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Yao Lo Ti (Tier-3)'s Civil Authority Application
« on: November 27, 2011, 04:04:23 AM »
Yao Lo Ti (Tier-3)'s Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: AntiDovahkiin222

IC Character Name: Yao Lo Ti (Tier-3)

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
Well, firstly, Yao has seen the ways in which the Civil Authority works. He believes these amazing miracles are able to bring justice to this once evil world. Yao had to grow up facing a lawless world, that was, until the war. He watched many die at the hands of criminals, and no matter what amount of power he had back then, it was never enough. However, placing this amount of power in his hands, considering the amount of human power over combine, would grant him pure command over these vandals that stalk his hometown. He could sort out the mess that once haunted his life for what seemed like an eternity. So for reason one, it could put Yao’s mind at ease.

Reason two, the vast amounts of tokens he could get. The Civil Workers Union has provided him with many needed tokens, but it never seems to be enough. The Civil Combine Authority seems to earn a lot more tokens then the average man can. This would give Yao more of a chance at being able to purchase items. As an officer, he doesn’t really have the authority to purchase from citizens, but from an officer, it would be perfectly fine. Then again, officers wouldn't really pay each other to buy products, so the tokens would really be just to gain a good stance on life. Also, the tokens would be useful for the CWU clinic in case of any injuries in which I am required to pay a fee for medical items.

Reason three, the better living conditions. I know that the CWU has their own living quarters, but they seem to be smaller than that of a UCH apartment. I'm not saying that the UU have completely ripped me off, but the CCA have a better standard of living than us human chars. They don't even need a bed, which is lucky, as every time the humans are given curfew, I'm forced to sleep in the UCH beds. Whereas, if I was an officer, who needs sleep, right? Also, the Nexus won't as much health and safety issues as the UCH.

Finally, I'd say the fourth and final reason I'd want to join the CCA, is for protection. It's in the name itself "Civil Protection", making anyone who must be involved in the process, protected themselves. The armour of an officer protects a person more than a piece of material turned into clothing ever will. Also, at least an officer is allowed to carry a weapon for protection. Citizens consider other citizens as people their own size, and will therefore pick on them. But luckily, the CCA are of a power so high, the citizens wouldn't spit in their direction or any direction at all. So in all, protection, justice, better living-conditions and tokens are the reasons why I wish to join the CCA and why my character wishes to become a member.


2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Law-abiding, Strict, Trustworthy, Polite, Pure, Promise-keeper, Good-listener, Quick-with-actions, Intelligent, Stealthy, Helpful, Strong-to-the-core.

Without sounding way to corny, I’ve based his traits as to the traits of some of my friends. The name is based completely of the name of a fellow student at my school, who almost happens to share the same name. In all, I think this bears some of the traits of Yao himself.


3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
Well, I think for the first part, Yao would need some getting used to for the CCA. Training should help increase his fitness, which would prepare for when his training is over, as it would give the CCA a fit and prepared officer. I think from Yao's perspective, it will be tiring for the first few days, but in due time, it'll all work out. Yao always wanted to improve law enforcement before the war. Now he'd part of the improved law enforcement.

Later on, I'm hoping to try and join APEX, as I have seen that their faction specialises in sociostabilty enforcement and compliance. This is more of the action-type division, the kind of thing me and my char are looking for. I have been a CP in the past, and have all the training written down, so I am aware of how far away I am from getting into APEX even slightly. In all, I expect the CCA to be quite a ride for me and my char, but this is one ride I never want to get off…


4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Chapter 1: The forgotten years
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In the first segment of our story, we heard how Yao lost the ones he loved, and how he gained the jobs of his dreams. Yet what happened between the war and his doctorate? How did Yao's mother, father and grandparents die? Where did Yao's fiancée’s tumour come from? The story shall unfold. Where Yao's grudge against modern politics began and what he saw after the war.

Yao was having his temporary retirement from being a doctor. "We'll miss you Yao." "Good luck in the real world Yao." "Have a good life Yao." Yao was sick of these people. Acting like angels because they had the ability to operate on these foul humans. Yao wanted this retirement to take in a life of adventure. A life of excitement and adventure would put his mind at ease. This was the big break of a life time, 'A 6 month trip around the world!' Yao needed to get a temporary job though, just to make some dough for equipment before the trip. There was a position open to work at the docks as a security guard, the docks in which his father picked up his supplies for work. He could have father-son chats with dad, and not miss a minute of work.

Chapter 2: It’s all over
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Day 5 on the docks and Yao hadn't seen his father yet. It was possible that he didn't need to collect his supplies, but this was a day where he usually did collect them. 9pm and still nothing, till Yao walked along the pier, and saw his father walking out a warehouse with a box. It had a scent of fish, the kind his store sold. “Dad, over here!” Yao bellowed. His father immediately turned around, with a shocked face. But not the kind of shocked face of joy. It was a face of despair. “Son?! Get the hell away from here! Why the hell are you here?!!” His father violently replied. On signal to his response, two suited men left the warehouse, noticing Yao and his father. “Lo Ti you motherfucker! You know the rules you bastard!” One man said. The black shades he wore reflected the fear and intense pain of Yao and his father. “Look man, I don’t know what the hell you’re on abou-” Yao attempted to get out before the shaded man interrupted him. “Not you retard cop, you’re old man. No cops Lo Ti! The boss said you can’t have been followed.” Yao looked surprised at his father. His face dropped, but before saying anything to his father he turned to the man. “Look, I’m part of the police enforcement, it’s self-employm-” Yao attempted to get out again, before the men released fire of two silver desert eagles.
Yao laid on the ground, his leg full of bullet holes. Blood spread onto the rough concrete, which made Yao’s leg sting when the two collided. Yao could only make out the men reloading, his father running for his life. Then in the blink of an eye, Yao heard several bullet shots, watching his father collapse. “Dad!!! You cock-sucking motherfuckers!” Yao chanted. The man without shades walked up to Yao, laying the muzzle against his head. “You don’t get it, do you kid? Welcome to the big-bad world. People aren’t handing fucking ice-cream out for you, they want to kill you…” The man whispered into Yao’s ear. Sirens called from afar, making the men’s departure very instant. Yao lay there, blood trickling towards his forehead. He wished to die that night. But that was not an option. His destiny was not yet fulfilled.
Yao lay in hospital with a shattered leg bone, but it would repair in a few days. There no life left in Yao, just disappointment. His father lay in the hospital beds, slowly dying, nothing to be fixed about him. “Mr Lo Ti?” Yao stood up as the doctor called him. “It’s his final seconds. You may want to say some final words.” The doctor explained. These words brought only tears to Yao’s face. What joy was there to be had in the realisation of his father’s death? Yao entered the room to see his father, breathing his final few breaths. “Son… It’s time… You say what you must… all I can say is… I love… you…” his father gasped out. Yao grew teary, realising he had to say just the right thing. His sister and mother stood beside him. Yao being the eldest had the fondest memories of him and his father. He knew what to say, but first he had to ask. “Dad… What did those men get from you?” Yao asked, tear-ridden. Yao’s father could not let the words out, as they pained him to do so. “Okay dad… I love you… And I will never forget you…” At that point, his father’s eyes closed, slowly. The family was in despair. It was only going to get worse.
On the exit to the hospital, there was a busy street. The car was just across the road, and Yao, his sister and mother only needed to take the crossing. As the green man appeared, they all crossed. Suddenly, a black limo stopped in the middle of a crossing, and a familiar man emerged from the window. It was the shaded man. He instantly holstered the deagle, firing at Yao’s mother, directly to her brain. The force of the bullet caused Yao’s mother’s head to immediately burst open. She lay there, practically decapitated. “You fuckers learned your lesson now.” The man said, before the limo sped off. Yao and Grace walked home, the rain soaking their dreams and clothing. Yao got a call on his mobile… from 999. “Yao Lo Ti? We regret to inform you that your grandparent perished in a house fire. The culprit was some faulty wiring, we are very sorry for your loss.” Grace heard the call, and needed to ask Yao one thing. “Yao… What are you going to do?” she asked. “I’m going to kill those people. If it’s the last thing I do…”

Chapter 3: Vengeance
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Yao laid in the cruise ship room. Thinking about the countries he would visit. Which ones would be perfect to train for his plan. Skiing in Austria, Olympic running in Jamaica, Football/Soccer in South Africa. Ending with a 2 year martial arts training in China. By his second year in China, Yao seemed as fit as humanly possible, and full of anger. “I can now avenge my father. His death will no longer be in vain, sensei.” Yao said. His face began to become red with anger, till the sensei calmed him. Explaining his side of why Yao shouldn’t. “Yao, if a man’s father is killed by a falling tree, is it worth the man burning the fallen tree in revenge?” Yao stared confused for a few seconds, then realised the story. “I needn’t kill them, as the damage is already done. They’ve done enough, why should I drag down to their level.” Yao said. He knew what to do. He suited up and left the dojo before the sensei gave him some final advice. “Yao, do back to the hospitals. Doctoring will clear your memory over the years.” Yao smiled back. “Yeah… I will”… since the war, the sensei has not been seen. Not even by the combine…

Chapter 4: It’s time
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Well, the chopper ride to Yao’s first city was long, but too long. Yao didn’t feel so comfortable, all this masked robotic humans staring at him. But it made him feel powerful, as though these men were protecting him. It was a sensation that made Yao happy. Yao liked the CWU. It gave him time to sort out his messed up life. But back in City 8, the spark of the inspiration inside him grew. He saw the CCA’s work. It seemed like justice was served. No human got any rights, only the higher powered people. This was a vision of heaven.  So he began writing a CCA application. The CWU thing was going nowhere, and it was time for change. The application was all written up, when he heard a siren noise… “Judgement waiver in process” Yao got up and looked out his window, he saw a giant ant creature, the size of a lion. He also saw… zombies… as he ran the application fell out the window, falling to the mouth of a headcrab. “Oh goddamnit!”After the incident, Yao escaped with minor injuries, happy that his application was destroyed. He needed a re-write. But it was up to the CCA to decide. How does this story finish?


5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
Yeah, a drunken rant (haven't drunk since) and a fragment of being a noob made me get my first CCA char banned. It was a fair does situation. Now I think I'm more of a pro player.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
1000+ hours

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
1000+ hours

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
1000+ hours

4. What Time zone are you in?
GMT: +0

5. In what country do you live?
England

6. How old are you?
14

7. What’s your most memorable quality RP experience?
The recent antlion attack. I lived after standing in the way of hunter fire and getting attacked by poisonous headcrabs and antlions. I forgot to thank Rofl for saving my ass out there, so thanks.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
If anyone has something to say, it is my duty to listen. You can ask people like, GRID 060 (or 065, I forget :P)




IC Section

Full Name: Yao Lo Ti (Tier-3)
CID: 51494
Age: 33
Gender: Male
Height: 5ft 9
Hair Colour Black
Eye Colour: Brown
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 159
Mental Distinctions: N/A
Mental Defects: N/A
Mental Advantages: IQ: 170
Notable Qualities: N/A


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
Yes, but only once, and it was all a misunderstanding. The Ration Distrubtion Centre door was malfunctioning, and the officer warning us not to walk forward the second it opened, and anyone who disobeyed, would be detained. I accidently walked through hearing the woman recieve her ration, unaware that she had not yet left the room. I was detained for 5 minutes, but the situation was under control. The CWU leader came by, and let me out on the grounds that I wash the HQ. I apoligised and think this situation is long forgotten.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes, they are absolutely fantastic.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
I am willing to give more than my life. My soul.

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
If the actions were committed by me, they are therefore under my entire responsibilty.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes, I shall.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
Well, I have seen the ways in which the CCA work, and I feel as though joining them would give me a new life. I could forget all the misery and woe I ever felt, and become reborn as a new human being. The emotions that could scar me and bring me down would be eliminated. Also, I want to help the new justice system. You're doing an absolutely fantastic job at the moment, so I think another addition would help the CCA become even stronger. I also feel as though I could join this to become closer in power. People think that joining the CCA us a death wish because you're giving up life, but you're not. You're turning yourself into a brand new person, with a new perspective on life. So in all, I hope you can consider me for the CCA.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Yao Lo Ti (Tier-3) hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
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Re: Yao Lo Ti (Tier-3)'s Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: November 27, 2011, 05:17:26 AM »
UNIT: 182
DIVISION: APEX
CLEARANCE: OfC(A)
Enter Password: ************

ACCESS GRANTED

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Applicant File Opened: <Yao Lo Ti>
Citizen Identification Number: 51494

Acceptance status:
<::|| ACCEPTED FOR INTERVIEW ||::>

Civil Authority Status:
<::|| INTERVIEW PENDING ||::>
// You seem to have made your character slightly overpowered, fix that before going for interview. Also, you can not have had 1000+hours on CG. Even rofl will not have that.

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Re: Yao Lo Ti (Tier-3)'s Civil Authority Application
« Reply #2 on: November 27, 2011, 12:54:41 PM »
UNIT: 522
DIVISION: UNION
CLEARANCE: DvL
Enter Password: ************

ACCESS GRANTED

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Applicant File Opened: Yao Lo Ti
Citizen Identification Number: 51494

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| Overrule of 182's decision. Backstory lacks the Seven Hour War properly, describes units as masked robotic humans when most of them aren't, and apparently flew to City on a chopper, which didn't happen. ||::>

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