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[DENIED]Rick Turismo's Civil Authority Application
« on: April 16, 2012, 06:06:15 PM »
Rick Turismo's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: oXFireClawXo

IC Character Name: Rick Turismo

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
My character was graduating from high school just before the invasion. He was lucky he even did graduate, he mostly got B's and C's . Especially in science class. He could barely understand what the teacher was saying. When he did graduate he said to everyone in a microphone:  "One day, I'm gonna help people. I'm gonna save people. I'm gonna arrest people." And then they happened. The combined happened.


He said to himself, "No... My dream... ruined..." I then traveled and traveled until I found a place. City 45. I ran towards it, but when I was about to get in, a combine stopped me. He asked many questions, and I answered. After a while, he let him in and he could live. And then he saw the things combine could do. He had a new dream.



He asked many combine what they did, who they were and what their weapons are made of. They answered to most. And then I had an idea. I asked a citizen how I could join and he told me to go to the recruiter (That was a roleplay thing. The recruiter is you guys.) And he said maybe. That maybe. Made my day.


2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Kind, Can be trusted, Truthful, Normally quiet

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
       IC: Hard at most times but at some times pretty easy. Although I just expect the the jobs to be mainly hard. I expect to not be treated well, But does that matter to me? No. Just maintaining the city is. And I hope that sooner or later, all citizens will stop being brutal, or being stupid, or maybe even starting riots.


        OOC: Well, I for one think It'll be a pretty fun time detaining minges. And I know that I must normally be serious, not OOCing: "You guys suck. I'm gonna go knock on the nexus door. Bye!" Like most minges would do. But I know that I cannot spam anything or detain for no reason like someone insulting me. Forget that, I know what's right and what's wrong.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
   Rick started out as a healthy, young baby on April 9, 1995. When he got older, He learned how to read, how to talk, how to write, and how to live. Some think I was way to childish, some think I was way too kind. But I ignored them. I continued to be myself.

 
    As A teenager, Rick protected himself and his friends in any situation. And not long before he was about to graduate, they came. The combine. Rick had been hoping for this day, the day to see if the combine were real or just rumors. I though they were very kind, but then they attacked. Almost everyone died and the Nation fell apart. Soon, the world was theirs. I was scared, my parents had died, my friends had died, I had to start a new life... And in that life, I destined to become A combine, a combine that helped make this place better.


    As an adult, Rick searched for a place to stay. He was in the middle of a wasteland. Soon, I have found a place. A city, you could say. A city called City 45. It was an amazing place, and all seemed peaceful, even with combine roaming around, I did not care. I had a place to survive in. Home is what I called it. I searched for a home and people that new where a home was. He said to go to the hotel near the nexus. I did what he said, and found a place to live. Soon after that, I found many people that i can be friends with, and became their friends. Shortly after, someone said that I sexually assaulted them although I never saw that woman in my life. She went to tell a CCA. She said her name was Shaun Freeman, although I have met Shaun and he was a boy. Soon, we were both questioned to see who was right. She kept lying by giving a fake CID and name. She told us her name finally, but still gave a fake CID. I had to wait a long time before they let me go, but at least i got to go. She was questioned until she gave up and just left the game. Her name was strange, so I can't spell it properly. That made me want to be a CCA even more. And if I am accepted, who knows how much more peace will be made? All that will be revealed in the future.


5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
No


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
4 days, 15 hours, 49 minutes. (All answers are guesses.)

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
85

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
32 hours.

4. What Time zone are you in?
(UTC-06:00) Central Time (US & Canada)

5. In what country do you live?
United States

6. How old are you?
17

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
Almost every single moment I play on any server made by you guys.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes



IC Section

Full Name: Rick Turismo
CID: 48488
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Height: 5'8
Hair Colour Brown
Eye Colour: Green
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 162
Mental Distinctions: Knows what to do for almost every type of crime.
Mental Defects: Sometimes forgets things.
Mental Advantages: Is overall smart.
Notable Qualities: Is very fast.


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
Yes, from a lying woman claiming that I sexually assaulted her. The problem was soon solved, though.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes, forever and always

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
To protect everyone that still lives-And punish those that disobey us.



Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Rick Turismo hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
« Last Edit: April 18, 2012, 04:14:17 PM by Purple Suck my dick sleep »
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Re: Rick Turismo's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: April 18, 2012, 03:44:37 AM »
UNIT: 604
DIVISION: VICE
CLEARANCE: OfC
Enter Password: ************

ACCESS GRANTED

Connecting to Network
Connecting...
Connecting...
Connecting...
CONNECTION ESTABLISHED

Applicant File Opened: <Rick Turismo>
Citizen Identification Number: 48488

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| Application does not meet requirements.  Application fails to follow proper spelling and grammar requirements.  Application questions B2 and C6 do not meet minimum standards.

You need to read up on HL2 canon - Your lack of knowledge reflects throughout the application. Your spelling and grammar isn't what your age would suggest.
||::>

Saving Record...
Saving File...
Saving File...
Saving File...
File Saved

Disconnecting <CCA.C45.VICE-OfC.604>
Console Shut Down.
CONNECTION LOST
C45.CCA.GRID-DvL.604 - Healthy - Executing citizens. Tally: 4
John Gatsby - Healthy - Celebrating, having detonated an explosive melon in front of two CA's

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Re: Rick Turismo's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #2 on: April 18, 2012, 01:25:12 PM »
No offense, but you contradict your character way too often.

I've RPed escaping the city to D6 with you, killing a rat and eating it.

Afterwards, we split up because you went and joined to a lolwebel group.

And now you're here, applying for the CCA for the second time.
HL2RP Characters
Jim Boyle - Obeying the Combine in City
Marcus Nicholson - Getting used to City
Heikki Savolainen - Relaxing in D6.
Cliff Westburgh - Hunting rats in D6.
Chandler Hetfield (Outlands) - Trying to find his bearings.
Joey Geller (Outlands) - Sitting in the clinic with his left leg broken.

 

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