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CA Thread Archive / Re: Re: <::|| Combine Civil Authority Applications ||::>
« on: July 10, 2011, 12:23:49 PM »
I am a loyalist, i was inducted into it 2 weeks ago by a Civil Protection after helping him guard the void entrance for about 50 minutes and also helping him scout out contraband in an apartment.
OOC Name: Chamberlain
IC Character Name: John Willis
1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
John Willis was born into a military family in Europe, His father was a sergeant stationed at Fort Tomilson located near Berlin. His Mother was a doctor working there at the base. Later in the years his father was taking a stroll with his mother, A armed man came out and held a gun at them looking for cash. The father refused and was shot on site. His mom tried to escape and was shot in the process. After that he was scared for life. Later years he trained hard to become successful. He trained in combat, weapons and tolerance situations and was ready for anything. He was fast and agile.
John Willis wishes to join the CP because he is looking for a better chance at life and to bring a difference to the streets. He wants the citizens to feel secure, He wants to bring Civil Discipline to the breakers of law. In the family past he has heard stories of his relatives being in the police force and bringing change to the streets with there outstanding arrest record. I wont only have an outstanding arrest record i will have an outstanding reputation with my superiors and my co-workers. I understand this position is hard to achieve but i am willing to keep applying to i do get picked to fulfill a duty of a lifetime.
Whilst living in city 18, John noticed a significant amount of his friends joined the CP, every time he gets a chance to talk with one they are called away on the radio to an emergency. He usually never gets to see them or talk to them about there job. I myself would like to join to improve civil relations with the community, I would like to see the civilians asking more questions about the life around city 18. If you want to get the big fishes become friends with the little ones, they tend to know a lot. Well all and all he wants to join CP to make a difference for today and create a better future for all
2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
-Honest
-Loyal
-Respectful of authority
-Obeys orders
-Committed to whatever he does
-Courageous
-Honorable
-Ambitious
3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character?
John expects the CCA would be a redemption to all of his past wrongs and a way to serve others, knowing full well the prices he must pay in the form of beatings, harassment, etc. to keep order and help mankind. He wants to keep tradition, up until he dies and is the final generation of his famliy. Who lives in City 17 and is not making enough of a living to even eat without rations.
I, myself, would like to see what it looks like from the other side. Having played through Half Life 2, Episode 1, and Episode 2, I wondered what it was like to view the Resistance as a main antagonist, instead of the other way around. I also like the look of the Combine, especially Synths. Sad that I cannot be one, though.
4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
John Willis was born in Germany about 35 years ago. He was born to Manfred Steiner, his father, and Katja Hoppe, his mother. He lived in Berlin for about 3 year until his parents died and he had to move back to the states. His mother worked at a Base Hospital which soon after John's brother, Andreas Steiner, was born, she bought for herself. John's sister, Gizala Steiner, is an odd one, no matter how her parents raised her, she was defiant. John and Gizala grew very distant as John became lawful and Gizala became chaotic and crazy.
Before the 7-Hour War, John trained to become as great a officer as he could while in and out of school. He generally ignored many distractions during training such as television, sports, hunger, and even his girlfriend. By the time the portal storms started hitting Hamburg, John was ready and able to help defend against attacks. Just before the war his sister died of lung cancer. This was one of many personal reasons that John decided to quit the police force and help his grandmother at her general store. When the war finally hit, John was very respectful of his new superiors. He tried to get as much on their good side as possible so as not to be hunted down and killed.
After the war, John was still a bit distressed over many personal issues, including his father. This conflicted with his desire to fulfill tradition and join the armed forces. Eventually, his friends encouraging him, John found his willingness to proceed with this, realizing that dwelling on his past does not help people around him. John finally gathered enough courage to pay the price of order and security by attempting to join Civil Protection Team. Once In He plans to Secure and Protect.
OOC Details
1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
About 4 years total
2. How long have you played on serious servers?
About a year and half
3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
About a week, very interesting server, and hope to be on for a couple years... Well until it dies.
4. What Time zone are you in?
Eastern time
5. In what country do you live?
United States of America
6. How old are you?
17 Years of Age
7. What’s your most memorable quality RP experience?
Playing DarkRP and getting told by a gun dealer that i do not sell guns, there are many other funny and memorable moments but too many to list
8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
I am a Excellent listener
IC Section
Full Name: John Frank Willis
CID: # 60201
Age: 35 Years Old
Gender: Male
Height: 5'9
Hair Colour: Brown
Eye Colour: Brown
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 160 lbs
Mental Distinctions: I am extremely honorable
Mental Defects: I will pay any price to achieve his goal
Mental Advantages: I can fix most of my personal problems and regain my mental state.
Notable Qualities: I am honorable, courageous, honest, and respectful of the people who deserve it.
1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
I have not.
2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes, They taste excellent and they are healthy
3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Whatever it takes to bring honor to my Administrator
4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
I will expect no less.
5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
To say no would be disloyalty, an insult to me. Therefore, yes.
6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
To bring peace and honor to the streets and eliminate all threats!
Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black
I, John Willis, hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
PS. I dont know if this helps any but i have been a CP on 2 other HL2RP servers.
Thank You for your time.
Denied. Backstory lacks character development during the 7 hour war, originality, and does not include the factor of rations making citizens forget. Numerous capitalization errors.
OOC Name: Chamberlain
IC Character Name: John Willis
1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
John Willis was born into a military family in Europe, His father was a sergeant stationed at Fort Tomilson located near Berlin. His Mother was a doctor working there at the base. Later in the years his father was taking a stroll with his mother, A armed man came out and held a gun at them looking for cash. The father refused and was shot on site. His mom tried to escape and was shot in the process. After that he was scared for life. Later years he trained hard to become successful. He trained in combat, weapons and tolerance situations and was ready for anything. He was fast and agile.
John Willis wishes to join the CP because he is looking for a better chance at life and to bring a difference to the streets. He wants the citizens to feel secure, He wants to bring Civil Discipline to the breakers of law. In the family past he has heard stories of his relatives being in the police force and bringing change to the streets with there outstanding arrest record. I wont only have an outstanding arrest record i will have an outstanding reputation with my superiors and my co-workers. I understand this position is hard to achieve but i am willing to keep applying to i do get picked to fulfill a duty of a lifetime.
Whilst living in city 18, John noticed a significant amount of his friends joined the CP, every time he gets a chance to talk with one they are called away on the radio to an emergency. He usually never gets to see them or talk to them about there job. I myself would like to join to improve civil relations with the community, I would like to see the civilians asking more questions about the life around city 18. If you want to get the big fishes become friends with the little ones, they tend to know a lot. Well all and all he wants to join CP to make a difference for today and create a better future for all
2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
-Honest
-Loyal
-Respectful of authority
-Obeys orders
-Committed to whatever he does
-Courageous
-Honorable
-Ambitious
3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character?
John expects the CCA would be a redemption to all of his past wrongs and a way to serve others, knowing full well the prices he must pay in the form of beatings, harassment, etc. to keep order and help mankind. He wants to keep tradition, up until he dies and is the final generation of his famliy. Who lives in City 17 and is not making enough of a living to even eat without rations.
I, myself, would like to see what it looks like from the other side. Having played through Half Life 2, Episode 1, and Episode 2, I wondered what it was like to view the Resistance as a main antagonist, instead of the other way around. I also like the look of the Combine, especially Synths. Sad that I cannot be one, though.
4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
John Willis was born in Germany about 35 years ago. He was born to Manfred Steiner, his father, and Katja Hoppe, his mother. He lived in Berlin for about 3 year until his parents died and he had to move back to the states. His mother worked at a Base Hospital which soon after John's brother, Andreas Steiner, was born, she bought for herself. John's sister, Gizala Steiner, is an odd one, no matter how her parents raised her, she was defiant. John and Gizala grew very distant as John became lawful and Gizala became chaotic and crazy.
Before the 7-Hour War, John trained to become as great a officer as he could while in and out of school. He generally ignored many distractions during training such as television, sports, hunger, and even his girlfriend. By the time the portal storms started hitting Hamburg, John was ready and able to help defend against attacks. Just before the war his sister died of lung cancer. This was one of many personal reasons that John decided to quit the police force and help his grandmother at her general store. When the war finally hit, John was very respectful of his new superiors. He tried to get as much on their good side as possible so as not to be hunted down and killed.
After the war, John was still a bit distressed over many personal issues, including his father. This conflicted with his desire to fulfill tradition and join the armed forces. Eventually, his friends encouraging him, John found his willingness to proceed with this, realizing that dwelling on his past does not help people around him. John finally gathered enough courage to pay the price of order and security by attempting to join Civil Protection Team. Once In He plans to Secure and Protect.
OOC Details
1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
About 4 years total
2. How long have you played on serious servers?
About a year and half
3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
About a week, very interesting server, and hope to be on for a couple years... Well until it dies.
4. What Time zone are you in?
Eastern time
5. In what country do you live?
United States of America
6. How old are you?
17 Years of Age
7. What’s your most memorable quality RP experience?
Playing DarkRP and getting told by a gun dealer that i do not sell guns, there are many other funny and memorable moments but too many to list
8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
I am a Excellent listener
IC Section
Full Name: John Frank Willis
CID: # 60201
Age: 35 Years Old
Gender: Male
Height: 5'9
Hair Colour: Brown
Eye Colour: Brown
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 160 lbs
Mental Distinctions: I am extremely honorable
Mental Defects: I will pay any price to achieve his goal
Mental Advantages: I can fix most of my personal problems and regain my mental state.
Notable Qualities: I am honorable, courageous, honest, and respectful of the people who deserve it.
1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
I have not.
2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes, They taste excellent and they are healthy
3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Whatever it takes to bring honor to my Administrator
4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
I will expect no less.
5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
To say no would be disloyalty, an insult to me. Therefore, yes.
6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
To bring peace and honor to the streets and eliminate all threats!
Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black
I, John Willis, hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
PS. I dont know if this helps any but i have been a CP on 2 other HL2RP servers.
Thank You for your time.
Denied. Backstory lacks character development during the 7 hour war, originality, and does not include the factor of rations making citizens forget. Numerous capitalization errors.