Opinion on me?

Why don't you love me anymore, is it cuz i'm fat?

Tell me the secret stuff, i'm not askin' *srusbuissnessface*

Favorite people in outlands and city?

How ya' doin'?

Favorite youtuber?

Why you so dame fine?

why are you named qman and what took you to naming yourself as said name-When I was around 7 or 8 when I first had steam, I rolled with a friend who helped me with everything because I was retarded, he gave me this name and a lot of really good friends call me this no matter what name I have, so I kept it and such. It's not to be confused with


why do you only play cca characters-I only have my CCA character on city as of now, I have two citizens I am thinking of, one for more interesting negative RP, one for Union Watch.


do you ever play outlands-Yes I play on Candyman as much as I can, Candyman is a man looking for redemption through various methods, now being hunted to be used as a weapon, his friends are in danger and such. So is his fragile mental state, he suffers from Schizophrania, Different personalities and depression. He's also a bit awkward an cheesy at times. But he's one of my really planned out and good characters, I really couldn't say how good he can be using his words and actions unless you saw him, interacted with him and got close to him. There are a couple of people who could really vow on how Candyman is great, I was once told he could be made a movie about. It ment so much to me.

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Hi-Supdawg

How are you right now-Feelin' like crap that's been lit on fire yo. I'm really ill right now, and have lots of stress going on, writing is my funnel to help the feels man. Also Katawa-Shoujo

How were you feeling a year ago-Pretty fucking bad, bullied 24/7 by older 'friends' but I was also kinda' good, I had a really bad self esteem by my looks, but I hit a growth spurt and girls started liking me, It helped shaped me, etc. I can go on, if you really want to know about me you can ask, I'm kind of an open book sometimes.

What do you plan to do within the next few years-Eat Watermelon and Chicken with Kronos. Not really, I don't know I just go with what happens really, cuz i'm soooooocoooool

What do you think of me (!!) Well, I think you are an incredibly cool person, I have nice thoughts of you when you where a CmD, you got me into the CCA, etc. You're a very great person when it comes OOCly and a very good Roleplayer when it comes to IC stuff, so on a scale to 1-10
What do you think of CG-I don't really have an opinion, it's an organized and well brought out community, a lot better than others. A couple bad things but that comes with every community and such. I can give it a 'Dan outta Dan' but I'm forgiving with scores so.

Favorite song right now? Hmmmmmmmmm, here ya' go.


Let's go to space. We go kill martians kay?

Bye!! - What about space? Babycomeback, you can blame it all, on, me.

Okay, let's make this a bit more challenging. You must ask me questions via. Gif's or images. Kaygo

Oh and if you can't find anything, you can just ask the question.

Player Information
Steam name:Mr.Qman
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:15341901
How long have you been roleplaying (any game)? Since I’ve had GMOD (4 years)
How long have you been playing serious Gmod RP?  March 28, 2012


Questions
Why do you want a Vortigaunt character? (1 paragraph minimum)
When I first had my first character thinking of the possibilities I basically had a nerdgasm. I was so happy with the thought of having my own world to manipulate and have fun with, as I see role-play as a need and a thread each user having that sewing up a giant story, I was so overwhelmed with the idea of learning this new universe. When I got my unit it was twice that, so I’m thinking Vortigaunts. I really think I’d appreciate and have fun with the culture, and more depth in the storyline and maybe make a good impact on some things. So I really do think I can appreciate and have fun with the concept of role-playing Vortigaunts.
What do you envision yourself doing on your Vortigaunt character? (1 paragraph minimum)
I can see myself with my “Vort” being in a lone location flux shifting and thinking about Black Mesa and the person who saved his race from slavery and yet did so much damage to his race. Looking at the humans observing their behavior and how their most humanistic emotions can relate to hers, and how they can be irrelevant to how she is. Performing actions from the kindness of her heart or just being able to see a different wiser way in a conflict. I really like the culture of the Vortigaunts and their painful and depressing history and how it relates to the miserable rock they now stand on. I would really want my “vort” making a difference in how people act, and making it to a more agreeable and better on addressing who the real enemy is. I don’t see my “Vort” using her powers at every chance she gets, I would like to RP her trying her best to get better with her vortessence than just boom having it so her character development is better. I can see her talking in the language of her people communicating with another vortigaunt on the events and depressing stories, and the nice philosophy of things. Using her more intellectual and cunning culture as her weapon than her “laser beam” as I’ve heard some people call it. I also can see my character grieving over the loss of so many of her people, and the enslavement of her friends and kin.
Using your Vortigaunt character, how will you enhance the role-play of those immediately around you? (1 paragraph minimum)
When I am near a “Vort” the atmosphere seems tense, seemingly if you moved an inch wrong they’d smack you across the face, So what I want to do is give people a more reassuring feeling and a “helping hand” rather than running off having something more important to do which I’ve seen in mostly all my encounters. I want to a more link to Humanity and have my Vort try to see the right side of the story and not the colder one, showing them in depressing time relating to the storyline or and IC effect that just as they are talking is a symbolic way of hope. Showing Humanity is not alone in either the feelings of lost ones and their freedom, or day to day emotions. So using her more complex planning and intelligence to rather help and gain an ally, showing how things can be better if they work together rather than just slash them with a claw.
Using your Vortigaunt character, how will you enhance the role-play of the server as a whole? (1 paragraph minimum)
Well as the server goes on, it can get dull sometimes so just the presence and RP of my character would be able to enhance the feeling and atmosphere of things since I intend my character to sometimes reminisce about events. When the ratio is too low in some part I would like to be there to shift that giving a little more weight to the citizen side. I’d also love to inspire more people into doing better actions rather than devious and evil ones, helping character development to a more positive thing, and helping in a cooperative way to reach some sort of goal. I can also see my character having a more effect on the server with numbers on her side, and if let us say an event has developed maybe with permission a group of vortigaunt people can shift the odds. Really when you think about it and all sorts of scenarios just the presence of anyone can change anything in millions of ways.
Have you played as Vortigaunt character before? If so, state the community, length of time you had the character, and a description of role-play situation that your character
was involved in.
I have never had any other Vortigaunt character, I hope that it can start here.
Will your Vortigaunt character take priority over your other hl2rp characters?
I play 777 with good role-play and have fun, and candyman the same. But with this new experience I’m probably going to develop and try my new character more than the others, and get on when I feel the time is necessary for my other characters (Candyman, to many units not enough citizens) (777 To many citizens not enough units) Or some sort of event comes up that I am needed for.


Character Information
Name: Zai’Lakei
Age:87
Gender:Female
Height:5’7FT
Weight:180lbs
Description of physique:
Below good health, eating less, and very weak. Aged and cut with scars of laborious slave work, a darker olive green skin color, and a big red eye, claws seem to be less pointed than an average Vortigaunt, and a small grin with her sharper teeth
Description of intellectual traits:
Sapient and intellectual taking up more of her culture and less anarchy, with a more tactical planning in combat than physical and head on her sapient ways would help her during her depression, thinking that she has lost all that is dear to her and holds onto the little bit of memory she has
Description of personality:
Slightly depressed with the loss of her people, but shows a slow and calm demeanor, wanting nothing but freedom and peace. With a more pacifist outlook on things, rather than aggressive and chaotic. Does her best to be peaceful and share her friendlier outlook on things, seeing a better outcome in most situations than death.
Miscellaneous information:
Zai’Lakai’s vortessence is weaker than average, most of her aggressive and defensive things about her are more put into a more peaceful and smart way. I plan to have Zai build up character development to improve her vortessence


Tasks
1.  Summarize the history of the Vortigaunt species (2 paragraphs minimum).
Vortigaunts lived in most likely  peaceful and intellectual civilization but that changed when the Combine decided to slaughter them, and take slaves of them. After the events on their home-world they fled to a border world called Xen where they were enslaved by Nihilanth becoming a Xenotherium Subservilla or Xen slave, it would turn out that Nihilanth is actually a slave to another race that was never told. So during that time Nihilanth got orders from something, and gave orders to the Vortigaunts who were put into chains and collars that practically brainwashed them. During that time they were used as slave labor doing deadly deeds and using their bodies’ advantages. After couple of years in enslavement back down on Earth the resonance cascade occurred making a rift where Nihilanth saw that as a change to escape enslavement and invade Earth.
 When Vortigaunts were first set into Black Mesa they were greeted by Humanity with fear and steel crowbars. They had no control over this though and had one directive they could not ignore, invade and kill humans targeting Gordon Freeman specifically as Nihilanth saw him as the biggest threat. So when Gordon Freeman finished up and killed Nihilanth the Vortigaunts where set free, and then they saw the person who killed a good amount of Vortigaunts, as a messiah and use him as a beacon of hope. After being set free a lot of them were stuck on Earth and have banded together with the human led resistance, and small groups that have a bad intention of the Combine. Doing this vowing to one day overthrow the Combine whilst at the same time freeing their race and kin.
2.  Detail the advantages and limitations of Vortigaunt physical structure (2 paragraphs minimum).
Vortigaunts come with a very good amount of perks and defects. They have the power to manipulate vortessence which they believe is the fabric of the universe. They can use it to charge up an attack that would show up as a bolt of green electricity that has enough power to destroy an OTA commander if used well. They can resurrect nearly dead people, they can teleport, even stop time for a couple seconds. But those three powers can only be done with good numbers of Vortigaunts who have been taught how to use the vortessence well, and even with that they probably need an organic natural material from antilions which they actually have a skill of husbandry in.
Due to their anatomy they cannot run very fast, having an arched back. They are mammals and they have a way of communicating with each other through vortigeese that can only be heard with the correct auditory system Vortigaunts have. They also do have emotions like humans from kindness to anger to depression. So they have a lot of very neat traits about them, with their advanced culture but there must be a good amount of healthy vortigaunt to perform a lot of vortessence based things, even the bolt matters on health. This would mean a mental state as well, as of depression could make the charging of the bolt slower or more disruptive. They can also use a healing ability that is similar to the bolt discharge but requires singing whilst they do it to help channel vortessence energy.
3.  State what is known about Vortigaunt culture (1 paragraph minimum).
Vortigaunts are very wise and an intellectual race who cherish Poetry, philosophy, and music. They are naturally kind hearted but some vortigaunts are meaner than others. Due to their history with slavery they look at “The free man” as a messiah, and they cherish their vortessence like it was a religion believing it is the fabric of the universe and it’s within a lot of things. Their lifespan is also very long which could lead to why they are so wise and their culture is so intellectual.
4.  In your own words, define the Vortessence and describe the nature of its relationship with Vortigaunts. (3 paragraphs minimum).
Vortessence is an essence within all being that assumingly from the Vortigaunts culture is the fabric of the universe and telling from its powers and abilities to beings who know how to manipulate it, it is a very cherished and dangerous thing. Some vortigaunts look at it as a weapon, as others can look at it as a religion. Vortessence is a type of energy that seems to be a more electrical one than any other and is an incredibly powerful thing which is taught to by other vortigaunts and once it is learned it is bound to you. It is a gift that is taught and delicately used in many processes of a Vortigaunt that chooses to manipulate its life. Having such ability would mean life and death to some people, Its powers can stop the process of time its self, or bring back a fallen ally, or even teleport in good numbers. Showing that it has immense power and is strong enough to blast down a wall.
So what does all of that mean? It means that vortessence isn’t a thing that would be plopped into the hands of a foolhardy person, it is a thing that has a meaning that would be equivalent to life, a resource more important than any fuel you have seen, and has the power of a cannon pulsing down a corridor. It’s an energy that would change someone’s life if they had the chance to wield it and is something that must be exercised and used with caution. To vortigaunts I would imagine that it is a responsibility and something that should never be abused. Instead it should be used for the usage of good, and the ability to prevent evils and bad things from happening. It can be looked on from a Vortigaunt’s perspective as power, or as good.
To humans it would be like the power to wield the sun without hurting yourself, or the power of god to help a person in need. Vortessence being believed to be the fabric of what everything is made of and that connects everything as a whole is something that could be worshiped and taken into study with the ability to be at peace with yourself knowing that vortessence can protect you, and it can protect others from danger in the right hands. Having the choice to meditate and strengthen it as a responsibility for later uses like holding someone’s life and death in a couple of hands is a flabbergasting and amazing thing to witness, so to vortigaunts I would image it being an amazing feeling and accomplishing feeling when you obtain it’s power. So in the end it is looked down upon by either it being a weapon, or it being something greater, something more important, and something much more fantastic.
5.  Detail from a third-person standpoint how your Vortigaunt character would resolve the following scenario: Three angry rebels with weapons have cornered you inside the S6 XCCR and demand that you help them kill a loyalist citizen (2 paragraphs minimum).
Zai’Lakei shakes her head, talking to the men, telling them about how things could be better and how the loyalist is not getting a good picture on how things really are. She is threatened more and more as she denies it, telling them that good can be gained if the loyalist was in order to listen, and learned that the CCA is not the way to go. They could have a potential ally rather than suspicion CCA is better. Zai’Lakei continues to talk about how things could work on their behalf and that killing an innocent person who has done no harm to anyone’s life could be spared. One of the men does not want to hear it and aims his weapon upwards as she begins to channel her vortessence, with no intention to harm the man.
The other men raise their weapons ready to fire as Zai’Lakei aims her vortessence to a light (Assuming there is a light, or some object to throw them off) as she moves away from the point of fire. Zai’Lakei continues to give the men a chance on offering how they can make things better. Scenario A.) they accept, Zai’Lakei would smile with happiness telling them that nothing is to be gained through death but mourning and trouble. As they understand. Scenario B.) they do not accept still and now are attempting to kill her ,Zai’Lakei runs to a covering area humming with her vortessence channeling as she throws the beam of electricity to the man in front of the other, making him fall into one’s line of sight. As they stop firing looking to the man,
having to reload as Zai’Lakei expresses that this is the grief and sorrow she wishes to prevent. Scenario C.) they stop in understanding and she would call out to nearby kin in attempt to revive the man. Scenario D.) they are enraged and want nothing but death Zai’Lakei would continue to defend her-self, suffering wounds but fending the men off.

6.  Detail from a third-person standpoint how your Vortigaunt character would resolve the following scenario: You have just observed a refugee trick a fellow refugee in a vastly unfair trading deal. The conman is about to escape with the unjustly-obtained goods.
Assuming that Zai’Lakei is a distance away from him, she would use her flux shifting to grab the attention of the man, if that didn’t work position herself near an advantage and fire off a beam to stop him. If the man is stopped she would tell him of how his wrong doings can seriously affect the man and that he should return the fair amount of items, and in return he would be able to make an ally who can support him when needed, and if needed give him currency. If he agrees and goes back to the man, Zai’Lakei would continue her way, if it did not work Zai’Lakei would call out to the other man, as the other man approaches she would explain the situation the best she can, and let the two argue over it. When the two continue to argue she would intervene and make a point saying “Is it really worth it?” Asking him if the money is really worth it, as he explains himself the two begin to understand each other and their situations. If the argument was to get physical Zai’Lakei would step in, doing an intimidating screech or shoving them apart.
She would explain the actions of the Conman are wrong and it can be better if he returns the things, being more on the side of the man who was conned. If the man continues to deny and eventually run away, zai’lakei would walk with the man, telling him of people better off helping him, giving the man anything she could spare if possible doing her best to make sure he can be left in better hands. If the man was to not get away and finally just give up and come to an agreement, Zai would be happy and ensure the man does not lie for greed again. Zai’Lakei would try her best to be the least aggressive as possible, doing her best to make sure they can see a direction they can both agree on.

7.  Create an original piece of writing which involves at least one Vortigaunt and at least two citizens. The scenario must include at least 30 lines of dialogue, of which at least 15 must be spoken by a Vortigaunt.

Zai’Lakei stands silently in the room, as two citizens approach in, she shakes her head sideways, giving a small grin on her mouth and blinking her eye two times.
Citizen 1 jumps slightly at the sight of the alien creature
Citizen 2 gives out a small wave as his friend jumps back
Zai’Lakei says: Does this one presume to be frightening?
Citizen 1 says: Oh no, it’s completely fine it’s just, I do not like your eyes sometimes.
Citizen 2 frowns at her friend saying “Well that isn’t very nice to say to a being who can destroy you in two seconds.”
Zai’Lakei says “This one means no harm to others,”
Citizen 2 says :Right sorry.”
In walks another man, covering his face sitting down at a counter
Zai’Lakei Looks at the man, giving out a deep continues humming sounds
Citizen 1 says “Could you be quieter I have a horrible headache.”
Zai’Lakei stops, saying “This one does not intend to hurt.”
The mysterious man in the room approaches citizen 2 from behind slowly
Zai’Lakei Watches this action, her eye squinting some
Mysterious man brings out a knife smiling and maniacally giggling bringing it around citizen 2’s neck
Zai’Lakei goes into a defensive stance, angry as she says “Do not inflict harm upon the innocent.” She says before citizen 1 angry, move to tackle the man
Mysterious man falls slicing citizen 2’s back falling down, making a deep cut as the citizen falls to the ground screaming
Zai’Lakei moves to the mysterious man, seeing him and citizen 1 are fighting, citizen 1 doing a good job fending him off bends down grabbing citizen 2’s shirt dragging her to the other side of the room as citizen 1 falls off of him, the man about to kill him
Zai’Lakei hums channeling energy, green orbs are seen from her hands as a lightning like effect places around her hands, moving to the mysterious man’s leg hitting it as he falls down screaming and yelling in pain saying “Do not kill him.”
Citizen 1 would ignore her as he takes the knife stabbing him in the chest twice before Zai’Lakei can move to grab him arm stopping him as the man slowly dies from punctures.
Zai’Lakei says “Let this one rest internally, we must attend to your friend,”
Citizen 1 breathing heavily and thinking about what he does nods and rushes over to his friend scared he says “What are we gunna’ do what are we gunna’ do.”
Zai’Lakei says “Do not panic this one can help.”
Citizen 2 breaths rapidly as she doesn’t move too much in pain
Zai’Lakei Hums as if she was singing as a light green orb appears from her hands, as she joins them together looking up with her eyes closed, bringing the light over her wound as she hums louder, then speaking in votergeese “Taaar, Chur lung gong chella gurr..”
Citizen 2’s breathing calms as she winces some
Zai’Lakei takes her hand away after about a minute of healing the room no longer being illuminated by a light green orb.
Zai’Lakei Stands up more straight, walking over to the corpse throwing it over her shoulder struggling some “This one will dispose of the murderer.”
Citizen 1 laughing some from the act nods saying okay
Zai’Lakei “ Do not result to killing, it is wrong and does nothing but scar you. Instead reflect upon how you can settle things in a better way.” She says before climbing the stairs going out to place the body in the canals, after digging some..
Zai’Lakei says “So much life thrown away, corruptness tainting ones who could be better.”
Zai’Lakei Shakes her head clasping her claws together humming the tune she was originally in the bar, as last respect of the dead.
Zai’Lakei walks away bringing her slouched back up some, shaking her neck going back down to the bar
Citizen 1 is seen holding Citizen 2
Zai’Lakei Watches as she observes the human’s affection, thinking of her past before silently leaving once more.
Zai’Lakei Has a more depressed look upon her face as she looks up into the night sky humming some, walking away reflecting upon her history, and the events that just spiraled.

Extra notes:
Zai’Lakei would be my first Vortigaunt character if this works, I would be very proud and happy to RP something with very unique history and culture. Rp’ing the sacred bond between Zai’Lakei and her small amount of vortessence powers. And having no goal but to put people on a better path until she can react with her fellow people. I’d love to RP the depressing feelings of so many lost people, and trying to understand humanity from something so close to each other.
Oh and sorry if this wasn't the right place to post.

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Something about the age of my Vortigaunt, knowing that they live 500 years of age and everything 87 seems like a 9 year old in human-to-"Vort" years. So that'd interfere with the entire, more tactical and wise over aggresive and such, so i'd like to change it but I won't without some sort of all clear.

Denied - Okay, I won't lie to you, I was impressed. Almost everything about you application was outstanding. I was liking the amount of information you put in the informational questions and what not and you had good vocabulary. A couple spelling errors but nothing major. Where things got really shaky was on your RP example. The examples you provided were mediocre at best and I know you can do better. You have the basics of Vortigaunt speaking but i recommend using more advanced words for instance, where you said you could help the guy who got hurt you could have been like-
"Worry not, this one is fully capable of lending aid to the Human."
Or something of the like. So just resubmit in a week with a better rp example.

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Alright thanks for your output and guidance
The thing I hate most about applications are if they ask for scenarios
My Rp is very stale and boring with a real respondent but ill try to be more in depth next Monday

It's okay, just get it out.

Alright let me throw in what I want to say. It’s split down the middle, what it seems to boiled down to is that we get NO say in what’s going on, our opinions do not matter, and I believe no matter what, what they try to achieve will be absolutely fucked up because it's going right back to what it was, maybe different people for HC, but it was good, and getting better, we had projects, good leaders, enough to keep going. CG could've used some tweaks with the CCA but not all this bullshit, it causes drama, hate, and it gives no better opinion to CG for the users. Zealot threw his opinion in, but like every time someone who “has” been there, or is never even around in the first place, takes judgment and brushes everything off. What I think is going through everyone’s head is that some people need to get off high horses, and look through our eyes. It’s not about rank; it’s about everything we had to do to get to it. I really never met someone who is a rank, JUST for this or that. If you are doing it, it’s your character development correct? Why are we changing what they wanted, maybe they wanted to climb this metaphorical mountain of promotions quickly, maybe they feared it would be gone, and out of their grasp.
But for people who wish they had seen the sights, always can ask their leader to be demoted to a certain rank for a reason. This seems unnecessary, all you need to do is be active more often, and watch people and pull them out slap them on the hand, or punish severely, then you’re done. Not carry burdens on everyone else who has worked hard, and I’m pretty sure that’s what they all meant. You may have done this before, but that was then, when things were different. Now there are sub-divisions with high purpose, and there are projects that we need to sit and wait to slowly cliiiimb back up to do. Also, why would you say something like “Oh you need to take in the experience as an 03” or something if now only some of us have more motivation to get to the point so we can head back up.
Why can’t we just leave off where we started? Why don’t you care that people would leave for this, if users of CG are what makes it up, a passion of the people stripped away and postponed for another time it would make everyone angry, it’s like taking away a kid’s favorite cartoon, they want it sooo bad but they know they can’t do anything about it. Obviously this thread, and this entire argument we are all having here wouldn’t exist if you didn’t suffocate us with a dame pillow, and forcing our hands down. You may want it, but what about us? You can really enforce some stuff, serious business if you really want bad units gone. Are you absolutely sure there is no other way for restructuring and training, how about change up each division’s training manifest? They don’t have a manifest? Make them make one! Don’t resort to what people hate, resort to something they can accept. Some people already tossed their hats in when they saw this, you know why? Because they KNOW you won’t change your mind. That shouldn't happen! I feel like we as users, and some people who donate for CG deserve a say in things, before you stamp a seal of approval and call it finals. Now don’t get me wrong or anything, it sounds right, but I know it’s wrong because it’s such a setback that seems so un-needed right now. It should be a last resort! Like an autonomous waiver you don’t want to kill everyone because it’ll make them piss angry, and yes people are going to be butt hurt. Let’s say you JUST finished this super big project you’re so proud of, you love it, you’re comfortable in it. BAM in your face gone, have fun re-doing it because other people messed up. I get good RP’ers and good units who know their stuff can be given a hand, but then it’s survival of the fittest, why not helping each other up, quizzes, tests, in a suggestion that I was going to re-vise I was going to suggest that you are 1000% sure you know everything in uniform, you work off your malnourishment and tons of other stuff, but now that can’t be considered because of this crap. But actually for the people who don’t agree with the change, a nice person named orange said “Find good in it.” Then I said to him “It’s a personal preference, maybe I should” So if this really doesn’t stop, take the wise old orange’s wisdom.  Final verdict for my opinions: This is really un-needed, and whether you agree or disagree, you know that some people where happy, some weren’t before this idea came up.

Thats what I wanted to throw in before the thing got locked. Oh well, sniff sniff cry sob sniff more crying sob

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Eventually, this event will be a nice thing of the past.

If you enjoy posing, perhaps you could be interested in Source Filmmaker, its actually quite simple to make animated scenes.

I've tried, I managed to mess some stuff up, I do love artworks and have been trying to get into stop motion animations and even had many ideas for CG HL2RP I wanted to do, but I cannot yet. Like a podcast with many special guests, an intro scene for the CCA, a citizen, factions etc. CCA would be units doing basic stuff, searching, breaking doors down, etc etc. With some funny stuff in the background like a commander riding a unicorn, something faint and funny for no reason.  Then citizens would be them trying to avoid, and living in the tyrony and unjustified ways of the union. Etc.

This is very nice, I like very much, I think it's better than the current logos. But it could have the correct Division colors.