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(Outlands) A quiet man sits in the corner of the Inn
« on: July 25, 2012, 09:47:33 AM »
A young man pushes some hair out of his face with the back of his pencil as he sits silently in a dark corner of the inn. He returns the pencil back to a pad of paper and begins stroking long lines across the upper-most piece of paper. He looks up every now and then before returning his gaze back to his drawing. A basic sketch of a man stares back out from the paper with a warm smile and short scruffy hair. Under the sketch is a single word crudely written, "Markus".

//Im bad at IC-writings and for whatever reason I really hate this, but it's just a short introduction to Dan in the Outlands - and yeah you wouldn't know what he's drawing IC of course, but this is just a short intro etc etc etccccc

//populate outlands 2012



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Re: (Outlands) A quiet man sits in the corner of the Inn
« Reply #1 on: July 25, 2012, 10:05:39 AM »
// is he a rapist or what

what i got from this is he's drawing someone on a piece of paper so he can track them down and rape them later.

otherwise, this was shit pretty good, although a bit short.

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Re: (Outlands) A quiet man sits in the corner of the Inn
« Reply #2 on: July 25, 2012, 10:08:19 AM »
I was trying to not tell anyone OOC just so people found out them selves, but he's completely mute, socially awkward and artistically talented, he draws everyone he meets for no reason other than it helps him remember who's who. But no he's not any sort of rapist or murderer, I want Dan to be the complete opposite of that - and yeah it was meant to be short, partially because I suck at writing and also simply because it's just a short intro to himzzz



 

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