This only remotely makes sense, but the writing is choppy and verbose. Also, I've mentioned this to you before, and you do it in every thread I see: "whom" refers to an object. You consistently use it wrong. The great thing about "whom" is that it's not noticeable if you use "who" where "whom" is appropriate. However, if you use "whom" where "who" is appropriate it does stand out. I suggest you either learn how to use the word or just not use it at all.