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[DENIED] Cole Edward's Civil Authority Application
« on: June 09, 2012, 02:24:05 PM »
Cole Edward's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: dowdyrichard00

IC Character Name: Cole Edward

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
Lots of people that fake being part of a resistance group and ask a person to come and join them. Then when the victim enter there hideout they often kill him or mug him. I wanted to stop these anti-citizens to protect the community from trying to be part of a fake clan.

The citizens would also want others to do something and it could lead to a disaster such as murder, mugging, or robbing. I wanted to join because of that too to protect and stop dare devils causing others to doing something that can lead to disasters.

Sam Stepman thought of joining the resistance once, but then he thought it's totally worth it joining the CCA because being a resistance member could kill you and you don't have to be amputated or executed. You would have lots of units helping you out in arrests or shoot outs. They could do this while you do this. It just makes it easier to stop others.


2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Steadfast, Pure, Respectful.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
It would be great and the crimes would decrease. It would also be great cause you know... The minages could be prop killing other citizens with like cash registers, tables and other sorts. But most of all he could protect and serve the community. He would also risk his life in shoot outs and try to prevent any deaths from occuring.

There would be hard times that he would tell a citizen to move along and they would put up a fight. I would try calling assistants at district # or plaza. I would then try to remain the suspect calm and order him on the wall for malcompliance and so and so. I would try hard to stop any harm to the City and protect the innocent and evil doorers.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Cole Edward was born in Alaska with his father and mother. It was a long time ago, everything was kinda of hard at that time. When he was 8 he went through  snow boarding and other kinds of physical activity. He would usually go out with his family to eat meat together. He has been happy until he turned 12 when he went to elementary school. People would make fun of him just by his looks and expressions. He also has been bullied once, until the principle of the school didn't care anymore about bulling. He tried to survive middle school and bullies, but a few weeks later he fell on his head from a long distance from snow boarding and headed to the hospital. After the hospital trip winter break started and he had a lot of fun. He went back to school and headed on from 3rd, 4th, 5th and so on. When he was 20 things were tough then. His parents has treated him harder and he had to go though college the hard way. And he was also bullied more often, he decided to talk to the manager of the college, he wanted to have rights. His principle denied his request and he just tried standing up for himself more often. But every day it seemed harder to him when bully clan things started popping up. He called his school the worst he has ever been to. When he turned 25 he started going to work to see meeting and other calls, he was driving in his car driving to work. He passed through work and saw something on the new that a fast zombie attacked a man. He didn't believe that stuff until he saw the picture of the zombie. He was scared and was trying to defend his house for straight days until he noticed there are no more zombies. He continued with his life and tried being a good buisness man. He was getting good reports about him so far when he was trying harder at work. He was turning older and older, he wished his parents were here because they were good ones and he has his parents still glued to his head. He attempted to start a car company called blue will. His models of his car were denied and everytime he tried making a car model he kept getting denied because of the car model, he tried and he tried but eventually gave up. One day his work catched on fire and then he lost all his goods and fortunes. He rented a carboard house and he started beggining for money. But then he found another job from his old computer and applied for that job. When he turned older he was denied from the boss. He wished he would get accepted, but he searched his file and he was permenently denied. He tried to apply but was denied once more. Three years later at midnight while he was at his cardboard house, a glow lit up the sky. A portal opened up from the sky and he didn't know what it was. While he went outside from his house it was monstrous, then drop ships and gunships came out of the portal and the gunships started firing. He immediatly ran inside and ran to a corner in his cardboard house. He took out his flashlight from his pocket and saw through the cardboard house. There were many ships coming out and something dropped out a land vehicle creature thing (Strider) and it opened fire too. He tried his best to survive the atttack, but then the Strider secondary fired near his house and a sci-fic explosion was huge. Fire appeared everywhere and bursted him out of his house. He was covered with bruises and scratches, but still active. Then dropships came and dropped out soilders. A combine elite soilder came in with a Pulse-Rifle and ordered him on the wall. He surrendered and after that he was transported in a district with City 18. He was sad and was thinking about his family. He had a horrible life living with the aliens (Combine). A few years later he was 35. He was relocated to a new city called 'City 45'. He saw that things were changed after what happened. Barley any food. Days or months to get the food ready. Combine telling people to "Isolate" or "Disperse". He lives a stressful and hard life now, but he decides to respect the combine and try to make it the best for him. He started owning a appartment at the civil union housing. But still no store to buy furniture like the old days, and he hears the dispatcher advertising to join the combine. He thought he'd be one heck of an officer.


5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
None has been created


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
Since 2009

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
Since 2008

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
Since 2010

4. What Time zone are you in?
Pacific

5. In what country do you live?
North America

6. How old are you?
17

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
n this Dark RP server that I forgot the name. This gun dealer told me to go check out this house in downtome map. I followed him to the yellow warehouse and my computer started lagging like crazy, but when I entered the warehouse atleast hundreds or thousands of printers were there and they were owned by a name of "xXDark" (Forgot the rest) he had billions of dollars and I laughed hard when money was covering the entire place. It lagged so much that I disconnected. It was pretty funny how messed up the warehouse was after. Well he could of got banned too.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes



IC Section

Full Name: Cole Edward
CID: 63426
Age: 37 years old.
Gender: Male
Height: 6'0
Hair Colour Black
Eye Colour: Green Eyes
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 130
Mental Distinctions: N/A
Mental Defects: N/A
Mental Advantages: N/A
Notable Qualities: N/A


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
I haven't been detained or apprehended with this character.


2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes I will give my life to the Universal Union.

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes I will accept ALL actions performed by me and those under my command as my own responsibility.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes I will.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I thought that if I joined the CCA I could make a difference to the evil doorers and the resistence. Even innocents were mugged, so all I could of done was get the CPs but by then the suspect would leave the scene and the CPs would not believe me. They would even think I have lied and they would say "Citizen." "Do not waste my time again." It could happened next time and the citizen wouldn't be okay. It'd be a horrid sight.



Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Cole Edward hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
« Last Edit: June 09, 2012, 04:40:12 PM by smt »

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Re: Cole Edward's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: June 09, 2012, 04:39:36 PM »
UNIT: 428
DIVISION: UNIFORM
CLEARANCE: Officer
Enter Password: ************

ACCESS GRANTED

Connecting to Network
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Applicant File Opened: Cole Edward
Citizen Identification Number: 63426

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| Application does not meet requirements. Application shows major grammar issues as well as use of OOC terms in the IC section. Please review your application and work on your grammar next time around. ||::>

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« Last Edit: June 14, 2012, 03:53:12 PM by Smt »



 

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