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[DENIED] Mike Jensen's Civil Authority Application
« on: July 28, 2012, 06:07:34 PM »
Mike Jensen's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: Pepper™

IC Character Name: Mike Jensen

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
Why:
Mike always wanted to be one of those who had the control.
Mike feels best when there’s control around him and no sloppy ends.
Right now Mike is “Tier 3” in CWU and uses all his days on making shops.. Cleaning the sidewalks, windows and doing favors for the CCA. Everyday he just wishes to join the CCA and help the city in other ways than just cleaning it…

He admires the way the CCA control the city, everything from the radio communication, to the way rations are handed out and the handling of citizens and rule breakers.
When the CCA have found a rule breaker, he gets this warm fuzzy feeling looking forward to the day he might also join the CCA ranks.
He would like to be apart of a team, which he can rely 100% on and know that his back is covered no matter what time or day it is.

How the opportunity came:
The day Mike came to city 45, he stated out by getting some rations, already there he began to admire the CCA's work and kindness for giving out food.

Once he had enough tokens, he bought enough goods from the CWU and stored them in his apartment in the UHC.

When Mike had the needed goods, he went to the slums and found a table and some other items, which he made a shop in the plaza with. He started selling the stuff he had bought and made a great profit.

It went very well and he continued to do so, when one day a Unit 01 came up and told Mike that he should join the CWU cause of profit he was making..
Mike joined the CWU and his deepest dream to join CCA came one step closer..


2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Team worker
Trustworthy
Brave
Open minded


3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
In the beginning I know, that it is going to be allot training..
But yes it is going to be allot about saluting and proving myself worthy for the force!
It is going to be very nice to join CCA. 
I am a great team player.. To make a force work, you need teamwork and communication and I can master both those categories.
I look forward to be apart of a functional team, it is going to be a really big step, to go from CWU to CCA.. I need to step up the seriousness… But that’s no problem.
I have been CCA before.. but I can see that Catalyst have way more control and order in the force,
which is going to be a new thing for me, to try a more controlled CCA system, which I am looking forward to.


4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Mike Jensen was born in 1982.
He turned 15.
Just like all normal days, he walked down the stairs to the living room and called out his parents, but no one answered.
They were gone.
After that he waited and waited.. But they never came back..
He moved out from the house and found a little place in the slums..
To much emotional shit was going on in his head, when he was in his old home…
In the slums he spent allot time training with the items he had "Metal poles, Bags with stones" to get his anger out, instead of letting it go of on another citizen..
He found a group of citizens that also was living in the slums..
He joined them and lived with them for awhile..
It was there he met Zeko, a man who had explored just about every bit of the city.. There were no places that Zeko haven't explored.
Zeko used allot time, showing Mike the most of these places.
One day Zeko took him to the sewers, that’s hidden behind a movable wall, they found two citizens down there talking..
Mike and Zeko moved up and asked the two what they were doing down in the sewers.. They replied that they had just killed a head crab with there bare hands..
Mike and Zeko looked at each other “Head crabs down here?” And then they both started walking to the exit in a hurry..
Mike lived with the group for some years and he felt like he had found a new family, he could rely on.
At the age of 27 Mike moved to city 45.
He spent allot time in the bar in sector 6. But finally moved into the UHC block..
Where his still living today at the age of 28, trying to get through each day. ,
He is living quietly and in favor of the CWU, where he is doing his best to help the people of the city!


5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
Never had one.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
For about 5 years now.

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
Just around 2 years..

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
About 14 months.

4. What Time zone are you in?
GMT+1

5. In what country do you live?
Denmark

6. How old are you?
19

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
I was on another HL2RP server where I was a CCA.
I was in the GRID and the City commander had ordered a lockdown to the city and anyone caught outside was to be eliminated on sight "shot to the head".
So we walked in our formation around the city "city 18" and we came to a dark ally..
Two units went in and we heard 5 shots go of.
We then got into our combat formation and sent in some flash bangs.
Then we started moving in, just to see it was only one man.
With us in the ally and our support sitting in the entrance watching our back.
Some citizens approach the support from one side putting his attention to them, then another citizen comes from the other side and shoots him in the head. The 5 citizens / rebels now had us pinned down with their 9mm's and SMG's we had nothing to do.
They shot us all in the legs and took our weapons and radios, then leaving us there to die.
But 1-2hours later a Loyalist came by and drags our OfC to the nexus, were at that point the DvL had a large group of units ready for a search for us.. The citizen tells the DvL where we are and they find us and gets us to the medical station.
1 Unit died from blood loss, otherwise we all lived and learned from that day.


8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes, 100%



IC Section

Full Name: Mike Jensen
CID: 97094
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Height: 5"9
Hair Colour Brown/Black
Eye Colour: Brown
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 171 lbs
Mental Distinctions: None
Mental Defects: Minior trauma from childhood--from parentes disapearing
Mental Advantages: Follows orders, Always on the move, Dont like to sit still.
Notable Qualities: Teamplayer, Athletic, Medium Ego.


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
Never.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes I eat two everyday.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes I am willing to give my life to the Union!

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes I do accept that, all my actions are my own responsibility.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes I will always stay loyal to the Union!

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I admire the way the CCA has control of the city, and I've always wanted to be apart of a functional force which I knew was making a difference in the world, and the CCA really do.

I'm a great team player and I know when to shut my mouth. 
I know, I would be a good addition to the CCA.



Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Mike Jensen hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
« Last Edit: July 28, 2012, 11:14:54 PM by K??latra is not here »
Hl2rp Characters:

James Newtown - Alive ( Outlands )
Mike Jensen - Alive ( CWU )
Sarah Laruasen - Dead "Grid OfC Broke her neck"

Zeko Jilly - Alive ( City 45 )
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Mike Jensen's Civil Authority Application's Verdict
« Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 11:14:52 PM »
UNIT: 479
DIVISION: UNIFORM
CLEARANCE: DvL
Enter Password: ************
ACCESS GRANTED

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Applicant File Opened: Mike Jensen
Citizen Identification Number: 97094

Acceptance status:
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// Note: This application is poorly done. The backstory is not thought out nor does it feel like it has a flow to it at all.

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