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[DENIED] Alica Johnson's Civil Authority Application
« on: September 04, 2012, 05:07:56 PM »
Alica Johnson's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: Jack Bandy

IC Character Name: Alica Johnson

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
When Alica saw the Combine for the first time she was scared but then she started to learn more about them, how they live act and learn, she found out that the Combine where people and are modified and are made into basically super humans. They could endure more, run faster and where amazingly strong. The combine to Alica where gods, the people that saved humanity from falling to another race, maybe a bad race of aliens could of took over and enslaved humanity permanently even though humanity was enslaved Alica didn’t think of it that way, she just thought that by keeping every one organized it would help reach the Combines goal of reaching immortality and so she did as she was told and listened all the time.

Since Alica first saw the Combine she has always thought of them as the superior people and that they are perfect in any and every way possible and she has always dreamed of being perfect. When Alica first heard about how to get into the CCA she started to do work for the citizens. she started by cleaning windows and the barricades outside of the Nexus, after that she went on to hand out free Breen water from a tin can and a bucket, and from there straight to doing the same but this time with UU lemonade. Alica decided that giving out free lemonade would bring her no business so she got a permit to distribute the stuff around the plaza. After doing her good deed she was asked to apply for the CWU but she had to say no for her real dreams lay with the CCA.

She earned her first loyalist points by reporting a crime then by doing manual labor then she cleaned an Officers boots and after that got a recommendation and earned 3 points making a total of 6 points. And she earned her loyalist armband. After doing this she continued to help around the plaza still cleaning awaiting her applications verdict. Alica has still to learn more of the people she is going to get involved with and she will learn well.


2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Lawful
Trustworthy
Listens to the CCA
Smart

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
In the CCA I expect my character to learn about keeping order about how to reach our goal of immortality. My character will learn allot from being in the CCA about how to stop a fight how to deal with day to day problems like an un civilized Citizen. She will become hardened and dependable even more trustworthy than she is and will try to exceed her superiors expectations and she shall do this if she gets through to her dream of joining the CCA to help, protect and keep the streets clean. She will do anything that is asked of her from all of her superiors.
If Alica gets through she will be able to utilize all of her skills to help crack down on resistance like help make small ambush points or help with luring a known target out to the open and not mess up. She will help in all and any way like in ration distribution that may sound boring but Alica will do it as long as it means the Combine will reach the goal of immortality.
 
I myself with learn how to RP more effectively against citizens, I will try my hardest to play by the rules 100% of the time and never screw up on something big, as a person I wish to have many an enjoyable time RP'ing as a recruit going through basic training to hopefully become an OfC or anything higher so I can prove to myself and all that I have improved on my RP skills as a CCA member and as a person in general.
And as the player I will be able to connect with my character more due to having a strict parent and stuff. I will be able to utilize skills I have in real life and use them in game, like my ideas for setting up an ambush I can do that stuff well. All in all I will be able to do more as a Combine than as a citizen so for me as a person I will be able to immerse myself into a bigger, better RP environment.


4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Alica Johnson was brought up around violence fighting and nothing else, she went through a variety of schools, kicked out due to her parents fighting with other parents and all the family problems she had.

On her Eighteenth birthday Alica was given the best present ever, the new of her pregnancy from her test and she was so happy she spent the day in tears of joy, but that happiness didn't last as death came knocking on her door at night in the form of a murder, her 1st thought was "Hmm this man looks like he needs help, I may as well let him in" and so she did and he was fine at 1st and after 2 hours it started, he pulled out a .44 magnum forced Alica on the floor and shot down her boyfriend and wiped the blood all over his face, and he then went on to eat some of the skin on Alica's boyfriends body, after such a traumatic experience she never thought she could amount to anything at all.

A few weeks after her baby died Alica decided to try and find new love, she did a man by the name of Jerome Johnson and he was a coloured man and he was also tall with blue eyes and dark black hair, she thought that she had found her true love and she did.

7 years later the 7 hour war started, in her town they came from the sky to the ocean, drop ships landed on Military boats and the SYNTH wiped out all of the ships or took command over them, Alica was changed by then she was a good person and had learned through her years of abuse, death and bad things that she should live a good life even though she lost her baby on its day of birth due to the umbilical cord strangling it to death and with the help of Jerome she thought she could live through this. One day during a city relocation the transport taking them to the new city was ambushed by resistance and unfortunately Jerome was shot in the crossfire and Alica was taken back to the resistance camp where they kept her, Alica didn’t like being there, she hated the resistance because it was one of their gunner’s how killed Jerome, she was in an angry state of mourning, and when she had the chance she left and headed out to the rally point where she met up with a few people who were also with the transport or moving to find CCA ruled land and they were escorted by CCA and OTA.

A few days after she left to find a CCA ruled city with the new people she met they came across a small area named by the Combine, Checkpoint Zero Alpha Five and that is where they all stayed for a few days only to gather  their bearings and head on out to find another city.

After they left Checkpoint Zero Alpha Five they came across a small city which was not CCA ruled, it was resistance ruled and well she and all of the other citizens felt like they were going to die because they knew little about the Combine and how they are powerful soldiers, The attack on the City began at dawn on the 2nd day of finding it and it did not last as long as she thought and it gave her hope that the Combine are better world leaders, When the siege started the CCA as they liked to be called were sent in to assess the problem and then they called in the OTA units, the OTA made Alcia feel safe yet scared at the same time, mainly because the OTA where deadly and lethal soldiers and as she later found out in the new city they find is that OTA stands for Overwatch Transhuman Arm and that they are the army of the combine, the elite of elite the best most scariest soldiers. A few weeks later they found a new City called Garfort or City 125 and that is where she lived for a while and that is when the “things” came they where ugly creatures with elongated fingers wide mouths and there was a different kind of them, one kind was overly fast and another was able to through these little things the Combine like to call headcrabs at you but these ones where poisonous and slowly would kill you so after these attacks started they had to uproot and leave, taking as much as possible with along with an APC that was left in the garage, unfortunately 3 men where lost trying to retrieve it from the creature infested nexus and as they left the CCA called in drop ships to send in OTA to clean the place up for re population of that city. A few weeks after they found that City they found a new one name City 49 and Alica remained there for a while.

During her 1st days in CCA ruled City 49 she started to learn of the CCA by reading books and asking questions to those of them that would answer her, and she then finally decided to devote her life to try and join the CCA to reach their goal of immortality and from that day on she was a devoted CCA addict and could never stop learning about them, how they act and learn communicate all of their stuff, she even tried to contact people who actually help her learn more about earths new command.

A few weeks later after the initial attacks her home town was liberated by resistance but only a few hundred people made it out alive, Alica not one of them for she was one of the 50 people getting relocated and she was the only one to be getting sent to City 45.

After arriving at C45 Alica knew this was the best place to be, the CCA who where in command of that area were highly trained, smart and well pretty much heading for the goal of immortality.

4 weeks after arriving Alica decided to start helping out by cleaning windows and if she was allowed the barricades of the nexus and from them days on she started to prepare for her CCA application.


5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
No.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
3 years

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
1 year 6 months

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
1 year 6 monnths (Have had variou steam accounts)

4. What Time zone are you in?
GMT 0

5. In what country do you live?
England

6. How old are you?
13

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
I was on HL2RP and I was given a job, too clean an officers boots, I did it was er.. interesting and I still earned a loyalist point so it was good enough. it was enjoyable due to the tension of me actually physically cleaning the Armour.


8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
I do



IC Section

Full Name: Alica Johnson
CID: 33323
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Height: 5 feet 7 inches
Hair Colour Black
Eye Colour: Blue
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: Straight
Mental Distinctions: 130LBS
Mental Defects: Good learner
Mental Advantages: Speaking problems. (Accent)
Notable Qualities: Can improvise, sly and cunning


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
No

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes, I do.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes.

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
I do.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes, I shall.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I wish to be in the CCA because I have seen so much crime and I wish to try and stop the crime or at least keep it at a bare minimum. I also wish to join the CCA to get a new feeling of the City and how the CCA keep it going.



Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Alica Johnson hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
« Last Edit: September 05, 2012, 10:37:31 AM by Khubajsn »

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Alica Johnson's Civil Authority Application's Verdict
« Reply #1 on: September 05, 2012, 10:37:23 AM »
UNIT: 050
DIVISION: UNIFORM
CLEARANCE: OfC
Enter Password: ************
ACCESS GRANTED

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Applicant File Opened: Alica Johnson
Citizen Identification Number: 33323

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| Application doesn't meet requirements. ||::>

// Note: Your application is on the edge of denial / acceptance, however, I am afraid it won't be fair to others if I have accepted you. I hope you reapply again - if you do, here are few tips:

- Character traits: You have mentioned four, two of them being examples. Think out some better.
- Your backstory has very little detail on your character's young ages.
- The checkpoint thing is fine, but you won't be sent to city which is not fully controlled by CCA.

I hope you reapply in two weeks,  fix up the points I have written down above. Good luck! ;)


Applicant may reapply on Thursday, 20. September 2012.

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