<::||The Candidate||::>

[Martinerrr]

* Khub claps.

The Unit, yes please. Good work. Now, continue.

Agreeeeeeeeeed. This was fun, I was quite disappointed with the ending here.

[Dallas]

* Khub claps.

The Unit, yes please. Good work. Now, continue.

Agreeeeeeeeeed. This was fun, I was quite disappointed with the ending here.

How so, sir?

[hogs]

* Khub claps.

The Unit, yes please. Good work. Now, continue.

Agreeeeeeeeeed. This was fun, I was quite disappointed with the ending here.

How so, sir?

The ending was disappointing because it ended. I really enjoyed this story, write more!

[swag master spiderman]

I think he was expecting a more satisfying or happy ending as opposed to "She loses." I think it's alright though, one of the threads in here I actually enjoyed reading.

[Martinerrr]

I think he was expecting a more satisfying or happy ending as opposed to "She loses." I think it's alright though, one of the threads in here I actually enjoyed reading.

No, I was simply disappointed because he ended the story simply like that.

The ending was disappointing because it ended. I really enjoyed this story, write more!

[Dallas]

I've ended it the way it did simply because there really was no other way to.
I didn't wish to lessen the piece by having her shoot her way out or escape somehow.