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Title: Ronnie McCormick's Logs
Post by: ??£The Doctor??£ on December 19, 2011, 04:04:21 PM: Day 3 In City 45 and all seems quiet
Title: Re: Ronnie McCormick's Logs
Post by: ??£The Doctor??£ on December 19, 2011, 06:14:03 PM: Chillin by the Nexus wondering what to do
Title: Re: Ronnie McCormick's Logs
Post by: Lewis on December 19, 2011, 06:47:41 PM: Just saying, you should put more information and detail into your application, rather than roughly ten words, it'll help develop your character more, along with supply the reader with better information and a more fun read, as it does seem almost... postwhore-ish with these very small entries. You should also try and use some sort of format, design, etc., to make it more pleasing to the eye. Just some suggestions, I'm not forcing you to do any of these things.
Title: Re: Ronnie McCormick's Logs
Post by: ??£The Doctor??£ on December 19, 2011, 10:42:52 PM: ;D Wow what a day in City 45 worked my arse off cleaning that square and renovated the Ration Distribution Centre and got a point and a ration pack just wish the CP's would notice my work abit more ???