I am making a kind of guide for communities and players to use when setting up a HL2:RP server, I also have a section on the pro-antagonistic and an antagonistic factions (CCA+Resistance). I was wondering if I could include any tips you would have for roleplaying as one of these factions. (I'd cite you, of course). I play only one of them, so my tips are limited to my characters on other servers, and observing the CCA here.

Dr. Cole Matthews has taken a trip to his homeland, City 21 (London). He will be there or 4 days.[/color]

Mikhel Kharlamov (Tier-3) Has taken some time off. He will be back in 4 days[/color]

Ian Kharlamov is nowhere to be found[/color]

I am heading away until Sunday.

Character Name: Marcel Huber

Age: 31

Fatal Flaw/Defect: He speaks with a heavy German accent, and is difficult to understand at times. He is also pretty much blind without some type of corrective eyewear.

CID: 56584

Physical Description: |ScaronRight
Eye|CleanCU|HeavyGermanAccent|Glasses|

Mental State: Healthy

Physical State: Strong, he is very fit, despite the strain the Union has put on him

Background: Marcel Huber was born on the outskirts of a German town called Rostock. From the start, he placed his trust in authority, no matter how blatant it would be to others. He worked with his father, tilling his family’s fields, repairing things around the house, or taking the cattle to market. By the time he got into a school, he had proven to be a strong helper, and an even stronger personality. Marcel got good grades for the most part, and always behaved. He would follow everything the teacher told him to do, and he would accept the beatings his teacher gave; regarding it as a just punishment, rather then abuse, like most did.
Marcel went to a small college in Frankfurt, and he earned a bachelor’s degree in Business Administration. He did not, however, use his bachelor’s degree, instead joining the police force in Frankfurt. After 10 years as an officer, and rising to the rank of sergeant, he left the police, becoming a clerk at one of Frankfurt’s many banks. He was at work when the Black Mesa Incident occurred, and after Antlions had laid waste to the guards, and most of his fellow staff, he hid in the vault, making sure he did not lock himself in. After a day in the vault, he finally looked out, starving, and seeing nothing but destruction outside. He was faced immediately by a large, two legged, white creature with a strange logo on the front. The creature looked at him, and declared in a robotic voice: “You, Human. Come with me.” He did so, and the creature led him to what was left of the Frankfurt train station, which, to his surprise, still had trains. He noticed several citizens herded into groups, boarding trains, and he was pushed onto a train. It was noisy, smelly and crowded on the train, but he just ignored it, and found a bit of space, sat down, and let himself be ferried off to what used to be Bucharest, Romania, and what is now City 45.

Strengths - Skills/Traits: Marcel can communicate his meaning with just a few words; he is not afraid to speak up, though.

Weaknesses: He loves tea. He can’t get enough of it.

Research Notes: N/A

Well, I am coding for a friend, and I need someone to check my LUA to see if it is bad.

Here it is:
/*--------------------------------------------------------
Default teams. If you make a team above the citizen team, people will spawn with that team!
--------------------------------------------------------*/
TEAM_CITIZEN = AddExtraTeam("Citizen", Color(20, 150, 20, 255), {
   "models/player/Group01/Female_01.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/Female_02.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/Female_03.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/Female_04.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/Female_06.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/Female_07.mdl",
   "models/player/group01/male_01.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/Male_02.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/male_03.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/Male_04.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/Male_05.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/Male_06.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/Male_07.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/Male_08.mdl",
   "models/player/Group01/Male_09.mdl"},
[[The Citizen is the most basic level of society you can hold
besides being a hobo.
You have no specific role in city life.]], {}, "citizen", 0, 45, 0, false, false)

TEAM_POLICE = AddExtraTeam("Civil Protection", Color(25, 25, 170, 255), "models/player/police.mdl", [[The protector of every citizen that lives in the city .
You have the power to arrest criminals and protect innocents.
Hit them with your arrest baton to put them in jail
Bash them with a stunstick and they might learn better than to disobey
the law.
The Battering Ram can break down the door of a criminal with a warrant
for his/her arrest.
The Battering Ram can also unfreeze frozen props(if enabled).
Type /wanted <name> to alert the public to this criminal
OR go to tab and warrant someone by clicking the warrant button]], {"arrest_stick", "unarrest_stick", "weapon_pistol", "stunstick", "door_ram", "weaponchecker"}, "cp", 4, 65, 0, true, true)

TEAM_GANG = AddExtraTeam("Gangster", Color(75, 75, 75, 255), {
   "models/player/Group03/Female_01.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/Female_02.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/Female_03.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/Female_04.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/Female_06.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/Female_07.mdl",
   "models/player/group03/male_01.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/Male_02.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/male_03.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/Male_04.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/Male_05.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/Male_06.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/Male_07.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/Male_08.mdl",
   "models/player/Group03/Male_09.mdl"}, [[The lowest person of crime.
A gangster generally works for the Mobboss who runs the crime family.
The Mobboss sets your agenda and you follow it or you might be punished.]], {}, "gangster", 3, 45, 0, false, false)

TEAM_MOB = AddExtraTeam("Mob boss", Color(25, 25, 25, 255), "models/player/gman_high.mdl", [[The Mobboss is the boss of the criminals in the city.
With his power he coordinates the gangsters and forms an efficent crime
organization.
He has the ability to break into houses by using a lockpick.
The Mobboss also can unarrest you.]], {"lockpick", "unarrest_stick", "weapon_crowbar"}, "mobboss", 1, 60, 0, false, false)

TEAM_GUN = AddExtraTeam("Gun Dealer", Color(255, 140, 0, 255), "models/player/monk.mdl", [[A gun dealer is the only person who can sell guns to other
people.
However, make sure you aren't caught selling guns that are illegal to
the public.
/Buyshipment <name> to Buy a  weapon shipment
/Buygunlab to Buy a gunlab that spawns P228 pistols]], {}, "gundealer", 2, 45, 0, false, false)

TEAM_MEDIC = AddExtraTeam("Medic", Color(47, 79, 79, 255), "models/player/kleiner.mdl", [[With your medical knowledge, you heal players to proper
health.
Without a medic, people can not be healed.
Left click with the Medical Kit to heal other players.
Right click with the Medical Kit to heal yourself.]], {"med_kit"}, "medic", 3, 45, 0, false, false)

TEAM_COOK = AddExtraTeam("Cook", Color(238, 99, 99, 255), "models/player/mossman.mdl", [[As a cook, it is your responsibility to feed the other members
of your city.
You can spawn a microwave and sell the food you make:
/Buymicrowave]], {}, "cook", 2, 45, 0, 0, false)

TEAM_CHIEF = AddExtraTeam("Civil Protection Chief", Color(20, 20, 255, 255), "models/player/combine_soldier_prisonguard.mdl", [[The Chief is the leader of the Civil Protection unit.
Coordinate the police forces to bring law to the city
Hit them with arrest baton to put them in jail
Bash them with a stunstick and they might learn better than to
disobey the law.
The Battering Ram can break down the door of a criminal with a
warrant for his/her arrest.
Type /wanted <name> to alert the public to this criminal
Type /jailpos to set the Jail Position]], {"arrest_stick", "unarrest_stick", "weapon_pistol", "weapon_shotgun", "stunstick", "door_ram", "weaponchecker"}, "chief", 1, 75, 0, false, true, TEAM_POLICE)

TEAM_MAYOR = AddExtraTeam("Mayor", Color(150, 20, 20, 255), "models/player/breen.mdl", [[The Mayor of the city creates laws to serve the greater good
of the people.
If you are the mayor you may create and accept warrants.
Type /wanted <name>  to warrant a player
Type /jailpos to set the Jail Position
Type /lockdown initiate a lockdown of the city.
Everyone must be inside during a lockdown.
The cops patrol the area
/unlockdown to end a lockdown]], {}, "mayor", 1, 85, 0, true, false/*, {TEAM_CHIEF, TEAM_POLICE}*/)
/*
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HOW TO MAKE AN EXTRA CLASS!!!!
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You can make extra classes here. Set everything up here and the rest will be done for you! no more editing 100 files without knowing what you're doing!!!
Ok here's how:

To make an extra class do this:
AddExtraTeam( "<NAME OF THE CLASS>", Color(<red>, <Green>, <blue>, 255), "<Player model>" , [[<the description(it can have enters)>]], { "<first extra weapon>","<second extra weapon>", etc...}, "<chat command to become it(WITHOUT THE /!)>", <maximum amount of this team> <the salary he gets>, 0/1/2 = public /admin only / superadmin only, <1/0/true/false Do you have to vote to become it>,  true/false DOES THIS TEAM HAVE A GUN LICENSE?, TEAM: Which team you need to be to become this team)

The real example is here: it's the Hobo:      */

--VAR without /!!!         The name    the color(what you see in tab)                   the player model               The description
TEAM_HOBO = AddExtraTeam("Hobo", Color(80, 45, 0, 255), "models/player/corpse1.mdl", [[The lowest member of society. All people see you laugh.
You have no home.
Beg for your food and money
Sing for everyone who passes to get money
Make your own wooden home somewhere in a corner or
outside someone else's door]], {"weapon_bugbait"}, "hobo", 5, 0, 0, false)
//No extra weapons           say /hobo to become hobo  Maximum hobo's = 5      his salary = 0 because hobo's don't earn money.          0 = everyone can become hobo ,      false = you don't have to vote to become hobo
// MAKE SURE THAT THERE IS NO / IN THE TEAM NAME OR IN THE TEAM COMMAND:
// TEAM_/DUDE IS WROOOOOONG !!!!!!
// HAVING "/dude" IN THE COMMAND FIELD IS WROOOOOOOONG!!!!
//ADD TEAMS UNDER THIS LINE:
TEAM_SWAT = AddExtraTeam("S.W.A.T", Color(0,0,153,255), "models/player/Combine_S.mdl", [[Raid And
Protect From Terrorists
]], {"weapon_pistol", "weapon_smg1",  "weapon_shotgun"}, "swat", 3, 300, 0, true, true,
{TEAM_POLICE})

TEAM_HONOR = AddExtraTeam("Honor Gaurd", Color(-17,-17,-17,255), "models/player/Combine_Super_Soldier.mdl", [[Protect the
Mayor at all costs.
]], {"weapon_pistol", "weapon_ar2", "weapon_shotgun"}, "honor", 2, 85, 0, true, true,
{TEAM_POLICE}}





/*
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HOW TO MAKE A DOOR GROUP
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AddDoorGroup("NAME OF THE GROUP HERE, you see this when looking at a door", Team1, Team2, team3, team4, etc.)

WARNING: THE DOOR GROUPS HAVE TO BE UNDER THE TEAMS IN SHARED.LUA. IF THEY ARE NOT, IT MIGHT MUCK UP!


The default door groups, can also be used as examples:
*/
AddDoorGroup("Cops and Mayor only", TEAM_CHIEF, TEAM_POLICE, TEAM_MAYOR, TEAM_SWAT, TEAM_HONOR)
AddDoorGroup("Gundealer only", TEAM_GUN)


/*
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HOW TO MAKE An agenda
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AddAgenda(Title of the agenda, Manager (who edits it), Listeners (the ones who just see and follow the agenda))

WARNING: THE AGENDAS HAVE TO BE UNDER THE TEAMS IN SHARED.LUA. IF THEY ARE NOT, IT MIGHT MUCK UP!

I am Ian Kharlamov. Some people call me sick, some people call me a monster. If any of them knew what I was going through, they wouldn't call me that... Though, they can't. The're dead. By my hand. I- I have done a lot of things I'm not proud of. A lot. Before the Combine came, I was a happy man; I had a wife, I had a home. They took it all. They killed my wife, and took all my things. They tortured me. The physical pain is not so bad. It fuels me. It's what goes on in my head that hurts... I have--------

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Player Section

Steam Name: {APC|GIS} Gen. EliteOps12
Age: 24
How long have you been Roleplaying? (can be any game): 2 Years
How long have you been playing Serious GMod RP?: 6 Months

Character Section

Authorization(s):
Citizen Uniform modified by adding cargo pockets, a weapon clip, and a knife sheath, and for the uniform to have fibers of Headcrab skin hand woven in.

Name: Ian Kharlamov
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Affiliation: Rebellion

Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.
Ian Kharlamov listened as he sewed. "Individual: You are charged with multiple sociostability infringement acts. Implicit Citizenship revoked. Anti-citizen status approved. Ground teams, move in. Code: Inject, Sweep, Clean". "God, I wouldn't be surprised if they are looking for me out there..." he thought. As he sewed his vest, he thought about what he had done, and the sacrifices he had made for his partial freedom. Was freedom worth killing 2 people, one of which was unarmed and innocent? Yes, it was. Was killing a helpless creature that was lost on a strange planet worth freedom? Of course. These decisions were nothing in Ian's mind, everything was cold and unnecessary in his eyes... almost everything. The Human race, that needed freedom. If a few people are hurt to benefit a whole group, that is fine. He thought about that, as he carefully weaved the torn up wet strands of skin into his old vest. He recalled how he had killed the animal in the first place... "Hey, get out of the canals, they are flooding the underground with manhacks, and that ain't the least of your worries... "Don't worry, I can gut this thing like a fish." With that moment, intense sweat pushed it's way onto Ian's brow. He drew his knife with swiftness, deftly avoided the creatures screaming attacks, and mercilessly gutted it like he said he would. "Look out, CPs!" exclaimed Jack, who was safe on the elevator platform. "Hey, you wanna piece of me? Come and get it, you overfed bastards!!" With that, he ran up to the first CP, plunging his knife into his [the CP's] groin, exclaiming "Ha! Like that?" He made no more then a twitch when the officer, in his dying breath,  spewed into his own mask, drowning himself. The other CP was more careful, however, and after a long game of cat and mouse, Ian took desperate measures to insure his own survival. He made a dash towards the platform Jack was standing on, and pulled Jack in front of his body, having Jack act as a shield, while he [Jack] screamed "Hey! Stop! S**t, help! You'll kill me!", and Ian answered coldly: "Precisely." and with that, Jack was hit by a bullet, and Ian threw Jack's corpse at the officer, buying him time to escape. While the officer was recovering, Ian grabbed the headcrab's body, thinking it useful, and he ran off into the bowels of District 6... Ian remembered how he had gotten the coveted weapon, his knife, which was, in his opinion, the only thing he had that he loved... (Yeah, Ian is kind of like the rebel equivalent of a CmD, without the augmentations and the control.) Ian Kharlamov was waiting... Waiting for Jack to arrive, and in the meantime, he worked on crafting a weapon that could have some use to him if he managed to escape. As Ian pulled the metal off the old barrier, he thought of a blueprint of his weapon:
|=========|_____________
                         _____________\                               
| =========|----------------------\

Ian quickly wrapped the twine against the metal, then secured it with a piece of sticky gauze like substance. As he filed down the metal into the shape of a blade with an old rock, he heard a cry. "Hey, Ian, It's me, Jack! You ready to go?" Perfect timing. Just as he had finished the final components of the knife, Jack had shown. "Yeah... I guess..." As he began to climb down the ladder to the canals, he heard the faint radio sounds of Civil Protection officers, and the whir of a Hunter Chopper. A raid. "Shit, great timing... Just delightful timing... Let's hurry, before they find us!" Ian Kharlamov had just finished sewing the final pieces of his new clothes, when he heard the sound of CP officers at the door. He quickly ran into a conveniently open air vent, and escaped the odds once more.


What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
(This one is for both things.) Ian Kharlamov would have a means of protection against Civil Protection sweeps, and those annoying people who say "lulz. I has a gunz frum a ded cp. Now i can mug peoplez", or legit role-players who have a weapon as well, and are MuggerRPing. (This one is for the clothes only.) Since the clothes are in my PhysDesc, I would command respect from other players, and they would not just see me as another lolwebul who says he got his C.I.D revoked (By the way, I actually did. A nice 02 unit added "C.I.D Revoked" to my record, thanks to a small skirmish that ended up with an injured CP and a D6 raid.)

Defects
I could no longer wander the other sectors (D1, D2, not like it is very easy for me now, anyway, since the CPs never really do Applies any more.), because I would have my vest and knife recognized as contraband. I might be the target for thieves due to my weapon, though they would need an auth to steal that from me.

What do you plan to do with these perks/defects?
I plan to use these authorizations to aide in my survival as a hardass Anti-citizen in a dangerous world.

Will anyone else need these auths? (If so, list OOC and IC name(s))
No.

Which server does this apply for?
City

Extra Notes (optional):
EDITS: I fixed grammar errors, I am starting on improving the perks/defects as per Brandon's request.

Hey, well, last night I was in the middle of a great RP thing, I was stabbed, I went to the CWU medshop, a unit was called in, I was put in detention. Well, I had to D/C while in detention, and so my story is that I fell into a coma, and I wake up in the morning. When I play as Mikhel Kharlamov tomorrow, can a unit or an admin put me back into detention. For units handling me, I was a stab victim in D6, I limped to the CWU medshop, a CWU medic patched me up, I fell into a delirious coma and kept mumbling about the Union, Dr. Franklin Ward, headcrabs, antlions, and strong men wearing ski masks with knives. I yelled "TO HELL WITH THE FOUL DEMONS WHO ATTACK THE UNION" in front of a CCA officer. He called a NOVA OfC, who ordered me detained. I was supposed to be interrogated. So, can someone just continue the scenario tomorrow when I get back on as Mikhel?