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Title: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 20, 2012, 03:12:21 AM
Player Section

Steam Name: Frolie
Age: Fifteen.
How long have you been Roleplaying? (can be any game): About 4 years now, around the time Fallout 3 and Oblivion were coming out.
How long have you been playing Serious GMod RP?: About a year and a half, starting with HL2RP.

Character Section

Authorization(s):
- Ambidexterity (Equal Strength in both hands)

- Eidetic Recollection (Photographic Memory)

- Exceptional Mathematical Intelligence

- Extensive Knowledge & Collection of Computer Technologies

Name: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Affiliation: None

Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.
Brief Forward
(Concerns details on generality of the character, and brief mentions of skillsets)

Layla Blackburn, daughter to Merriam Blackburn, was a mental-medicine fascination. No direct diagnosis was ever made for her, but there had been dozens of claims and approximations; Low Latent Inhibition, Autism, Paranoid Schizophrenia, Mental Retardation, Bipolar Disorder, Savantism… nothing was ever made clear. The most likely reason for that was her refusal to cooperate. She’d sit in stubborn silence, ignoring teachers and doctors alike. She never made friends, and failed every class she ever took in the time she attended public school. The majority of those who were aware of her assumed she was either psychotic, or mentally challenged. But inside her head, and in her own time, Layla was a literal genius.

She was a skilled mathematician, a gifted computer hacker and programmer, a talented electrical and mechanical engineer, and in the future, she would become dangerously obsessed with combine technologies, and the pursuit of other-worldly knowledge.
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Layla's Apartment in Seattle
(Concerns Details on Computer Skills)

Layla was sitting at her computer, the same place she'd been all night. It was nearly two in the morning, and she hadn't slept in two days. She was running soft-ware updates on a variety of the programs on her main computer. The computer itself was a glorious testament to diligent work and thousands of dollars. Two computer towers shared a single Twenty-Seven inch Monitor. Collectively, it had 128 gigabytes of Ram, supported by two military-grade MSi mother boards. In terms of storage space, each computer tower had an internal single terabyte hard-drive, and was also connected by USB to two other external hard-drives, each of which stored three terabytes.

Besides her primary computer, she also had a back-up laptop, which she utilized while working outside of her apartment, as well as a myriad of micro-controllers and circuit converters. The contents of the room she sat in was worth more than half the tenants in the apartment building make inside of a year, and had been what had gotten her into the building in the first place. Using the resources available to her, she had created an entirely false identity, beneath which the apartment was registered to.

  Computers had gone almost hand in hand with skills Layla already had, but for some reason, she felt much more secretive about it than her other interests. She hadn't much thought about the practical use of computers until she was about fourteen. By then, her interests in electrical engineering had already been piqued, and she had begun to hone down on that skill, but she temporarily set it aside to pursue her new interest.

  She had started with what she knew; the guts. Computer hardware was much like a more finely-tuned, much more complex version of electrical engineering, so she applied what she already knew on a more microscopic level. She hadn't turned on her first computer a single time before she pried it open and studied what made it work. Within a week, she had a rudimentary understanding of how the majority of the parts worked. She had gone to a nearby library and taken out some books concerning the topic, and then, displeased with the content of said books, went to a more comprehensive library a ways further into the city, and took out more books there.

  After three weeks of tireless study and precise coordination, she knew just about everything there was to know about the hardware of her own computer. She reassembled it the same night she felt she had an exact familiarity with the machine, and finally learned how it worked from the outside. She found the software aspect of computers considerably more frustrating than the hardware, which in turn made her more perseverant in understanding it. It took more months of studying and reading books to achieve what she thought was required of her. She knew hexadecimal binary in its entirety, completely by memory, after three weeks of study. She was writing her own code shortly after, and creating rudimentary programs. Originally, she had intended to somehow tie in the skills she learned her to skills she already had, but after almost an entire year of cut-throat study, little to no sleep, and thousands of dollars frivolously spent modifying and experimenting, she had let herself flow into an entirely different tangent of ideas and curiosities.

  There was never such thing as a safe hobby for her. Everything was either pursued obsessively, or not pursued at all. On paper, she was a psychopathic high-school dropout, even considered retarded by a few doctors and specialists. But she lived a secret life of hidden genius, only known by those close to her, which was a very limited crowd. She was about 60% to 80% sure that she possessed a photographic memory, but she was never one to make a self-diagnosis of any kind (she barely trusted any diagnosis; her relationship with doctors was never that great).

She eventually shut the monitor of her computer off, figuring it was best for her health if she got some sleep. She let the software updates continue as she wondered down the hall into her bedroom, and read for a while before shutting the light off. She lay awake for little more than 30 seconds before she fell deeply into sleep.
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Washington Correction Facility for Women
(Concerns Details on Ambidexterity, Math Skills, and Eidetic Memory)

Layla had managed to settle into her cell in her new home in the past 4 months. She was lucky she had only been caught for armed robbery, and nothing else. Nonetheless, any time in prison was unfortunate. She'd always had a mostly hands-off approach towards crime, but she had been desperate for money, and hadn't had a job in months.

As far as prison went, this wasn't too horrible. It was a highly regarded institution that Layla's caseworker had to negotiate to get her into, due to her, quote 'fragile mental condition'. He knew she hated titles like that, but he was just doing as necessary. The accommodations of her cell were good enough; in fact, it even had a computer. Of course, it had a firewall, which when confronted with Layla's skill-set, didn't stay up long.
Of all the time the time Layla spent in prison, she spent the majority of it in the library. At her adoptive parents’ request, as well as those of her brother and her caseworker, she applied for, and easily passed her GED. Her traits as a reader and researcher were unparalleled in comparison to other inmates. Several notable traits were discovered of her, the easiest of which to notice was her ambidexterity. Layla was aware of this attribute, but never really understood what made it such a peculiarity, much less cared. It was frequently observed that she would begin writing with one hand, and continue with another. Occasionally she would even write with both at once. Whether this was something she acquired naturally, or if she worked at it consciously was irrelevant.

Several months into her stay in the penitentiary, it was observed, not just by the acting librarian, but by numerous different on-duty guards and even the warden herself, that Layla had an unfounded memory. Everything that she read or noted was seemingly cataloged mentally, and could be recalled with little to no hesitation for thought. She also had the unparalleled gift of numbers. She could do entire math equations in her head, the kinds that even experienced mathematicians had to write out on paper, or do on a calculator. It was obvious that Layla was very gifted, but her unusual mental status made her difficult to understand.

The warden consulted Layla with a proposition; if she took both an IQ test, and an Eidetic memory test, then she could apply as a ‘mentally reinvigorated inmate’, and a special deal could be cut to lower her sentence, not to mention lift her variable title as mentally retarded. It was clear that the warden believed that her time in the penitentiary had allowed her to focus on education, and thus, made the system work. That’s why the program for mental re-invigoration was created in the first place.

Of course, given her distaste for authority and general stubbornness, she disregarded the warden’s claims, ignoring her entirely. In turn, the warden called Layla’s caseworker, who visited Layla at the Correction Facility, and begged her to take the deal. After three more days of weighing the pro’s and con’s in Layla’s eccentric thought-process, she finally agreed. After taking the test at 17, her IQ was revealed to be at 148, well above average. Her skill in mathematics was truly amazing, nearing the level of Savant. The results of the Eidetic Memory test confirmed the suspicions of her family members; Layla did indeed possess a Photographic Memory. As Layla’s initial sentence was set at three years (due to relentless testimony, not to mention her being a minor), the deal would guarantee her release within the month, on the condition that she take residency with her adoptive parents. Layla was released from the penitentiary two weeks after her tests.
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C27 bit was no longer necessary; was cut from the back-story

Some Pictures (Was bored, this should give you a better idea of the character's set-up)

Computers in Layla's Apartment [1/3]
(http://s13.postimage.org/ddkqnmyrq/2012_09_25_00005.jpg)

Computers in Layla's Apartment [2/3]
(http://s14.postimage.org/i5furamc0/2012_09_25_00003.jpg)

Computers in Layla's Apartment [3/3]
(http://s18.postimage.org/6swtq4fmw/a_S.jpg)

A Work-Table in Layla's Apartment
(http://s13.postimage.org/9nuam81om/2012_09_25_00007.jpg)

Layla's Hide-out in City 27
(http://s12.postimage.org/h3p5ab9l8/Warehouse.jpg)

What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
Ambidexterity (Equal Strength in Both Hands)
 + Can write or draw with both hands
 + Can equally distribute weight between appendages

Exceptional Mathematical Intelligence
 + Can perform mental mathematics equations in her head
 + Can come to a conclusion on complex arithmetic much faster than average

Eidetic Recollection (Photographic Memory)
 + Will be able to remember and reconstruct insurmountable details
 + Will be able to catalog information mentally

Extensive Knowledge & Collection of Computer Technologies
 + Will be able to use knowledge and hardware to build new things
 + Will (possibly) be able to use knowledge and hardware to attack others

Defects
Ambidexterity (Equal Strength in Both Hands)
 - Although a valuable attribute in research, it serves little practical purpose

Exceptional Mathematical Intelligence
 - Layla's Over-Analysis can at times become over-cumbersome, resulting in mental anguish of variable levels

Eidetic Recollection
 - As with her mathematical skills, over-attention to detail can at times become too much for Layla

Extensive Knowledge & Collection of Computer Technologies
 - Any fruitful progress made from her hardware and knowledge would take a lot of time
 - Moving the hardware would be difficult, due to it's quantity and weight
 - If any of the hardware were destroyed or damaged, it would critically impair Layla's progress

What do you plan to do with these perks/defects?
The majority of the authorizations asked for are mainly for increasing passive RP, and adding to one of (in my opinion) my most intriguing characters. Passive RP is a lot more fun when you're doing something that involves more than one party, and is especially fun when you're working towards a goal with one of your character's skills. Pending acceptance, my character would have skills in electrical and mechanical engineering (pre-requisite authorization), as well as combine technology and computer hardware / software. Obviously, that's a lot of honed-down professions, but certainly doesn't make the character totally rounded. In short, the character will need the assistance of other characters to assist in completing projects, no matter how rudimentary or advanced they are.

Some of the other authorizations I've asked for (Ambidexterity, Mathematics skill, Eidetic Memory) have been requested to develop my character. Given that she's very paranoid, and extremely asocial, many other characters don't have much to base their perspectives on her around. I hope that with what they observe (pending authorization), they can put together a better portrait of the character, without actually being able to interact with her. In short, this auth should add more to her as a character.

Will anyone else need these auths? (If so, list OOC and IC name(s))
No one else will need these Authorizations, just Layla.

Which server does this apply for?
Outlands

Extra Notes (optional):
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: hogs on October 20, 2012, 04:13:17 AM
oh hey it's this thread again

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Moderate Combine Technology Understanding

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Restrictions:
No authorizations will be given via authorization applications for be the following:
Stalker
Any other NPC - headcrabs, zombies, seagulls, barnacles, etc
Any canon character - Alyx, Eli, Gordon, etc
Black Mesa employee/Black Mesa knowledge
SYNTH Units - hunters, striders, etc
V, G, Q, C, n, z and m flags.
Weapons/Ammunition - you cannot apply for weapons such as a pistol or SMG. You are allowed to apply for knives or  or gain them through IC purposes on the servers, but you MUST be able to provide a time and date of when you acquired this weapon when asked by an admin.
Resistance Vests
Special/Psychic Powers
Anything related to the CCA/Combine
Vehicles (Jeeps, etc)
'Child' Characters

you should read up on them before you try to get auths for something against the rules clearly that are stated above

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Extensive Knowledge & Collection of Computer Technologies

Quote from: hogs
Extensive knowledge is fine, but I disagree with 'collection'. How would you walk around the city - because you clearly stated you'll be using your character for BOTH Outlands and City (which shouldn't be happening unless you're starting OFF in the city - which would be fine) - and not expect to be searched at least ONCE and found with this 'collection' of computer technologies, or even some spare parts. Unless you're housing them in an apartment which wouldn't work because I'm sure somebody would know about them ICly and break into your apartment and steal them. Unless you're talking about a mobile phone or tablet, in which case I suppose that'll be fine but you stated a 'collection'.

see above

everything else i don't care about

also for good reference
(http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/259/alyxvancejizzedinherpan.jpg)
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Scratchie on October 20, 2012, 04:31:35 AM
Please, please quit posting the same damn thing. It will be denied again, especially since the only thing that was changed still breaks the auth rules.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Yak on October 20, 2012, 04:39:22 AM
All I'm really seeing from your apps are your character is a genius with photographic memory, firearms and top notch hand to hand skill with a  dark past.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 20, 2012, 08:29:05 AM
All I'm really seeing from your apps are your character is a genius with photographic memory, firearms and top notch hand to hand skill with a  dark past.

I have little to no words for you. I guess you've somewhat outlined an approximate rendition of this auth? I just, I don't know what to say about you.

Please, please quit posting the same damn thing. It will be denied again, especially since the only thing that was changed still breaks the auth rules.

Understanding of the tech doesn't break the rules. I was careful to keep the phrasing of that authorization request in particular very synonymous with others:

Keji Maeda: Applied for, quote " Basic Knowledge of Combine Technology"
http://www.catalyst-gaming.net/index.php?topic=18476.msg133352#msg133352

Daeny Morrison: Applied for, quote "Little Combine Tech. Knowledge"
http://www.catalyst-gaming.net/index.php?topic=11639.msg88703#msg88703

But of course, mine is pen-ultimately different and over-powered when contrasted with theirs, I'm sure.

also for good reference
(http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/259/alyxvancejizzedinherpan.jpg)


There seems to be some sort of tactic at work by comparing me to a well know character in a video game, that this character is really nothing like, besides having some similar skills. Maybe it's to make me seem like a fail RP'r? I don't really know.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: hogs on October 20, 2012, 09:18:41 AM
There seems to be some sort of tactic at work by comparing me to a well know character in a video game, that this character is really nothing like, besides having some similar skills. Maybe it's to make me seem like a fail RP'r? I don't really know.

Quote from: hogs
hi alyx vance the nerdy freerunning mathematician who knows how to work combine gear and can remember everything.

maybe you should read your previous applications and read the feedback given to you before reapplying over two times and i'm not just talking about my replies
understanding the tech DOES breach the rules because it says ANYTHING related.

Anything: Used to refer to a thing, no matter what.

Related: Associated with the specified item or process, esp. causally: "income-related benefits".

anything related to the cca/combine

it does breach the rules and i think you need to deal with that, mate.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Scratchie on October 20, 2012, 09:23:04 AM
You have to realize some admins forget the auth app rules. And only the first of the two was accepted. The second had that redacted in the final acceptance.

The rules are the rules.

<::|| Sent from a mobile datapad codename Mecha ||::>

Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 20, 2012, 09:54:02 AM
If the fault lies in that the acceptance of said combine tech. knowledge was a misunderstanding, then I am also at fault.

For such reasons, I've completely withdrawn the Combine Tech. Understanding from the authorization.

If that's what's required, then I'm fine with having that completely redacted from the process. I'll wait on admin opinions before modifying this further, if that's necessary.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Scratchie on October 20, 2012, 10:15:41 AM
Now that that is taken care of (as I am going one point at a time)...

Where on the combine invaded earth would you find all that technology, and how would you be able to move it around and hide it? And say you got it once you got to outlands. Where did you find it in the mountains with a small town in it that's probably not seen most of it even before the war?

How could you move it all around anyway? Or hide it? You explain your knowledge, which by the way is only good enough for basic knowledge, but never how you acquired the items or how you move it and hide it from prying eyes. You can't carry it. Hell, it would take 10 people to carry all of that. And say you go with the excuse you took multiple trips. Whos to say someone didn't come along and steal some?

Plus:
Extensive Knowledge & Collection of Computer Technologies
 + Will be able to use knowledge and hardware to build new things
 + Will (possibly) be able to use knowledge and hardware to attack others

Aw hell no.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: hogs on October 20, 2012, 10:34:46 AM
If the fault lies in that the acceptance of said combine tech. knowledge was a misunderstanding, then I am also at fault.

For such reasons, I've completely withdrawn the Combine Tech. Understanding from the authorization.

If that's what's required, then I'm fine with having that completely redacted from the process. I'll wait on admin opinions before modifying this further, if that's necessary.
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Extensive Knowledge & Collection of Computer Technologies

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Extensive knowledge is fine, but I disagree with 'collection'. How would you walk around the city - because you clearly stated you'll be using your character for BOTH Outlands and City (which shouldn't be happening unless you're starting OFF in the city - which would be fine) - and not expect to be searched at least ONCE and found with this 'collection' of computer technologies, or even some spare parts. Unless you're housing them in an apartment which wouldn't work because I'm sure somebody would know about them ICly and break into your apartment and steal them. Unless you're talking about a mobile phone or tablet, in which case I suppose that'll be fine but you stated a 'collection'.

you forgot to address this


Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Scratchie on October 20, 2012, 10:36:31 AM
If the fault lies in that the acceptance of said combine tech. knowledge was a misunderstanding, then I am also at fault.

For such reasons, I've completely withdrawn the Combine Tech. Understanding from the authorization.

If that's what's required, then I'm fine with having that completely redacted from the process. I'll wait on admin opinions before modifying this further, if that's necessary.
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Extensive Knowledge & Collection of Computer Technologies

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Extensive knowledge is fine, but I disagree with 'collection'. How would you walk around the city - because you clearly stated you'll be using your character for BOTH Outlands and City (which shouldn't be happening unless you're starting OFF in the city - which would be fine) - and not expect to be searched at least ONCE and found with this 'collection' of computer technologies, or even some spare parts. Unless you're housing them in an apartment which wouldn't work because I'm sure somebody would know about them ICly and break into your apartment and steal them. Unless you're talking about a mobile phone or tablet, in which case I suppose that'll be fine but you stated a 'collection'.

you forgot to address this

Technically he did.. By making it outlands only. But my points and questions still apply.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: hogs on October 20, 2012, 10:41:30 AM
If the fault lies in that the acceptance of said combine tech. knowledge was a misunderstanding, then I am also at fault.

For such reasons, I've completely withdrawn the Combine Tech. Understanding from the authorization.

If that's what's required, then I'm fine with having that completely redacted from the process. I'll wait on admin opinions before modifying this further, if that's necessary.
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Extensive Knowledge & Collection of Computer Technologies

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Extensive knowledge is fine, but I disagree with 'collection'. How would you walk around the city - because you clearly stated you'll be using your character for BOTH Outlands and City (which shouldn't be happening unless you're starting OFF in the city - which would be fine) - and not expect to be searched at least ONCE and found with this 'collection' of computer technologies, or even some spare parts. Unless you're housing them in an apartment which wouldn't work because I'm sure somebody would know about them ICly and break into your apartment and steal them. Unless you're talking about a mobile phone or tablet, in which case I suppose that'll be fine but you stated a 'collection'.

you forgot to address this

Technically he did.. By making it outlands only. But my points and questions still apply.

ah, my bad -- i was under the implication he left it on both instead of outlands.
but still wouldn't somebody be bound to find the equipment and steal it
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 20, 2012, 10:47:38 AM
Now that that is taken care of (as I am going one point at a time)...

Where on the combine invaded earth would you find all that technology, and how would you be able to move it around and hide it? And say you got it once you got to outlands. Where did you find it in the mountains with a small town in it that's probably not seen most of it even before the war?

How could you move it all around anyway? Or hide it? You explain your knowledge, which by the way is only good enough for basic knowledge, but never how you acquired the items or how you move it and hide it from prying eyes. You can't carry it. Hell, it would take 10 people to carry all of that. And say you go with the excuse you took multiple trips. Whos to say someone didn't come along and steal some?

Plus:
Extensive Knowledge & Collection of Computer Technologies
 + Will be able to use knowledge and hardware to build new things
 + Will (possibly) be able to use knowledge and hardware to attack others

Aw hell no.


The character had amassed that collection of technologies before the war, and had hidden herself, and said tech, away in a rural area until the heat of the initial war had more or less blown over. As is described in the authorization, she had driven the large collection into hiding, and then had hired help to transport it over-seas and into Russia. Logic follows that she used the same methods to transport it out of Russia, and into Ineu.

As for transportation of these things now, the character is likely going to stash them away in some place she trusts is safe, as she did before the war, and as she did in City 27. Transportation of these things will, of course, be difficult, but she can always get assistance, or something of the sort in the event that transportation is nessecary, and I don't seeing it be for the foreseeable future.

And as for that perk; I through that in there because possibilities are infinite in-game. There's no telling how the character might be able to use her skills or technologies to attack others, should that sort of thing ever be required of her.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Elions on October 20, 2012, 03:34:18 PM
I know he's authed for these things repeatedly, but frankly this needs to be said already.

None of these auths are out of the ordinary

People have authed for these kinds of things before, and there are characters out there that have ICLY learned these things. The comparison to the picture of Alyx is not even humorous as it's more of a downright smear tactic, and frankly i'm surprised you guys keep going with this. Plus with every auth there has to come the obvious trust of letting the other person have such things, but you guys seem to already be biased against Frolie, i can only suppose that is because of the auths he already got on Hound a week ago, but he's taken the time to make a long as fuck story as detailed as possible which should at least get some merit

Combine tech auths have been done before, computer recollection too, he's downed down the auth shitloads since he put it up the first time, and he's waited the needed week or so before posting it again, let alone that apart from Frolie's characters being a bit chaotic in personality at best there is no reason to believe he'd misuse any of these auths.

Long story short... RTLK, Hogs... Get the sticks out of your asses already.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Zail on October 20, 2012, 07:58:06 PM
Long and detailed story, I admit.
It was an interesting view, of what a civilian could have, of a life before and after the war. It caught my "interest" when I started reading it, real quickly.
Yet, I'm slightly unsure for some of them. I do not have a big problem, in the knowledgement, but I can't see how you would be able to carry a pc around.
I mean, two pc towers, a screen, keyboard, those three harddrives you had and so on, would greatly be a bit heavy. I do not say, it is impossible, but it looks a bit weird to me.
Just a side question, when speaking of harddrives. I can't even imagine, how you would attack other people with a harddrive? Surely you can throw it at them of course, but I don't see any physical way otherwise, seeing not many do even have an electrical device in outlands.

Well, all in all. I don't see a bigger problem, in letting the character have the knowledge of some electrical devices and components. Yet, I doubt about the computer "laboratory" (which I would call it. :P), seeing I don't even know how you would carry that around.

Knowledge; Fine.
Computer equipment; Eaaarrgh... Not really sure about it yet.

Now, don't assume I haven't read over the other comments or anything. I've seen your roleplay and I don't even have the smallest doubt regarding you.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 20, 2012, 08:11:58 PM
Long and detailed story, I admit.
It was an interesting view, of what a civilian could have, of a life before and after the war. It caught my "interest" when I started reading it, real quickly.
Yet, I'm slightly unsure for some of them. I do not have a big problem, in the knowledgement, but I can't see how you would be able to carry a pc around.
I mean, two pc towers, a screen, keyboard, those three harddrives you had and so on, would greatly be a bit heavy. I do not say, it is impossible, but it looks a bit weird to me.
Just a side question, when speaking of harddrives. I can't even imagine, how you would attack other people with a harddrive? Surely you can throw it at them of course, but I don't see any physical way otherwise, seeing not many do even have an electrical device in outlands.

Well, all in all. I don't see a bigger problem, in letting the character have the knowledge of some electrical devices and components. Yet, I doubt about the computer "laboratory" (which I would call it. :P), seeing I don't even know how you would carry that around.

Knowledge; Fine.
Computer equipment; Eaaarrgh... Not really sure about it yet.

Now, don't assume I haven't read over the other comments or anything. I've seen your roleplay and I don't even have the smallest doubt regarding you.

It's not going to be moved around on a constant basis. Once the character has it someplace she considers safe, it's likely going to stay there unless it's safety status is otherwise corrupted.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Yak on October 20, 2012, 11:22:36 PM
http://screensnapr.com/v/uxuEU8.jpg
I don't think someone who takes criticism personal should be trusted with an auth like this.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: hogs on October 20, 2012, 11:24:37 PM
http://screensnapr.com/v/uxuEU8.jpg
I don't think someone who takes criticism personal should be trusted with an auth like this.

(http://screensnapr.com/e/uxuEU8.jpg)

just to add image tags :)
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Elions on October 20, 2012, 11:25:48 PM
also for good reference
(http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/259/alyxvancejizzedinherpan.jpg)

I don't think anyone who does criticism while mocking the person as blatantly as this can be taken seriously (There is a little thing called "Bias"), and yet they did on the first auth.

Your call
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: hogs on October 20, 2012, 11:29:00 PM
also for good reference
(http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/259/alyxvancejizzedinherpan.jpg)

I don't think anyone who does criticism while mocking the person as blatantly as this can be taken seriously (There is a little thing called "Bias"), and yet they did on the first auth.

Your call

'also for good reference'
i'm referencing what happened last time he made the app
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 20, 2012, 11:29:46 PM
I'm pissed about you running a smear campaign against me that set me up in contrast to someone seeking to dominate a server with a single character, not your loosely-defined 'criticism'.

Also, I'm flattered that you happened to be screening my steam page. Not big-brotherly at all in the sense that you're looking for the slightest weakness that can be seen on my profile.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Elions on October 20, 2012, 11:31:53 PM
Last time he made the app you did a smear campaign and used that little image as a base, after also putting crap about it on the shout box.

Your opinion on the auth or the thread in general or even Frolie himself is then biased, since for one or another reason you appear to be biased.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: hogs on October 20, 2012, 11:36:43 PM
I'm pissed about you running a smear campaign against me that set me up in contrast to someone seeking to dominate a server with a single character, not your loosely-defined 'criticism'.

Also, I'm flattered that you happened to be screening my steam page. Not big-brotherly at all in the sense that you're looking for the slightest weakness that can be seen on my profile.

first of all i'm not running a smear campaign i'm simply stating my opinion and you seem to be making a big deal out of it
second of all i didn't screen your steam page
third of all you seem to be under the implication i had no purpose to look at your steam profile but seeing as i was going to add you to discuss this before seeing your mean name :(

Last time he made the app you did a smear campaign and used that little image as a base, after also putting crap about it on the shout box.

Your opinion on the auth or the thread in general or even Frolie himself is then biased, since for one or another reason you appear to be biased.


excuse me but if i were biased i would say everything about his app i hate and i would go out of my way to get it denied, which i'm not.
i never said that, did i so stop assuming things
read before you post
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 20, 2012, 11:39:19 PM
It's obvious that you are finding the weakest, most obvious links about the, and exploiting them because you thought my last application was over the top.

Stop posting here. If you want to discuss this further, add me on steam. Just don't do it here; the less people being exposed to your shitty tactics the better.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: hogs on October 20, 2012, 11:41:40 PM
It's obvious that you are finding the weakest, most obvious links about the, and exploiting them because you thought my last application was over the top.

Stop posting here. If you want to discuss this further, add me on steam. Just don't do it here; the less people being exposed to your shitty tactics the better.

i don't understand your first sentence
i don't want to discuss this further seeing as i have the impression you'll be mad at me because of your mean name :(
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 20, 2012, 11:43:13 PM
Fine, we don't have to talk about it.

Nonetheless, stop posting here.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Kevin on October 20, 2012, 11:46:29 PM
Hogs, I hate to say it, but you're being biased as fuck. Every single application I've seen by Frolie has been shit on by you. Just saying.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: hogs on October 20, 2012, 11:49:37 PM
Hogs, I hate to say it, but you're being biased as fuck. Every single application I've seen by Frolie has been shit on by you. Just saying.

because they totally aren't all the same apart from the 7' tall bodybuilding female who masters in h2h and can't feel pain whilst wearing kevlar and a fur suit
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Elions on October 21, 2012, 12:42:00 AM
Hogs, I hate to say it, but you're being biased as fuck. Every single application I've seen by Frolie has been shit on by you. Just saying.

because they totally aren't all the same apart from the 7' tall bodybuilding female who masters in h2h and can't feel pain whilst wearing kevlar and a fur suit

Which he agreed to down onto simply having a higher tolerance and got thrown from 7 feet to 6 feet 4, as well as the kevlar got lost/downed to flimsy kevlar and had almost 14 pages of story to explain it...

... Hogs, for your sake i'd stop talking.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: hogs on October 21, 2012, 12:47:37 AM
Hogs, I hate to say it, but you're being biased as fuck. Every single application I've seen by Frolie has been shit on by you. Just saying.

because they totally aren't all the same apart from the 7' tall bodybuilding female who masters in h2h and can't feel pain whilst wearing kevlar and a fur suit

Which he agreed to down onto simply having a higher tolerance and got thrown from 7 feet to 6 feet 4, as well as the kevlar got lost/downed to flimsy kevlar and had almost 14 pages of story to explain it...

... Hogs, for your sake i'd stop talking.

yes i know he agreed to lesser it but those were the ONLY apps i posted my opinion on, tray is claiming all of them i am biased against.
i was stating that all the apps i stated my opinion on were the same apart from his 7' chars app.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Scratchie on October 21, 2012, 01:11:59 AM
You've still yet to explain HOW you moved the computer shit. "Packed in bags and crates" Yeah. Right. Like you could get that moved even with help without notice by the local protection team in 27. Not to mention how you got it into 27 or how you found it all or how you kept it hidden. All cities have random inspections, if you were in 27 its GUARANTEED that you would have been searched, both yourself and your apartment.

<::|| Sent from a mobile datapad codename Mecha ||::>

Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 21, 2012, 01:47:30 AM
A made sure to note the deplorable conditions in City 27, but may not have been as pointed about the fact that the character temporarily resided in one of the more 'ghetto' neighborhoods, similar to P3 in our City 45. Inspections are very irregular in P3, just as they are in Layla's sector. I also made sure to note that her particular building was both abandoned, and inaccessible from the ground, which is how she had inadvertently obtained her climbing skills (though I later slashed that from the application).

Given the imperfections of the City's security, and the conditions of Layla's district, it wouldn't have been too difficult, especially with hired help, to move such things into the building via roof-access. Layla herself had not been directly registered into the city, she simply took residence there, and given that her 'apartment' was more of an empty room (see the pictures, I could add) that wasn't listed as a place were citizens were to take refuge, it's unlikely that her particular building would ever be hit by the combine. That improbability turned into a reality, but by then Layla had already left the city.

Further questions and criticisms are fine, just insure that they're constructive, and don't expect a hasty reply; I'm retiring for the night :)
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Scratchie on October 21, 2012, 02:15:27 AM
That's all fine and good. But how do you get to the roof with CRATES of equipment? Honestly all I see is you trying to make something up where it will get accepted and you're not realizing every hole that your attempting to fill just adds more holes.

<::|| Sent from a mobile datapad codename Mecha ||::>

Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Yak on October 21, 2012, 07:46:23 AM
Probably because Hogs doesn't agree with the application.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 21, 2012, 08:17:15 AM
That's all fine and good. But how do you get to the roof with CRATES of equipment? Honestly all I see is you trying to make something up where it will get accepted and you're not realizing every hole that your attempting to fill just adds more holes.

I don't know; stairs, elevator? I didn't feel like I had to plug ever single tiny detail, no matter how mundane or rudimentary, inside the application to justify the character' turning every corner or advancing every fire escape. Perhaps this is a critical area though, and needed more detail. I'll wait for further posts, as I'm sure there will be many.

Probably because Hogs doesn't agree with the application.

Who are you?
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Yak on October 21, 2012, 08:24:55 AM
Probably because Hogs doesn't agree with the application.

Who are you?
I'm sorry, do I have to be a big respected member of  the community to post in the thread?
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Zail on October 21, 2012, 08:28:48 AM
This is an authorization application. Not a discuss thread. I would kindly ask you both, to stick to the topic and stop the discussion.
If not, I'll gently give you both a 5'th percent warning for doing so.

Many thanks.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 21, 2012, 08:34:41 AM
I'm sorry, do I have to be a big respected member of  the community to post in the thread?

No, but it you seemed to take a special interest in my application, even though we've never met or had any interaction at all. With my interest piqued, I looked around on your profile (as you so courteously did for me), and found that you and hogs are friends, and even live in the same area. Coincedince is possible, but I can't help but note parralels.

And as Death Sex said, this has been getting to many posts that aren't really encouraging the application process. Please keeps posts by non-admins to a minimum (only if you have something you feel really must be noted).
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Scratchie on October 21, 2012, 09:16:19 AM
If its constructive whether negative or positive it can be posted

As to your point you say there was no access from the street. Stairs from where? And being the slums it wouldn't be maintained so elevator is out as it would be broken.

<::|| Sent from a mobile datapad codename Mecha ||::>

Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 21, 2012, 10:11:50 AM
As to your point you say there was no access from the street. Stairs from where? And being the slums it wouldn't be maintained so elevator is out as it would be broken.

For your benefit, I've added two paragraphs concerning how she got the crates into her 'loft'. They're pasted below, and the new material has been highlighted in blue:
__________________________________________________________________________
She cowered in the country for weeks before taking an infamous sea-trade route out of America and into Russia, the home of City 27. Once she was there, she burrowed into a tall building, mostly out of reach of thieves and wary eyes, and settled in to soak up information.

Finding such a place was no easy task. Before she moved her things into the city, she took about a week of scouting throughout the district before she found a worthy location; it was much like a loft, no ground access beyond a nearby rooftop building accessible through a fire escape. Although it was easy enough to get herself inside, her crates and bags of equipment were another concern.

Although it was little challenge to get herself into the makeshift loft, there seemed to be little way to move her equipment. As ever, Layla was determined to find a solution, and eventually, she managed. Under the cover of darkness, Layla's hired helped moved the crates into the neighboring building via the fire-escape, and then was attached to a winch which tugged them across the gap between the buildings. It took her two nights, pausing throughout the day, to move all of her things, and then another eight days to set everything up inside. For extra precautions, she took a third night to remove the lower-most ladder on the fire escape, making the building almost entirely inaccessible without traversing nearly half of the district on the rooftops. Yet a third day was spent sound-proofing, and sealing out light from prying eyes, and a fourth spent securing decent electricity. But within two weeks, Layla had built an almost invisible hideout, fitted with high-end technologies, and could new focus on her new obsession.
__________________________________________________________________________

And please don't give me shit about changing material. People do it all the time in authorization applications to justify their character's actions, motives, and movements.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Scratchie on October 21, 2012, 10:15:51 AM
No shits are given unless it is edited after a verdict or if a sa determines that some time needs to be seen in terms of rp ability.

I'll look it over when I get home. Just leaving work then going with family to breakfast.

I still disagree with the attacking others as you would only be able to utilize the equipment as a melee type thing instead of building as you do not have any robotic knowledge nor the stuff required to make anything that can attack other than swinging it

Oh, and please don't attempt to add a completely new auth for robotic knowledge. That would be against the rules. Explaining is one thing.
<::|| Sent from a mobile datapad codename Mecha ||::>
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 21, 2012, 10:44:42 AM
By means of attack, I never meant physical. Perhaps she could take an incriminating picture using one of her cameras, or hack into something valuable another refugee had in their position (like Elions' situation a month or two back, with '45').

Throwing her crap at an enemy would be the last thing she'd want to do. This stuff is the most valuable, passionately held materials she's ever had, she wouldn't risk breaking it by hucking it at a foe.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Elions on October 21, 2012, 12:20:07 PM
No shits are given unless it is edited after a verdict or if a sa determines that some time needs to be seen in terms of rp ability.


I know this is unrelated to the auth at all but... That's a terribly harsh way to talk even if what Frolie needs is criticism. Calm down.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Scratchie on October 21, 2012, 01:12:10 PM
No shits are given unless it is edited after a verdict or if a sa determines that some time needs to be seen in terms of rp ability.


I know this is unrelated to the auth at all but... That's a terribly harsh way to talk even if what Frolie needs is criticism. Calm down.

How is it harsh? It's saying admins dont care about it being edited if its still being debated as long as its noted
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Elions on October 21, 2012, 01:14:11 PM
I just think it could have been worded nicer, that's all
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Scratchie on October 21, 2012, 01:17:42 PM
"Please don't give me shit"

"No shits are given unless"

How the fuck is it harsh?
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Elions on October 21, 2012, 01:33:50 PM
Bold and with a curse at the start of the sentence. Imagine you were talking to your professor/teacher, you hand him a paper and try to explain to him something about the typography and he stops you and says "I give zero shits. Go away"

Of course that's not literally what happened, but it's quite close.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: hogs on October 21, 2012, 06:53:25 PM
Bold and with a curse at the start of the sentence. Imagine you were talking to your professor/teacher, you hand him a paper and try to explain to him something about the typography and he stops you and says "I give zero shits. Go away"

Of course that's not literally what happened, but it's quite close.

I know he's authed for these things repeatedly, but frankly this needs to be said already.

None of these auths are out of the ordinary

People have authed for these kinds of things before, and there are characters out there that have ICLY learned these things. The comparison to the picture of Alyx is not even humorous as it's more of a downright smear tactic, and frankly i'm surprised you guys keep going with this. Plus with every auth there has to come the obvious trust of letting the other person have such things, but you guys seem to already be biased against Frolie, i can only suppose that is because of the auths he already got on Hound a week ago, but he's taken the time to make a long as fuck story as detailed as possible which should at least get some merit

Combine tech auths have been done before, computer recollection too, he's downed down the auth shitloads since he put it up the first time, and he's waited the needed week or so before posting it again, let alone that apart from Frolie's characters being a bit chaotic in personality at best there is no reason to believe he'd misuse any of these auths.

Long story short... RTLK, Hogs... Get the sticks out of your asses already.

That's very hypocritical of you. Complaining about somebody with a harsh tone yet you type with the same tone? lol
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Elions on October 21, 2012, 06:59:22 PM
That's very hypocritical of you. Complaining about somebody with a harsh tone yet you type with the same tone? lol

I was answering back to your little Alyx picture and general negativity against Frolie simply because it's him authing. Like i said before you're clearly biased but you still continue to bash the auth and not let someone else pass judgement this time. If i can refrain from doing so because i'm a friend of him, i think you can refrain because you clearly dislike him.

Besides, i think you'd react the same way if someone made a (terrible) Gmod pick to mock a friend of yours and tried to pass it as fair judgement.

Edit: Mind you, if you feel you need to contribute to the application process right now there are FOUR other applications currently in need of criticism and judgement right now, but you've only posted here. One of said applications has been up for weeks already too, just something to consider about how fair you're being right now
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Dallas on October 21, 2012, 08:05:04 PM
Guys can we please stop the arguing here, it's an auth app not spam.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Kevin on October 21, 2012, 08:08:15 PM
That's very hypocritical of you. Complaining about somebody with a harsh tone yet you type with the same tone? lol

I was answering back to your little Alyx picture and general negativity against Frolie simply because it's him authing. Like i said before you're clearly biased but you still continue to bash the auth and not let someone else pass judgement this time. If i can refrain from doing so because i'm a friend of him, i think you can refrain because you clearly dislike him.

Besides, i think you'd react the same way if someone made a (terrible) Gmod pick to mock a friend of yours and tried to pass it as fair judgement.

Edit: Mind you, if you feel you need to contribute to the application process right now there are FOUR other applications currently in need of criticism and judgement right now, but you've only posted here. One of said applications has been up for weeks already too, just something to consider about how fair you're being right now

I could say burn, but that would earn me a 5% spam warning, so I will say that Elions brings up very good points. And BTW, + Support on the auth, Frolie is a superb roleplayer who I know won't abuse these auths. As I said in a chat, the worst damage Layla could do with these auths is show Meaty what a vagina looks like.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Kom????k on October 22, 2012, 01:29:16 AM
Alrighty then, here's what's going down:

- Ambidexterity (Equal Strength in both hands) -Yes

- Eidetic Recollection (Photographic Memory) -Yes

- Exceptional Mathematical Intelligence -Yes

- Extensive Knowledge & Collection of Computer Technologies -Yes, but I'm not totally sure on the 'collection' part, and using it to 'attack'.


So, if any other Admins have any other suggestions or input of any kind, say it, and we'll get this out of the way.


-Just re-read through the app, the backstory still contains things about combine tech and other irrelevancy. I suggest you fix up the backstory to match what your asking for.-
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: {-=ECRP-CO=-}Pvt.Benjamen on October 22, 2012, 01:45:28 AM
I just think it could have been worded nicer, that's all

pls elions pls.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Yak on October 22, 2012, 08:49:04 AM
I'm sorry, do I have to be a big respected member of  the community to post in the thread?

No, but it you seemed to take a special interest in my application, even though we've never met or had any interaction at all. With my interest piqued, I looked around on your profile (as you so courteously did for me), and found that you and hogs are friends, and even live in the same area. Coincedince is possible, but I can't help but note parralels.

And as Death Sex said, this has been getting to many posts that aren't really encouraging the application process. Please keeps posts by non-admins to a minimum (only if you have something you feel really must be noted).
We live in the same country and are friends, I can say that about all of your friends in your country.
Also, you say how we're skulking around your profile and change your name [ToBigBrotherIsWatchingMe], yet do the same thing?
I'm posting on your app since I don't agree that it should be accepted.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 22, 2012, 04:23:15 PM
Alrighty then, here's what's going down:

- Ambidexterity (Equal Strength in both hands) -Yes

- Eidetic Recollection (Photographic Memory) -Yes

- Exceptional Mathematical Intelligence -Yes

- Extensive Knowledge & Collection of Computer Technologies -Yes, but I'm not totally sure on the 'collection' part, and using it to 'attack'.


So, if any other Admins have any other suggestions or input of any kind, say it, and we'll get this out of the way.


-Just re-read through the app, the backstory still contains things about combine tech and other irrelevancy. I suggest you fix up the backstory to match what your asking for.-

At the initial stages of this auth, I had hoped to be accepted for combine technology. However, I later slashed it from the process, but didn't bother to cut away the bits of the back-story that had been rendered irrelevant. But, since it appears to be the problem here, I'll trim the unnecessary fat. 

We live in the same country and are friends, I can say that about all of your friends in your country.
Also, you say how we're skulking around your profile and change your name [ToBigBrotherIsWatchingMe], yet do the same thing?
I'm posting on your app since I don't agree that it should be accepted.

I was noting parallels. I went so far as to suggest it could be coincidence when I posted that originally. Also, you say that it shouldn't be accepted, and yet haven't offered any actual analysis on what I'm asking for  that should give clause for denial.  Therefor I'm lead to believe that you're only not in support due to reasons outside of the application, and given that we've never interacted before, I'm lead to believe your opinion of me has been swayed some how. Long story short, it's not exactly a massive leap of the imagination to connect two dots, in that you're friends with a player(hogs) who has close bias against me.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Kevin on October 22, 2012, 07:10:24 PM
Guys, get over it. Me AND Frolie were in a chat with hogs and he was quite angry, and called us names quite a few times. I was also in a chat with hogs once more after the group chat, and he called me retarded multiple times, and began interrogating me why I posted on Frolie's app when I suggested that most admins formulate their own opinions. He seems to get mad if you disagree with him.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: kmp on October 22, 2012, 07:29:09 PM
And you guys didn't get mad when he disagreed with you... seems legit. Frolie, you have been denied before this, yet you persist on making authorizations. I'm beginning to lead that you have authorization lists written up for all your characters, which is not really acceptable. You can't have authorizations for every character, one is normally the most people have. You already have one character with authorizations, and I suggest to reviewing administrators that we leave it at that. This is directed to administrators; Frolie has shown that he has a negative attitude towards criticism and refrains from explaining key points on how he did some things on the character. The fact that he has a few people saying he is a good role-player means nothing. Purple was a good role-player, he could do /mes really well, look where that got us. RP skills =//= trustworthy with auths.

Tray, stay out of this when you are already friends with Frolie, your opinion towards him is already biased to be positive, with a negative opinion towards anyone who disagrees.

Hogs, you seem to be biased towards Frolie but unlike Tray, you have points to support your arguement, but I would like you to stay out of this as well.


 
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 22, 2012, 07:55:43 PM
And you guys didn't get mad when he disagreed with you... seems legit. Frolie, you have been denied before this, yet you persist on making authorizations. I'm beginning to lead that you have authorization lists written up for all your characters, which is not really acceptable. You can't have authorizations for every character, one is normally the most people have. You already have one character with authorizations, and I suggest to reviewing administrators that we leave it at that. This is directed to administrators; Frolie has shown that he has a negative attitude towards criticism and refrains from explaining key points on how he did some things on the character. The fact that he has a few people saying he is a good role-player means nothing. Purple was a good role-player, he could do /mes really well, look where that got us. RP skills =//= trustworthy with auths.
 

No, I do not have an 'authorizations list'.

And while you present a fair point concerning trustworthiness, and CG's ordeal with Purple, and that would be a pivotal factor in my last authorization concerning 'The Hound', which in truth, was controversial. However, I honestly don't see how the authorizations I've requested here can be used to commit much 'Over-Powered' RP, or 'Fail' RP.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ambidexterity

What's the worst I could do with this? It's equal strength in both hands, I really can't do to much at all with this. I don't really even think it was required to be part of the application.

Photographic Memory

An asset in research. It's great because she can remember just about everything she catalogs into that big ole' melon of hers, but as a tool in combat or survival, it poses a little factor to threaten someone else. If you can think up some scenario that it would be useful in, I seriously doubt that it would either come up in Role-Play, or be something I would do at all.

Mathematical Intelligence

Come on, it's math skills. How many times have we struggled with algebra or trigonometry, and how many times have those skills ever had practical use beyond reasoning skills.

Computer Tech. and Skills

Obviously it's the most 'controversial' part of the application, but again, I can do little with this. A lot of the reason I urked up the courage to throw down a second application so soon after my last was because of the developments in passive RP, in ineu's inn basement. It's a neat little environment that's growing up there, and was something I really wanted to both encourage and be a part of. Of course, it's not the only reason I made this application, but it was definitely a significant part of it; and this part of the application is pretty much only for passive RP. And how often has passive RP posed significant risk to other characters, or the RP environment?

And people continue to think that I want to take this character, and her authorizations & weapons, into the city. NO. I abhor the city server. I think that it has little to offer as a creative venue for players, and I pretty much shifted completely over to the Outlands after I had my first experience with it. In short, Using the defense that I'm going to break my way into the nexus, which has been suggested before, is completely out of my interest.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: kmp on October 22, 2012, 08:51:24 PM
If you can do little with some of these skills then why apply for it? Math will hardly come in useful in the Outlands environment, Ambidexterity can and will most likely be used in a fight to gain an advantage over someone.


And before you claim that you didn't state/implied that;

Ambidexterity: "...I don't really even think it was required to be part of the application.[/quote]"
Math: "...how many times have those skills ever had practical use beyond reasoning skills."

The only one I can agree with without any issues is the Photogenic memory. I will only support Computer Skills, but not the actual computers/parts.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Scratchie on October 29, 2012, 04:29:19 PM
The OP has 24 hours to respond to the latest replies by admins or this will be denied.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Frolie [Jellykid] on October 29, 2012, 04:59:39 PM
If you can do little with some of these skills then why apply for it? Math will hardly come in useful in the Outlands environment, Ambidexterity can and will most likely be used in a fight to gain an advantage over someone.

I applied for some of these skills that 'can do little' because they help in developing my character. I intended for the character to have an angle of high intelligence, instead of just a stereotype of a female bad-ass with no clear skills beyond beating people up and looking hot.

I also want to note the phrasing of 'can and will most likely'. Feels a little bit like you're leading the assumption that I plan to abuse these. While, yes, (seeing as I looked into it some) ambidexterity can apparently be used in a fight, I really don't understand how or why, for which reasons I wouldn't use that angle. If you still don't feel confident, you can clearly mark out that it cannot be used for combat prowess, should the application be accepted.

The only one I can agree with without any issues is the Photogenic memory. I will only support Computer Skills, but not the actual computers/parts.

Seems as though you're already supporting the Photographic Memory, so I won't make any comment on that. As for the computers itself, there isn't much I can really do with those either. It's really just for passive RP, and again, encourages the intellectual angle of the character. And who knows? Maybe it's a skill that actually will be useful at some point.

The OP has 24 hours to respond to the latest replies by admins or this will be denied.

Good?
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: [LP]GMK-MRL on October 29, 2012, 11:37:36 PM
Protip:

Instead of using "Amazing, Astounding, Extreme, or Astonishing" to describe your auths, use words like "Advanced, Intermediate, Basic, or Common Understanding of". Bigger words with the same meaning won't get the app accepted any quicker. In fact it may get it classified as OP, like it did now.

-Constructive Critisim
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Kevin on October 30, 2012, 07:31:09 AM
Protip:

Instead of using "Amazing, Astounding, Extreme, or Astonishing" to describe your auths, use words like "Advanced, Intermediate, Basic, or Common Understanding of". Bigger words with the same meaning won't get the app accepted any quicker. In fact it may get it classified as OP, like it did now.

-Constructive Critisim

He proves a good point, Frolie. The average admin will see 'amazing' and it's synonyms and automatically presume you're a fucking super hero.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: [LP]GMK-MRL on October 30, 2012, 06:54:19 PM
Yea, try to make them sound as unusable as possible. It's how I've never had an Auth App denied before.
Title: Re: Layla 'Razors' Blackburn's Authorization Application
Post by: Scratchie on November 01, 2012, 03:32:42 AM
This will be accepted on the following modifications:

You can only have:
All the knowledge listed in the OP
The laptop
The recorder
The camera

The reason is the story seems too unreasonable to move the equipment around. Those items could easily get past with the right knowledge.

Just imagine it this way: It is hard to even get a real knife into the city, even in the slums. A shitton of heavy computer equipment? Never.

Reminder: You would need to find a way to charge the laptop. See here for a similar auth (http://www.catalyst-gaming.net/index.php?topic=19706.0) where it may help. And no, you cannot lolcharge it at Belles. The generators powering the buildings power the lights and a stove occasionally. A laptop could overpower the thing as it is old and unmaintained.

Oh, and please do not apply for more authorizations for a while. It is truly seeming as if you want all your characters to have auths. Lets just say any auth app by you until December will be denied for authwhoring. In december you can apply for another auth.
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