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[DENIED] Erica Fleamore's Civil Authority Application
« on: January 10, 2012, 11:57:25 PM »
Erica Fleamore's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: Jordanlol633

IC Character Name: Erica Fleamore

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
After the Seven Hour War,Erica Fleamore,has dedicated her life wishes into coming a combine.Hearing the loud shotgun slugs firing most of the day.Her life wishes is still to serve the Civil Authority.

 From what Erica can point out,she has notice that the Civil Authority has a different attitude towards citizens.After thinking deep down she has notice that she has the same attitude.Watching the wore out boots on the pavement everyday,her decision is made.

 It was a cold rainy day,as they open up the ration distribution NO 593,She thought to her self that this could be a chance.A chance to prove her trust and loyal to the Civil Authority.She saw a citizen pull out a brown,rusted down,rectangle object.Coming closer she found out that it was a radio.She thought to herself "I bet I could turn this kid in for some kind of trust". Telling the DvL of Void,the citizen was taking in the nexus and never heard from again.The VOID officer then told her to apply,she gave them her CID ID# and Name,he then said two loyalist point awarded and walk away.

 Erica had no idea what these points did or what they are.She then noticed a citizen with a blue armband around the wrist "Loyalist Armband".She thought to herself,"If he has that....he must know what i do with these points".After hours of explaining,she finally figured it out,she then knew that she had to collect five of these points to even be considered.

Days and days after,she collected five loyalist points,she asked around on how to get a loyalist armband.Hours of asking,she finally got her "Loyalist Armband",and went straight to bragging.

One month later,she collected ten loyalist points,a citizen ask her..."Have you ever considered being a Civil Authority officer?",she quickly jump to questions...the citizen told her "Instead of asking me these...go ask that DvL".Erica skipped right to the officer,and only had one thing to say,"Citizen come with me".

2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Energetic,Determined,Brave,Dependable

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
I would like to officers to respect me,as I will respect them.I will also be expecting them to have great teamwork and communication skills.Plans,I know they have plans for everything that might go on in the city.Training,I know I will be training hard everyday until I'm ready for the city.

 She was also be expecting superiors officers to do there jobs as according too,as long with the other below ranks.Adjusting to the CCA life and being able to respond to constant calls and complaints.Erica really just expects,hard work and teamwork out of the other Civil Authority's Officers.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Seven pounds,brown eyes,she was a beautiful baby.Growing up as a baby was hard for Erica.Her dad lost his job and her mom shortly began to do "drugs".

When Erica was ten years old,she was introduced to her aunt Kathy.Not long after,she began to love her aunt.They played soccer and table tennis together all the day...they loved each other.

When Erica was fourteen,she began the stage,hating anybody and loving nobody.Her Aunt Kathy still loved her tho,as Erica moved in with her.Erica would stop at nothing to hurt anybody who got in her way.She begin learning "cuss words" at her local middle-school.She was heading in the wrong direction at the wrong time.

 When Erica turn eight-teen it all happened,she had a job at a local general store.The boss slamming the door open,said "Erica! It's happening the reports from the scientist's are correct! We must hide!".Erica was scared and threaten,she had never cried in her life,as she broke down in tears.Noticing the news,she quickly ran to his aunt's house and stay there for a couple hours.Until they had word that it is safe.

 Erica was now twenty years old,she had never been detained or caught by any combine or CCA.She couldn't find any shelter,as a friend told her about the local Civil's Housing Apartments.She ran there and quickly paid four months in advance.She had never heard of a sweep or a raid,then it came,she heard the sounds from the hallway.Minutes later,they knocked on her door,she opened it and was taken to the ground.She had no idea what to do or say.This was the day that she fell in love with the " Civil Authority".

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
I have not


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
2 years

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
1 year [Maybe more]

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
Since May 2011

4. What Time zone are you in?
Eastern Standard Time

5. In what country do you live?
United States

6. How old are you?
16

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
Unfortunately combat role play,It was a late Saturday night in summer,when me and my friends decided to steal out of the nexus.So after about two hours plotting a way of getting into the nexus we had a brilliant idea.After we got our supplies and weapons.We had out to nexus to complete our "brilliant" plan.So by this time it was around 2:AM EST and we was getting tired so we skipped a couple of steps.So after our "friend" got captured we decided to step a few uneeded steps.Now let's actually get into the role play.Once that nexus door open we all ran into the door,stabbing the officer left inside,as when run down to the armory we was stopped by our friend that was captured.He told us "Sorry fellows I was working undercover",so after we heard this we pulled out of knifes and tossed once at his chest.Fortunately it did not kill him,after dealing with his we toke out the other two officers guarding him.We blow the door off the armory and quickly ran in and grab our hands full,after getting our pockets full of ammo and supplies we went on our journey out of the nexus.Shortly after we was stopped by five officers,after about ten minute shoot to miss role play,we won!Hours later,we finally made it out of the nexus and we went back to our base of operation.As we was drinking our beer and whiskey and celebrating with other gang members,we heard a loud yell "Watch out!Here they come!".We oaded our guns and got our health vials hot and ready to go.All ten of us walked out in a very good fashion line.We did not hear a word,all of sudden they started firing,as person by person went down.....we decided to make a run.After escaping the many of the CP's roadblocks we made it.We had no idea where we was,all four of us saw this little sign on the door that said "Roadside Bar".

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes,I do



IC Section

Full Name: Erica Fleamore
CID: 03266
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Height: 5'9
Hair Colour Brown
Eye Colour: Brown
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 146
Mental Distinctions: The ability to think out problems and time lines
Mental Defects: Insomnia
Mental Advantages: Quick Thinker,Good Memory,Extremely Smart
Notable Qualities: Respect,Committed,Hopeful


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
No,I haven't

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes, I do

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes, I will

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes, I do

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes, I will

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I feel like,if we all obey the Combine Civil Authority that the world would be a better place.So this is my chance encourage the citizens of city 45 to take this idea in consideration.I hope during my duties I show all the citizens that my point is true and honest.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Erica Fleamore hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
« Last Edit: January 12, 2012, 08:50:12 AM by Veran120 »

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Re: Erica Fleamore's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2012, 05:28:22 AM »
UNIT: 562
DIVISION: NOVA
CLEARANCE: DvL
Enter Password: ************

ACCESS GRANTED

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Applicant File Opened: <Erica Fleamore>
Citizen Identification Number: 03266

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| Back story lacks detail, and doesn't mention your characters response to the portal storms/7 hour war, back story also doesnt meet minimum word requirement. ||::>

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Please apply again on the: 26/01/2012


 

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