clyde, And Clyde shot him in the back of the head.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes i do.



IC Section

Full Name: I am Dustin Lee LaRosa
CID: 81621
Age: I am Twenty-Two
Gender: Male
Height: I am Six Feet.
Hair Colour I have Blonde hair, Sir/Ma'am.
Eye Colour: I have Blue Eyes.
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: I am about 130 Pounds Sir/Ma'am.
Mental Distinctions: I am kind, I can be shy, I am sure I may be a somewhat good Unit.
Mental Defects: I Seem to get angry when someone doesn't listen to me..
Mental Advantages: I see myself as a thinker, Thinking what's best, And Doing what's best.
Notable Qualities: When i was in my teen years, My mother got me some Karate training, I quit it not that long after i got it since the teacher was a jerk.


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
No, Sir/Ma'am, I have not been detained or anything of that nature, The only time i've been in ties, Is with regular searches, And After the Seven Hour War.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes,  Sir/Ma'am, It's the only thing i eat.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
I am willing to give my life to cause the Universal Union.

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
I do as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by me and those under my command as my OWN responsibility.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
I will remain Loyal and Faithful to the Universal Union as long as I live and breathe.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I wish to be a Combine Civil Authority because i wish to enforce the laws, I wish to protect Citizens from Mentally...Unfit..Citizens.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, I am Dustin Lee LaRosa hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
« Last Edit: March 19, 2012, 11:24:31 PM by DJ Purple - ddosers win. »
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Re: I am Dustin Lee LaRosa's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: March 19, 2012, 11:22:14 PM »
UNIT: 604
DIVISION: GRID
CLEARANCE: OfC
Enter Password: ************

ACCESS GRANTED

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Applicant File Opened: <Dustin LaRosa>
Citizen Identification Number: 81621

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| Application does not meet requirements.  Application fails to follow proper grammar requirements throughout the application.  Application questions 1 and 3 do not meet minimum standards. ||::>

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Re: I am Dustin Lee LaRosa's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #2 on: March 19, 2012, 11:23:17 PM »
UNIT: 738
DIVISION: GRID
CLEARANCE: Divisional Leader
Enter Password: ************

ACCESS GRANTED

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Applicant File Opened: <Dustin Lee LaRosa>
Citizen Identification Number:  81621

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| Application does not meet requirements.  The application seems to have been rushed with no thought or process put into it. You have many grammar errors along with the fact that question one is full of run on sentences and not even close to 3 paragraphs. You failed to add any detail in your backstory which made it blah. In your backstory you did not add allot of detail on how the combine forces arrived or any of the real canon pretense events which you can easily find online. I would suggest you take the time to review over your canon. ||::>

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