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[DENIED] Felix Tressa's Civil Authority Application
« on: May 20, 2012, 10:22:25 AM »
Felix Tressa's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: jandotrimmer

IC Character Name: Felix Tressa

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
A lone Combine walks the streets, and is watched by many starving men and women in the queue for rations. A man at the front of the queue, Felix Tressa, hollers at the combine to open the door. The combine stops and turns, slowly. He begins to walk towards Tressa.

As he approaches, Tressa stays standing strong. The combins flicks on his stunstick, and whispers into the ear of  Tressa. 'You got some nuts, kid'. He zaps him, ties him and takes him back to Nexus. On the way, the Combine mutters to himself, 'we could do with someone strong like him'.

Once Tressa is released, he takes the Combine's advice and asks for a CCA app. He walks to a seat, and begins to fill it in. Soon, he is finished. He hands it in and walks back to his apartment. 'Maybe I could be a great Combine one day, One Day'


2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Tressa is very tactical, and is loyal to all superiors. He will take necessary action towards unlawful actions, but never go over the top. He always remembers briefings and follows his leaders.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
I am hoping the Combine will be an exciting expierence, and a brotherhood. I have heard tales about Nexus, and, as well as keeping law, would like to take a 'tour' of Nexus when off duty. I find being a civilian almost boring, and would like some action and authority. My character has explored and I have RP'ed as much as I can, so would like a nice change.

I have friends that have been accepted, who tell me how fun it is. I expect it to be fun and amazing. I have played HL2 and think the Combine look cool and have power. I know that combine are respected, and feel I have deserve some respect. My character is waiting for excitement!

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Screaming and wailing, a young boy is born, but his mother is not moving. He was named Felix Tressa, after his Grandad. He had lovely blond hair, and blue eyes. With his Mum dead, he was brought up by his Dad, stricken with grief, sent him to a boarding school. For six years, Felix spent his time being bullied by sons of combine. His Grandad was killed in the 7 hours war and, although bullied, he achieved good grades. He went off to college. There, he met a lady, who became his girlfriend. They got married and soon they moved to City 45, where they got married. Around 2 years later, the combine raided his flat, and his wife was murdered. After this, he began getting involved in smuggling. He was never caught, but his boss was found and executed. After this, he applied for CCA but was rejected. He lost everything, apart from his dark and dingy flat. On his way to a shop, he got in a fight in an alleyway. His nose was broken and after surgery, it was larger than before. Once again he was being tormented by men and women, who mocked his nose. His hair grew brown and eyes also brown. He began to miss his poor, dead, wife more than ever. Every day, he mourned. Every day he went down to get rations and soon enough he opened a shop. He sold many items, and grew wealthy. Unfortunately he was mugged by his old gang, that he had trusted so well. Now, he began to return to his life of crime, but he forced himself to be good. His wife had hated crime, so, in memory of her, he stayed abiding by the law. Soon he ended up in a line, wating for his rations.

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
Never


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
3 years

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
1 year

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
2 years

4. What Time zone are you in?
GMT

5. In what country do you live?
England

6. How old are you?
13

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
On HRP, When I had to assault a smuggler in my helicopter, and I had run out of missiles. The enemy were firing at me and after being taken down, I proceeded to take out the enemy with my service rifle


8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Very good



IC Section

Full Name: Felix Tressa
CID: 83272
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Height: 5ft/11 in
Hair Colour Dark Brown
Eye Colour: Blue
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 10 stn
Mental Distinctions: Quick witted, Knows when someone is lying, cool headed
Mental Defects: None to date
Mental Advantages: High IQ, Desensitised to violence
Notable Qualities: Integrety


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
I have been detained for purchasing a contraband item (soda, level 3 Contraband)

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Always

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes, I do

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
For as long as I live

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
So I can be looked up to and respected. I want to catch criminals and wipe that scum of the streets. I want to make all citizens feel safe.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Felix Tressa hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.

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Re: Felix Tressa's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: May 20, 2012, 10:44:24 AM »
UNIT: 522
DIVISION: UNIFORM
CLEARANCE: Divisional Leader
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Applicant File Opened: Felix Tressa
Citizen Identification Number: 83272

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| OOC Question 1 is really half-assed with the sentences, which you barely put effort into, for example: "Soon, he is finished." is a really lazy, half-assed sentence. Backstory really doesn't follow canon correctly, so after the seven hour war you went to college, then got married and moved to City 45? No. OOC Details have some lies in it, as CG hasn't even been around 2 years, like 1½ years. ||::>

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