You seem to have a reputation of writing bullshit authorizations - don't get me wrong, you've written some great authorization applications in the past, but unfortunately your reputation seems to have 'stuck' from
Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's - but alas, reputations aside; this character is one of those 'bullshit' authorizations.
Now, before you get angry - I suggest reading over all the reasons as to why I think this is a bullshit application and consider them before
flaming me, okay? Great.
Authorization(s):
Talents in Computer Hacking, Programming, Coding, and Networking
The fact that your authorizations are so damn blunt I don't know what EXACTLY you are applying for is grounds for your application to be denied - come on, Frolie. Talents in computer hacking, coding and networking? But what code does Miss Krane have a talent in? What codes does she know and not know? Nobody can know 'all the codes in the world' because it's quite hard to master codes that I'm sure this Neophyte (you) have never heard of. Now, before you go searching for computer languages to asspull, you really do need to think about what you're applying for. You're essentially applying for a Julian Assange cross Bill Gates.
'hey do u no how to hack this security gate?'
'yeah bro just let me get my HACKING TOOLS OUT'
Oh my. I almost forgot, you never defined what 'hacking' is in your authorizations. What are you talented in with hacking? DDoSing? Doxing? Virus distribution? All of them?
In the computer security context, a hacker is someone who seeks and exploits weaknesses in a computer system or computer network. Hackers may be motivated by a multitude of reasons, such as profit, protest, or challenge.
Come on Frolie, you know better than this.
Authorization(s):
In-Depth knowledge of Computer Software and Hardware
yeah whatever like you know about computer software and hardware anyways
Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.
The following is the written transcript for interrogation of Madelyn Gendry Krane. Madelyn has been under investigation for five months, suspected of being involved with the Cyber-Crime group 'The Faceless Men'. Before her arrest, discussions were held to hire members of the group to work for M15 in exchange for dropping the charges. This interview was conducted to determine whether she was compatible for the job.
But Frolie, there's no such thing as 'M15'.
I'm going to skip writing my grievances with the 'backstory' - why you would even call it a backstory is beyond me - because you stated that you'll be writing a new one.
What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
+ Provided she has any sort of technology to work on, her talents could supply her with a job
+ Talents could prove useful in scenarios when the character has access to a computer
yeah whatever like you know about computer software and hardware anyways
Defects
- Without a computer, these talents are almost useless
- The character would be amputated if it was discovered she was under the employ of MI5
'the employ'
Why would your character be amputated for a character that was affiliated with a security agency that does not exist anymore?
How much do you know about hacking?
My hacking knowledge is limited to what I've read in non-fiction books or seen online, so, not too much. Still, I know how to RP it.
master hacker right here
are u part of anonymous??
To address the concerns that the backstory is too short, or lacking in depth, I'll be uploading an alternate version with the original inside it. Until then, please hold on to further judgments.
no
and on the topic of 'no' you will have 'no' support from me - regardless of backstory.
Oh yes also it appears that your hacker group is an
Australian political term.
Oh my, I seem to have put more effort into my '
smear campaign against you' than you have your own authorization!
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