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Offline The Joke

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Zak Grant's Authorization Application
« on: February 14, 2012, 09:25:41 PM »
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Steam Name: The Joke
Age: 14
How long have you been Roleplaying? (can be any game): 3 years
How long have you been playing Serious GMod RP?: 1 year

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Authorization(s):
Expert/advanced hand to hand combat skills.
To be more physically fit, and mentally.
A better marksman.

Name: Zak Grant
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Affiliation: Resistance

Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.
As Zak returned to the Out lands his arm was not the only thing that had changed, he also had grown more mature and skilled, growing into a man. As days went by he kept on honing his skills and trying to get them to near perfection. He had already been in fights with OTA, some of which he had won and beaten the OTA even with its heavy armour with nothing but his fists and a knife. His skills got better by the day as the days went by, he soon found himself exercising every day, this concluded of jogging, hitting dummies, press ups, sit ups, and many other attempts to get the skills that he truly desired. When Zak was pronounced KIA he found himself in the mountains and enlisted the help of another large rebel group of which he never got the name of. They gave him more advanced training than Dave and Skyler before hand had already given him. Every day he was getting up at the crack of dawn to do some rifle training, the same old routine fell upon him, get up, get dressed, clean your rifle, fire it down range, go for a ten mile jog, come back and do some more exercise. The same thing kept happening over and over until he found himself in the field and commanding a full squad of five men, five men that depended on his orders and decisions. After he had received his one and only reward, his arm blown off. He thought back to the good times of the Out lands. It may not have been a easy life, but it was home. And so he travelled back on foot, trying to get back to the ones he loved, the ones he feared, and the all new surprises that were to come...

What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
Obviously to be able to cope with situations a lot better
To be able to be more physically active than most refugees.
To be able to hone his skills in marksmanship and hit targets at a much longer range.
His mind will be more focused and relaxed, the exercise also helping in that aspect as it will calm him from all the stress he has had recently.

Defects
He will be put to the test on these skills, and if something goes wrong he might lose the ability to have such concentration and could go into a depressive state.

What do you plan to do with these perks/defects?
To be able to use them when they are needed in a RP situation, this could be from a fight, to a mental challenge.

Will anyone else need these auths? (If so, list OOC and IC name(s))


Which server does this apply for?
Outlands

Extra Notes (optional):
If you want to take something out of the list then I am more than happy to
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Re: Zak Grant's Authorization Application
« Reply #1 on: February 14, 2012, 11:19:57 PM »
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He had already been in fights with OTA, some of which he had won and beaten the OTA even with its heavy armour with nothing but his fists and a knife.

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'Fights' implies that you survived the first time.

Re: Zak Grant's Authorization Application
« Reply #2 on: February 14, 2012, 11:31:26 PM »
I know I don't have any kind of word on this but it seems quite overpowered  :-\
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Re: Zak Grant's Authorization Application
« Reply #3 on: February 15, 2012, 06:32:18 AM »
Denied. I can already see this as being overpowered when coming to RP situations, and you cannot beat OTA units in melee combat unless the OTA unit was SOMEHOW dumb enough to go within melee distance of their targets, but you would have been shot and killed before you reached them for melee distance. Also, I don't see the backstory as had enough effort put into it for the authorisations you ask for as well.
« Last Edit: June 03, 2012, 02:04:11 AM by Kom??Як »

 

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