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Offline SlenderManSon

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Axil Monroe's Authorization Application
« on: November 03, 2011, 09:31:13 PM »
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Steam Name: SlenderSon
Age: 15
How long have you been Roleplaying? (can be any game): 4 Years
How long have you been playing Serious GMod RP?: 3 years

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Authorization(s):
A Resistance Group leader "Axil Agents"

Name: Axil Monroe
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Affiliation: Resistance

Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.
    At the 7 year war Axil was defending his family while the Combine were invading. He didn't like his personal space invaded, let alone his home planet. The Invasion was 1 day after His wedding with his beautiful bride Nation McKinley. Soon after the seven hour war he was sent off to City 11. He hated that place. Why did he have to live in such a bad environment. There in City 11 is where he got the first taste of Resisting the combine. He loved it, and was the perfect figure to lead a group. Soon after He moved to the Slums in City 11 his wife was killed violently by a CP. He broke down in misery loosing his sunshine in this life. The hate for the combine grew stronger within the mind of Axil and he had enough. When he learned that he will be moved to City 45 he was hoping for a new start. 'A perfect place for a revolution' He thought has the train pulled into the station. There and then is when he grouped some people together to make the group possible.

What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
-Great leader skills
-Fearful appearance
-Influential Speaker

Defects
-The CCA is on his tail all the time
-People try to snitch on him becouse of his honest personality
-He is hugely targeted by All groups in the Slums

What do you plan to do with these perks/defects?
Im planning on trying to do a REAL resistance group in this server instead of the Fail types of groups.

Will anyone else need these auths? (If so, list OOC and IC name(s))


Extra Notes (optional):
If i don't get accepted can you tell me what to do right next time?

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Re: Axil Monroe's Authorization Application
« Reply #1 on: November 03, 2011, 11:41:43 PM »
Backstory is NOT detailed enough.

Denied.

 

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