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[DENIED] Jack Surley's Civil Authority Application
« on: February 08, 2012, 02:16:28 PM »
Jack Surley's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: dons2707

IC Character Name: Jack Surley

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
Jack Surley always wanted to fight the criminals. His biggest dream is to become a CCA. He talked very much with the police, and likes them. He doesnt believe people who says CCA is evil.

Jack Surley grew up with rebels all around him, but he kept his dream about becoming a CCA secret, because he was afraid what the rebels might do to him. He felt that something was wrong in the rebel gang he was born into, and now Jack want to fight the rebels.
 
Jack's main objective is to help the community, fight the resistance and rebels. Jack also wants to be a CCA because his father, Allan Surley didn't show him any love, and was abusing him. Allan used Jack to smuggle contraband, and more. Jack felt like the ugly duckling, that hatched in the wrong nest. And now he wants to be a CCA swan.


2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Respectful, Loyal, Friendly, Leader skills, Clever, Good shooting skills

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
Jack knows that when he is a recruit, the over-ranks will treat him like shit, but Jack is clever and is confident that he will impress the higher rank units. Jack is not the best at learning. But when he learned something new, he can do it with closed eyes!

 Jack used to be a CCA in City18, and he learned a lot there. [Read back-story.] He forgot a lot of the things he learned, but he still got the skills. The combines knows, that Jack betrayed both his parrents, because theyr rebels. That makes the combines trust Jack even more.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Jack Surley was born in City18. Jack's mother and father were part of a rebel gang called BlackKnights. But after Jack was born, his mother died. She got killed by the combines, for helping the rebels. The father was a rebel too. Jack tried to help the combines locate his father, because his father never showed him any love. The combines were happy for Jack's help, but they never got the father. Jack became a CCA. His Metro-Police name was C18.CCA-UNIFORM-RCT.961. But then he got kicked out of the squad, because he was too dangerous for the citizens. If he caught a citizen doing a crime, he just took him down, and beated him. Jack saw what he did, and knew It was wrong. So he moved to City45, and settled himself there. It was a good city. The combine had the power, not many criminals. So Jack decided to stay in City45. Now Jack is friends with many officers, he is a loyalist, and reports every single crime he sees. Now Jack wants to help the combines get Allan, his father, and the other rebels too. Jack wants to fight Anticitizens, Resistance, Rebels, and criminality in general.

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
Not on catalyst.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
+2 years

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
One year?

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
Like 1-2 months.

4. What Time zone are you in?
GMZ+1

5. In what country do you live?
Denmark

6. How old are you?
13

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
(This is on a perp server, not HL2.) We was having contraband. Farming weed. But then the another gang came. We stole something from them, so now they want revenge. We was arming up, with all our guns. [This server was a good RP. Not one of these darkrps or failservers.] Then we began to shoot. It was such a big war! It was like, grenades coming over all. Medkits a lot of places too. That was really fun! And good RP!

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes, very good.



IC Section

Full Name: Jack Surley
CID: 84063
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Height: 5.7
Hair Colour Black
Eye Colour: Green
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 160
Mental Distinctions: Brave, Fast thinker, Good at his stuff
Mental Defects: N/A
Mental Advantages: Good at shooting, Knows a lot
Notable Qualities: N/A


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
Jack Surley have never been caught doing something illegal, and never did.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Im willing to give every part of my body.

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes, I swear i will.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes, Jack will always remain faithful and loyal.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
To improve the RP, and because it is fun rping as a CCA. I tried it in another good HL2RP, and it was really fun! But then the server went down :/. Now im playing on Catalyst gaming, which is much better :)!




Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Jack Surley hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
« Last Edit: February 08, 2012, 02:27:09 PM by AABluff »
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Re: Jack Surley's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: February 08, 2012, 02:26:12 PM »
UNIT: 113
DIVISION: UNIFORM
CLEARANCE: HIGH COMMAND - DIVISONAL LEADERSHIP
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Applicant File Opened: Jack Surley
Citizen Identification Number: 84063

Acceptance status:
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Reason:
<::|| Application Questions 1,3,4 answers are much too short. One paragraph is a minimum four sentences, not one or two with a large space between each.

Incorrect knowledge of Canon in question 4.
Supression fields mean you can not be born after the war unless auths are given, definetly not in cities however.
If a unit was "Kicked out" of the CCA they would be OWRd or amputated. In your case an amputation would fit. They would not become a happy citizen again.
Citizens can not decide where to move. It is done purely my choice of the CCA.

Multiple Gramatical Errors Throughout

IC Question 6 answered OOCly. You do not wish to join the CCA ICly to improve RP. RP does not exist in character. That would be like inception.

I look forward to seeing your re-application in two weeks.
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