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Backup Sections => Authorization Applications => Applications and appeals => Half-Life 2 Roleplay => Archive => HL2RP Development[ARCHIVE] => Denied Authorizations => Topic started by: cfitz22 on April 03, 2013, 09:59:19 AM
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Player Section
Steam Name: cfitz22
Age: 13
How long have you been Roleplaying? (can be any game): A year or two
How long have you been playing Serious GMod RP?: A year or two
Character Section
Authorization(s):
Priesthood clothing (Lenten)
Gold (fake) rosary
Small Bible
Name: Father Andrew Zaroli
Age: 51
Gender: Male
Affiliation: Rebellion
Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.
Father Andrew Zaroli was a Catholic priest who worked in a small community in Romania. It was filled with mostly Americans so Father never had to learn another language. He preached at an old church before the war. When the attack began, Andrew went to the church and grabbed two Lenten robes, a pocket Bible, and a rosary. He then fled to the nearby outlands after telling everyone that they should scatter. He found a few houses with kind Romanian families who understood his predicament. They allowed him to stay for a while as the battle raged. Father stayed for a day and left, wandering the woods. The Overwatch sweeped the outlands areas and Andrew stayed hidden. Andrew found an old destroyed church and preached to people who passed through. He prayed to the only thing still standing, the cross.
What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
Nothing really, just a purple robe with a gold cross and a Bible. WORD OF GOD YEAH!
Defects
The purple is pretty bright, people can see me well.
What do you plan to do with these perks/defects?
Passive RP. I wanted to RP a priest, so I will.
Will anyone else need these auths? (If so, list OOC and IC name(s))
Nope, just me.
Which server does this apply for?
Outlands
Extra Notes (optional):
I am Catholic so that's why I'm doing this.
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Is this a joke
Stop making useless posts in Auth apps. Next one will be a forum ban. -KJUN
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Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.
Father Andrew Zaroli was a Catholic priest who worked in a small community in Romania. It was filled with mostly Americans so Father never had to learn another language. He preached at an old church before the war. When the attack began, Andrew went to the church and grabbed two Lenten robes, a pocket Bible, and a rosary. He then fled to the nearby outlands after telling everyone that they should scatter. He found a few houses with kind Romanian families who understood his predicament. They allowed him to stay for a while as the battle raged. Father stayed for a day and left, wandering the woods. The Overwatch sweeped the outlands areas and Andrew stayed hidden. Andrew found an old destroyed church and preached to people who passed through. He prayed to the only thing still standing, the cross.
Seems kinda short and UN-explanatory.
I mean so he got out found a family. Had grabbed the stuff and hid in the woods till today?
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Yeah the backstory isn't great, but it does depict how he obtained the items.
Post Auto-Merged: April 03, 2013, 10:32:22 AM
Is this a joke
Yak don't comment shit like that.
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It's not the longest, most detailed backstory, but it covers all that is asked for, and what's asked for is really nothing controversial. Since it's such a small thing to request, I'll through in my Support, no matter how much it really counts for.
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Robe - http://www.schooljotter.com/imagefolders/stmalachysbelfast/galleryImages/st._malachyc_church/Explore_and_learn/Vestments/DSC_0218_685x1024.jpg
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Sorry, very big -support on my part here. The role of a Catholic priest isn't a common thing, and this application doesn't prove to me in anyway that you could roleplay this correctly. My first issue is that there's no developed backstory explaining why he chose the religious life at all, something I see as important in a religious character. Secondly, you gave a few brief description of getting the stuff, and I'd rather have it be a bit more descriptive. My third issue ties in with getting the authorizations is the survival aspect. How did a man who's clearly a religious priest (who the Union executed in the invasion) survive in the wilderness merely roaming for, what, three years now? And my fourth issue is a more personal one, as I am a Catholic as well. This application has very little thought and effort, and almost comes off as a joke to me. It makes me think you have no idea what you're talking about when you aid you're a Catholic, and it honestly offends me a bit. Again, I am against this application until you can do some major reworking of it.
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Wait, isn't he banned from the HL2RP servers anyway or was that repealed?
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+support here. Not asking for too much for a type of character that I haven't seen around the Outlands much.
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Why is your affiliation 'Rebellion'? You're a priest, what are you rebelling? Especially in Outlands. Shouldn't you be all about the word of God?
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User is still ban as his appeal was denied.
Link for BA here: http://www.catalyst-gaming.net/index.php?topic=23584.0
I'm going to lock this until a HL2RP Admin can get this settled and straighten.
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This application is denied because cfitz22 is still banned from HL2RP (http://i.imgur.com/dhv4HDs.png).
Your application also lacks some important details, as pointed out by several previous posts. You may reapply once you get unbanned.