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[DENIED]Carson FitzGibbon's Civil Authority Application
« on: March 14, 2012, 10:59:43 PM »
Carson FitzGibbon's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: cfitz22

IC Character Name: Carson FitzGibbon

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
          Carson FitzGibbon had always wanted to join the CCA after whitnessing the death of his brother, Nikoli. He wants to help out and be a part of  the good the Union does for the city. The big push that made him want to join up was the death of his brother though, nothing was more moving, more motivating than that.

          He began his training by trying to stay in shape. He lifted cinder blocks that were found lying around trash piles. He also began working his loyalist points up, he reached a total of 8 loyalist points. He is a proud member of the loyalist program.

          Even before the invasion he always wished to do good for the human race. Even after they wiped out most the population he still wanted to be with them, they would of survived if they just didn't fight back. They would of just, been left aside, there on Earth to live another day! He knew he was wise to make that decision to stay hidden. Now his life is leading up to this moment, the application that will most likely change his future in city 45.

          He will forever remember all the training he did, all his hard work to get to this point. It's all up to you. Will you be a cold anvil? Crushing a single man's hopes to do the good you do? Or help him onto the metaforic train of salvation, going on the path with the others to live a new life on this planet. A new life, in the CCA.

2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Carson FitzGibbon is very trustworthy, he will take many tasks seriously and get them done. He is also quite strong, his ability to run fast also applies because of his strong calf muscles. (He walks on his tip-toes a lot.) But he cannot run as long as others could.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
          The Combine Civil Authority will be, at some times, brutal and challenging with obstacles to overcome. But sometimes the life as an officer will be slow and relaxed. When on patrol, it's always going to be relaxing and slow paced. Listening to the sounds of the city, the noise of the occational train arrival. And the noise of quiet civilians talking amongst themselves.
         
          But at times of unrest, when people come out to fight with no reason. The life will be fast paced. Every step you take could be your last. Every thing you do takes part in deciding if you live to save the city, or die trying. Some times will be filled with frustration and agony. Angering over citizens running and jumping around while you cannot respond. The uncivil activities! All the unrest building your anger like the Citidel on the first weeks of the Combine arrival! Overall being in the CCA is a bumpy road to salvation.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
          Carson FitzGibbon was born in Fort Worth, Texas. He attended a poor Catholic School. Although the school did not look perfect, the academics were at high standards. He then moved on to Nolan High, and got a scholarship to M.I.T. He moved to Michigan to attend and left his family in Texas. At this time, his adopted older brother, Nikolia, was living in Russia. At age 23 he flew to Moscow to visit his older brother, Nikolia. On his last day there, the Combine took over, he fled the area and got to a nearby bomb shelter build in the 1970's. His retreat was a dangerous one because he had to cross through streets of raging fires and dead police officers and military personel. He survived on simple canned beans for a few weeks.

          When he emerged, he found the city in ruins. He wandered for a while and then got his first glimps of the partially built Citidel. It was already huge, towering over the city like a skyscraper. He fled to a nearby apartment complex and stayed there living off another man's food supply. He stayed there for at least ten weeks. He left when the food was running low and he needed to restock. He soon found an abandon Wal-Mart where he stayed for about five months. Later one day he was met by a small group of men wearing tattered uniforms and greenish beanies. They were holding pistols. One confronted him about how he was starting a resistance, how he was going to fight back. But Carson just ignored all the influence. They left after they had gathered some food from the store.

          Another month passed until he saw a man walking through the streets with an MP7. The first CCA Officer. He was the rank of 01 because he was one of the first to join them. Carson got out of the store and confronted him asking, “What’s going on?” and, “What’s happening?” He explained what had happened and how Wallace Breen surrendered humanity. He sounded rather proud of himself. After years of staying loyal, he finally began to understand what the real good of the Union was, how they saved us from so much evil.
   
          The officer lead him to an apartment complex where he was to stay. And he did stay, for about one year. He began to work for them, cleaning and helping out.  Then, he witnesses a nightmare, he was going about his buisness, walking through the streets, when a group of men emerged from the alleyway, all armed with weapons.
   
         They fired upon the nearby officers. A hail of bullets hit the man about 4 feet away from him. After the rebels were killed, he ran to the injured man. He recognized him as Nikolai. He died that day, he wasn't able to move at all, he never got any help because of how servere his injuries were... He died in the CWU hospital. This set Carson on his path to the Union. Now, he wants to avenge his brother more than anything in the world.

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
No.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
Maybe 3 months.

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
About 2 and a half months.

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
Most of that time, maybe the half of that 2.5 months.

4. What Time zone are you in?
GMT -1

5. In what country do you live?
USA

6. How old are you?
14

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
          On Cyrus Gaming, I had a citizen. He was in City 11. His name was Carson FitzGibbon. He stepped into the smaller apartment complex not knowing what troubles would await him. When he was inside, he whitnessed a member of the RcR (Russian Covert Rebelion), pointing a gun at an officer.

          They were discussing an agreement, the man turned to him and the officer jumped at the RcR unit. Carson helped fight off the officer and was initiated into the RcR. From that day forward he was an offical unit of that branch of the Rebelion.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes



IC Section

Full Name: Carson FitzGibbon
CID: 44997
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Height: 5'6"
Hair Colour Brown
Eye Colour: Green
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 151 lbs.
Mental Distinctions: None
Mental Defects: None
Mental Advantages: IQ of 165
Notable Qualities: None


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
No.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
To enforce all Union and City laws. I would like to keep peace in the field as well as in the City. This job means a lot to me and I would really appreciate to be able to help a bit in every way I can.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Carson FitzGibbon hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
« Last Edit: March 15, 2012, 06:57:46 PM by DJ Purple »
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Re: Carson FitzGibbon's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: March 15, 2012, 04:32:45 PM »
UNIT: 738
DIVISION: GRID
CLEARANCE: Divisional Leader
Enter Password: ************

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Applicant File Opened: <Carson FitzGibbon>
Citizen Identification Number: 44997

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| Application does not meet requirements.  Application fails to provide enough detail on question 1 of the paragraphs. It does not tell me on how you got from one place to another and yet did not define the true meaning of taking your time with an application. PS: When you make applications you should always check your grammar in word and make sure you add as much detail as possible. ||::>

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