The only problem I have is in Part III where you mention your characters hunting and tracking skills. If you were to expand on this; "However, after years of practice, Konstantyn was a skilled hunter and he was able to track." I wouldn't have any problems personally. Maybe give an actual account of a few experiences your character had during his years of learning to hunt a track? You don't necessarily need to write a book, but just add a little more than one sentence to explain hunting and tracking skills. Other than that, I don't have any objections to anything.