" Brock Polonon: i will be afk in my apartment, i will be back when my app gets accepted =/"OOC from about 5 mins agoThat is the kind of attitude we don't need within the MPF. I suggest to deny.
Heres a few other reasons;Q1 isnt long enough.Q2 is answered incorrectly.Q3 isn't long enough,.Q4 isn't long enough.You don't know your own timezone.You need some more experience within serious RP.Your spelling and grammar is horrendous.You continued to say every 5 minutes in shoutbox about how we should check your application, and that you'd leave it we didn't.
It's relevant to coordinate events and activites for your training and other stuff. That's why. We need to know when you could possibly be on, so we have somewhat of an idea when we can expect you to be active.
Quote from: Cat With A Mustache on March 09, 2014, 10:26:30 PMwait i dont getthats what i said when i first learned about weaboo's, furries, and bronys
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Also pointing out, that in the IC section, which is meant for your character to be writing it down, you wrote that you didn't get detained on; 'This server but I have before on another one'. That is OOC, and not possible to be in the IC section. Also some other questions are still too short or answered incorrectly.(Also, not sure if I can post here, because I am not and admin or forum mod. but the Application rules said anyone can post if they only have constructive things to post. Correct me if I am wrong.)
This has already been stated, but allow me to elaborate on this:Question number three in the OOC section is much too short. It is much less than the 300 word minimum and explains nothing about your character other than what he is doing in City 18 and not City 17. As for that story, it completely goes against the canon. I would suggest reading up on the "official" canon here: http://combineoverwiki.net/wiki/Main_PageYour character's back story is supposed to describe the kind of person they are. It should answer questions like "Why is your character so trustworthy and helpful?" or "How is your character able to tell when someone is lying?". It should also describe in detail what led you character to accept the Union's ideology and volunteer his/her mind, body, and soul to preserving sociostability.Finally, while I can understand that english is not your first language and that that in no way is related to your RP ability, you need to improve your grammar if you wish to become a CCA officer on this community.
Oh, also. Question 2 is also incorrect. It asks for mental traits. Not your characters physical appearance. Also, in case no one pointed this out, unless you have a privilege from the owner or high ranking admin, you need 10 posts prior to this, and a week of time at the community, in order to try to do a CP application.
Quote from: Hazard Time on March 02, 2014, 03:49:06 PMThis has already been stated, but allow me to elaborate on this:Question number three in the OOC section is much too short. It is much less than the 300 word minimum and explains nothing about your character other than what he is doing in City 18 and not City 17. As for that story, it completely goes against the canon. I would suggest reading up on the "official" canon here: http://combineoverwiki.net/wiki/Main_PageYour character's back story is supposed to describe the kind of person they are. It should answer questions like "Why is your character so trustworthy and helpful?" or "How is your character able to tell when someone is lying?". It should also describe in detail what led you character to accept the Union's ideology and volunteer his/her mind, body, and soul to preserving sociostability.Finally, while I can understand that english is not your first language and that that in no way is related to your RP ability, you need to improve your grammar if you wish to become a CCA officer on this community.It's too hard to write things like that, this would take 5 hours just to elaborate something that match with what you are talking, because i need to do grammar check,edit everything on a notepad and those things, and i'm sure there's more than 300 words in the description.