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Accepted Outlands Appeals / Outland Group Appeal.
« on: June 09, 2012, 09:36:27 PM »
Steam Name: Saimon-avatar
Steam ID: steam_0:1:19224887
Character Name: Jacques 'French' Laux
Tyrone Moore
Reason for the switch:
Our characters (Mainly mine Jacques).) got into some problems (IC problems)we decided we had to go back to the city if we wanted to keep our characters alive.
If required, write a detailed backstory on how your character left the outlands:
01/06/2012
Jacques had been hearing about a psychopath serial killer at the city. He meet some people that wanted to put an end to this killer, so he joined them. After some investigation they knew he was Irish and his last name was McCrearies. They had it all planned out, they were going to put an end to his monstrous actions. They were going to get him at his own home. After some time, they didn't find the man called McCrearies. They stopped waiting for him, and they all left wondering where was this man.
04/06/2012
Jacques had been looking for this man, any information regarding him. He heard rumors that McCrearies had left to the outlands hopping that the CCA would stop looking for him. That's when he meet a man called Harris, he was going to help him on getting this man.
05/06/2012
Jacques had been looking around the canals, trying to find any tunnel that could lead him to the outlands, he found a small tunnel at some dark place of the canals. Somehow he knew that, that was the place he was looking for.
06/06/2012
Harris had not showed for some time, Jacques was anxious. He started walking around D6 looking for him, he entered a room that had a horrible smell. He opened a container that was full of human organs. Jacques stepped back covering his nose looking at it, a man came into the room looking at the organs. They both walked out of there and got to meet each others. This man was called Tyrone, after Jacques telling his plans to Tyrone, Tyrone was willing to travel into the outlands with him. He knew how to fish, and some other good stuff. So, he was going to need him.
Some ours later they both took all food and water they could into his bags and went into that tunnel Jacques had found.
07/06/2012
After a long walk through the sewers of C45 they both saw a light at the end of the tunnel. They ran towards it yelling in happiness. They came out and found themselves on a large road. There was a sign that said 'Belles'n they followed the road and found a town. They looked on it, but they found nothing. So they continued and found a small camp with a pretty big lake. Tyrone went to fish as he was the one that knew how to fish while Jacques made a fire and took some of the fruit he had on his backpack out. They ate, and went to sleep.
08/06/2012
They woke up one cold morning, they had a talk and ate the last food they had. They both took separated ways, Tyrone was going to look for some supplies and Jacques was going to look for the man called McCrearies. They both accorded on going back to the camp at 4:00 pm. With no luck on finding McCrearies, Jacques came back to the camp finding Tyrone sitting on the grass and wearing a COTA vest. Jacques was amazed at what his friend had bought. Tyrone also showed him some shotgun shells, some SMG ammo and some food. They both ate and talk, when the clock ticked to 5:19 pm. Tyrone old Jacques about a trading post he had found on the road. They both went there and Jacques meet a new man called Marlow. He thought Marlow was a good person, that he would never have any problems with him. Many people were coming and going from that trading post, some of the looking for food, most of them looking for ammo. After some chat, Tyrone and Jacques continued exploring the outlands, they had heard about a bunker. So, they wanted to go to that bunker. They traveled there and meet a girl who had some pistol ammo, luckily this girl was mentally disturbed or something ,so she traded all her ammo for one single flashlight to Tyrone. They continued to the bunker and found out that there were no people on it.
Jacques had been wearing some nice elegant shoes he obtained at the city, but those shoes were not made for traveling long distances... He had to get some boots. They both found a old storage room with lots of locked boxes. They opened one using a old metal they had, the box was full of useless stuff. Toilet paper, old shoes and clothes. Although there was a pair of black boots. Jacques took them and threw his shoes into his backpack putting the boots on his feet. Suddenly a alarm got triggered, they decided on walking out from the bunker before anything bad happened.
09/06/2012
Jacques woke up, noticing that Tyrone was gone. He found a note saying 'I'll go and get some toys, you go and find McCrearies'. He ate some potatoes he had buy on the Marlows trading post. He went out looking for McCrearies. Some ours later he found Tyrone near the Marlows Traiding post, this time he had a flash bang, and a SMG. Jacques told Tyrone that he had meet some people that told him that McCrearies was back at the city, so he decided to help Tyrone on getting the supplies. After talking with many people at the trading post, Tyrone managed to exchange some pistol ammo for a shotgun with out shells. Luckily Tyrone already had some shotgun shells. Tyrone was ready to go, he had all the gear he wanted a SMG a shotgun and a Kevlar and a Flash grenade. Jacques had nothing... Just those boots he took from the box back at the bunker. Tyrone gave his flash to Jacques he said "Try and exchange it for a pistol. Call it through the radio, 133.5". Jacques took his radio and changed the frequency then radioed 'I'm trading a flash grenade and some medical supplies for a single pistol." Suddenly, a woman's voice could be heard "I'll trade it. I don't have ammo for it, so I'll trade it. Meet me at the Inn".
Jacques and Tyrone moved to the Inn, were they found this woman. She had pretty golden eyes and a Gashmask with some goggles. They made the exchange and left the Inn. While walking down the road, they saw a strange thing falling from the sky landing on a cliff that was near from them. They both decided to go and investigate. When they got to the cliff, many threes were burning, there were small headcrab traces all over the place, they knew that it was a head crab canister. They stepped back, that's when a headcrab jumped on Jacques arm biting it. Tyrone took his SMG out killing the headcrab. A second headcrab appeared out of no where jumping on Tyrone's Kevlar, he was pushed away. The headcrab jumped once more this time landing on Tyrone's arm and biting it. He kicked the headcrab out and leaned against a three. While Tyrone and the headcrab were fighting, Jacques was healing his wounds on his arm that was caused by the headcrab. He took something for the pain and proceed on healing Tyrone's arm. He also gave him something for the pain. As soon as Tyrone stood up, Jacques heard something behind him, he quickly turned around watching as the headcrab jumped towards him, he reacted in a fast way pushing the headcrab out of the way, he took his backpack throwing all the stuff inside of it. He threw the backpack on top of the crab taking it as prisoner. They both took the headcrab back to the town, on their way Tyrone told Marlow through the radio. They both were going to see each others at the Inn. When they arrived, the place was crowded. Marlow had brought one of his friends. It was the girl with the Golden eyes and gas mask. Jacques threw the headcrab to the bed. With out a warning, Marlow took a syringe out then stabbed the headcrab with it saying "This will relax it, don't worry."
Jacques didn't liked this, but he letted Marlow do what he had to do. They took the headcrab in a cage back to Marlow's post.  While they were walking down, marlow and his friend (Golden eyes female) started saying "Anyone but Marlow and Quinn needs to leave. We are going to heal the headcrab." Jacques and Tyrone did not liked this as they struggled on getting a living headcrab. After an argue they all had, they decided to step back and see how Marlow was 'saving' the headcrab from apparently nothing. Some minutes later the girl approched Tyrone stabbing him using a blade she had on her boot, Jacques quickly moved to their position taking his pistol out before she could do something. Tyrone was stabbed in his foot. Jacques began yelling and pointing the pistol against the girl. They all argued for a long time, the girl was about to die by Jacques hands. That's when Marlow asked her to go to the inn. He needed his supplies. Tyrone patched his foot with some bio-gel and some bandages. Jacques and the girl known as Quinn walked to the Inn, they were going to take Marlow's supplies. They took them with no difficulties, while they were heading back, Tyrone radioed 'Marlow killed the Headcrab'. Jacques looks back at Quinn saying "That's it. I told you, if the headcrab dies. You and Marlow will die." He pointed his gun at her, but she quickly jumped out of the way running back to the inn. Jacques shoot two bullets failing. He chased her towards the inn, were he was ambushed by Quinn, he was stabbed by her shoe with the blade on it, he had been stabbed in the leg. He stepped back pointing at her. A man with a shotgun appeared, Quinn shouted "Kill him beans! He is trying to kill me!" Jacques sais "No! You brought this on yourself! You took my headcrab against from me then your fucking friend murdered him!" Tyrone showed up, 'Beans' was poinitng at Jacques with a shotgun, many people appeared, they all seemed Quinn's friends. They all stood around Jacques. 'Beans' told Jacques to walk away, he didn't want to kill Jacques. Jacques did it as he knew he was surrounded by Quinns friends. As soon as he was at a safe distance he started running, he could see some of Quin's friends chasing him. As Jacques was fast, he lost them on the forest, he then met up with Tyrone at the bunker, they had a chat, they tried to fix things over the radio but Quinn didn't accept. Tyrone knew Quinn and many people on the outlands, he told jacques that the best thing to do, was running back to the city. He agreed. Jacques changed to his old shoes and took his shirt off and painted his pants with mud, that way no one would recognize him, as many people were looking for him. They both ran back to the tunnel. Tyrone took his SMG, shotgun and Kevlar with him, as it was many weight, he gave his SMG to Jacques. Jacques took his pistol and Tyrone's SMG. They both went back to the tunnel that brought them there.
As they saw the light of the tunnel, they started moving faster, they came out from the tunnel, they were all dirty with mud and nasty things. They were finally back at the city.

//How did Tyrone obtained his Kevlar and SMG?

Wandering on the outlands, after talking with French Tyrone began to scavenge, searching for ammo, medical supplies, anything he could use. He climbed up a small cliff, he started at a rock, there was something buried at the side of the rock. he smiled and started digging, he found out that it was 9mm ammo. Later he found some shotgun ammo near a small bridge...Staying to search for goods he found some more pistol ammo near a house, after some time he found some SMG ammo near a rock along with some old clothes, there was also blood stained on the rock. He climbed one tower and there he found some more shotgun ammo, than we went to marlow’s camp, at marlow’s camp he saw a mysterious man , he traded  some pistol ammo to the man in exchange of a SMG... Sometime later he was talking with a woman and with "French", he decided to see if the woman wanted to trade her pistol ammo for his flashlight, she actually accepted... At the same day he found a woman(I not telling her name because of various reasons) that wanted some pistol ammo than, he decided to trade it for her  scrapped COTA  vest...Later on the same day he found some more pistol ammo near a house that was near the bunker, he guarded the ammo for some time till he found a woman (another woman) on marlow’s camp and decided to see if she wanted trade her shotgun for pistol, she accepted...On the next day, Tyrone climbed one rope, he began scavenging, he could not belive it, he found more SMG ammo bellow some pilled rocks that had a cross on them. He took the SMG ammo and headed back to the camp trying to find Jacques.

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IC Chat / Re: The chronicles of Dr. Chloe Shefield. (Outlands)
« on: June 06, 2012, 01:42:13 PM »
// Oh my god, no updates of Dr.Chloe over a month? Damn it! She is still alive right?!

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I just wanted to know if this application is getting accepted as I've been waiting 12 days just to know...

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Natasza Zielinska.'s Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: Saimon-avatar

IC Character Name: Natasza Zielinska.

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
Natasza has been living at city 45 for two months, since the combine invaded the earth she has been helping them by reporting any anti-citizen she finds. She does this at the most discreet way possible. Since she was born she has been obeying the law and has been always a good listener.

Back at city 12 she was known as the "Snake", because of her discretion. She gains the confidence of her victims then asks them all about their personal life. After her prays speak about their crimes, she makes up an excuse and walks away and reports them. The people she reports always gets caught because of the way she describes them. Almost a perfect description.

She has been trying to join the CCA team since a unit at city 45 helped her when the rats came running out from the sewers (This was an event made my globey.). She was inspired by the bravery of this unit and has been like her hero. She's been trying really hard on reporting any anti-citizen she finds instead of making jobs as cleaning the streets fro the CCA. She does this because she thinks it's best to report law breakers than to clean the streets from any trash.

2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Smart, discrete as a snake, confident, loyal, emphatic, knows how to convince people for her own or the Universal Union purposes.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
What I expect for joining the Combine Civil Authority is to drastically change my way on role-playing. I've been playing in this server for quiet a long time and I have observed that the CCA gets to have many fun events. They also give a really good Half Life 2 abmient to the server.  All-in-all, I can describe the CCA to be a fun experience on Catalyst Gaming. The faction is quite hard to get into, since the applications are looked at so harshly, and no-doubt roleplays of upmost seriousness will be located within the faction.

Natasza expects from the CCA to find people that are like her, loyal to the Universal Union and to find more action in her life. She is also expecting a to work under strees, as working under strees is the best way she works. She has been dreaming on joining the CCA and capturing a really dangerous criminal, that's one of her mainly goals, capturing one of the most dangerous anti-citizens in city 45. Adapting to the new environment will difficult since she knows nothing on CCA etiquiete currently, but she believe it will be rewarding and even fun.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Natasza Zielinska was born in Poland at the state of Zachodniopomorskie.
She grew up with her grandparents as her mother and father left her and moved to another country.  When she was little she loved watching criminology programs. She also loved the books from Sherlock Holmes. She was always dreaming of becoming a detective or any kind of police officer that could help people solve their problems. Their grandparents never liked the idea of Natasza becoming a police officer or a detective as she was a really young and beautiful woman; they wanted her to become a mother and giving birth to 4 Polish babies. So they took her out from school and banned the criminology programs and any kind of criminology books from her.  This made Natasza really angry and decided to escape and live on the city. Where she knew she had better chance on studying criminology. At the age of 19 she entered the National Polish criminology university, although she was not to long studying there as one morning the Combine invaded the earth. After the whole war she never heard about her grandparents again. She had the idea that the Universal Union was here to help humanity; she saw in them a good chance on becoming what she ever wanted. Someone that could enforce the law. 
She was always looking for a way on how to help the CCA. She never liked the nasty works as cleaning the streets, cleaning the windows or getting the garbage out from the trash cans. So she started going into the slums of city 12, she had never been there, she found a whole place filled with criminals and anti-citizens. Her first victim was a man with a eye patch. She gained the man’s trust and asked him what he did for living. The man told everything to her, he was organizing a small group that were going to kid nap a low ranking unit that was always walking down the old coffee shop.  Ash soon as she heard that she made a really convincing excuse and walked out from the building. She headed towards the nearest high rank unit and reported the man with the eye patch. The man was taken as a prisoner and Natasza received a small reward for her loyalty.


5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
No.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
Around 2 years, maybe 2 years and a half.

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
Around 2 years, maybe 2 years and a half.

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
For about five months.

4. What Time zone are you in?
GMT - 5:00

5. In what country do you live?
Mexico.

6. How old are you?
16.

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
Well, there has been so many... I think It would be have been on my dead Character Daeny Morrsion. When I helped a vortigaunt remove his chains... It was really epic. He had to heat the chains until he could break them using his force, at the end I had to clean his wounds.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes.



IC Section

Full Name: Natasza Zielinska.
CID: 35344
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Height: 5'3
Hair Colour Light Brown.
Eye Colour: Dark Green.
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 119.
Mental Distinctions: Intelligent, observant, empathic.
Mental Defects: Stubborn.
Mental Advantages: Works better under stress.
Notable Qualities: Willing to die at service.


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
No.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes.

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
As a citizen I've seen many crimes and people abusing from other people. I'd like to join the CCA forces so I can give a stop to this. I'd like to continue on capturing anti-citizens as I have done during my whole residency at city 45. I would also like to help the people that are willing to listen and cooperate with the Universal Union.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Natasza Zielinska. hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.

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This story is sick xD Rapping every where!

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Well, you can't just say "he had no records" and try to get away with it because you can't. Once you get those papers for the GIGN, you can't go back. One more thing, your backstory isn't very organized because it is often confusing and even contains a few grammaritical errors and/or word structure.

Stalker, the government faked his death. His family, his friends, everyone he knew thought he was dead. I am not saying he lost all his records. I am saying that he had no records because he was a new man, a man that nobody knew. They wanted Jacques to be one of their best spies they ever had. So they did the best they could to prevent any new records about him.
About the grammatical errors, I did my best as English is not my first language. I double checked the grammar and the structure at different writing programs. No one is perfect, I don't think there are many spelling mistakes.
Besides, why are you even judging my authorization application this way? I thought admins were the only ones that could judge your applications this way.

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Well, if you read the whole authorization it says how my character obtained all of this abilities. My character used to be a GIGN soldier.(As I wrote: "This group is trained to perform counter-terrorist and hostage rescue missions in France or anywhere else in the world." So yes, this soldiers would be well trained.) He was also a ex-french spy. (He was not killed durring the seven hours war. I  did explain this in the authorization.)
Although you do have a point with the boots, I can remove them if an admin tells me to do that. About the AO Mason rescue knife, anyone can hide one of those knifes, they are about 15 cm maybe less.

 If he was a GIGN soldier then why did he enter a city? It appears that in the backstory, he was in the GIGN for 27 years until the Seven Hour War. There would be a lot of information about him and he would be spotted on sight and amputated eventually.
Again, you are not reading the whole application. It EXPLAINS everything. He was not a GIGN member when  the seven hours war started. He became a spy some years before the seven hours war. It explains it all, it even explains why and how he became a spy.

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It appears that you ask too much for a authorization (five traits for one character is way too much, I mean, your character would have to have a pre-job (like being a constable or military soldier) instead of just getting it automatically. And those items being kept in the city are not allowed due to the obvious fact that the Civil Protection search people well enough. What I mean by "well enough" is like the end of a scale from low to high. Combat boots aren't exactly similiar to pedestrian boots either and small knives wouldn't effect people at a large range. Just so you know.

Well, if you read the whole authorization it says how my character obtained all of this abilities. My character used to be a GIGN soldier.(As I wrote: "This group is trained to perform counter-terrorist and hostage rescue missions in France or anywhere else in the world." So yes, this soldiers would be well trained.) He was also a ex-french spy. (He was not killed durring the seven hours war. I  did explain this in the authorization.)
Although you do have a point with the boots, I can remove them if an admin tells me to do that. About the AO Mason rescue knife, anyone can hide one of those knifes, they are about 15 cm maybe less.

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Player Section

Steam Name: Saimon-avatar
Age: 16
How long have you been Roleplaying? (can be any game): 2 Years.
How long have you been playing Serious GMod RP?: 2 Years.

Character Section

Authorization(s):
Sneaking Abilities.
Spying Abilities.
Hand to Hand combat training.
30 cm steel wire.
AO Mason Rescue Knife (This knifes are really little, about 15 cm).
Weapon Training.
Combat Boots.
Minor medical knowledge.
Being able to teach (good) players rudimentary fighting. (I would teach players who I think are the best roleplayers and that deserve it.)
 

Name: Jacques 'French' Laux
Age: 42
Gender: Female
Affiliation: Resistance

Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.

Back on 1989 Jacques Laux used to be a member of the GIGN (Groupe d'intervention de la Gendarmerie Nationale, by it's name in French).This group is trained to perform counter-terrorist and hostage rescue missions in France or anywhere else in the world. It was created in 1973. On 1990 Jacques was sent to a special mission to a French state called Var, intelligence had information about a small terrorist group getting a weapon shipment at a old Church called 'La Visite'. When he arrived to the church with his men, the church was empty; there were no shipment and no terrorist. Jacques order his men to search the place for any suspicious artifacts or anything that was linked to a terrorist group. As soon as they all got separated he heard someone shouting followed by some gun shots. He took cover and picked trough a corner; he saw some terrorist pointing at his men. Jacques stood up aiming his FAMAS rifle at the terrorist, quickly a terrorist started shooting at the GIGN soldier, as soon as Jacques saw this he started shooting at the terrorist. His whole team was killed by the terrorists, it was all a trap; Jacques was the only one left from his team. He crawled towards a desk taking cover; a terrorist saw him and started shooting towards the desk. A bullet got into Jacque's liver causing him extreme pain. He took one of his flashbangs and threw it towards the terrorists, as soon as it flashed the terrorist he ran out of the church applying some instant ice on his bullet hole. He threw himself into a old canal calling for help as he was loosing a lot of blood. He fainted some minutes later.

About 30 minutes passed and a whole new team arrived to the church, the terrorists where gone. They found Jacques team killed then found Jacques laying on a canal almost dying. They took Jacques to a doctor and took his bullet out and patched his wound.The french government saw an opportunity on this. They faked his death. The government told his family that he was murdered by the terrorist, soon all the newspapers and communication media were talking about this incident. Jacques Laux had no identity left. He was like a ghost. No records about him, no anything, accordingly to the government and the entire world, he was already dead. As soon as he woke up, they told him about this, he was taken into a top-secret government agency called T.O.P.S. He was trained under the sneaking abilities and Spying abilities. He was becoming a secret Spy that no one knew, as he had no records left.  Some years later he was one of the best T.O.P.S. agents, he became also an instructor, he taught the new recruits hand to hand combat and many other things.
He was given many different missions all around the world, he was known as 'French'.

-During the Seven hours war-

In 1996 T.O.P.S. was given some information by the French intelligence about a new 'weapon' that China was developing. They sent one of their best men, 'French'. His mission was to go to a place called Anxi at China.

-Anxi, China 1996 0200 hours-
Jacques 'French' Laux was approaching to what looked to be a Chinese abandoned factory. The factory was surrounded by forest and there was a small river crossing the forest. He entered the old factory and noticed a lot of old machinery; he started investigating the whole factory. He found a door that had some Chinese letters '????'. He pushed the door and found a giant metal door that had the numbers '01-04' painted on top of it. He noticed to guards at the entrance of the door, so he took a small object that looked like a normal pen and pointed it towards one of the guards. He triggered the object shooting a small dart that hit the guard’s neck. The guard quickly fall down to the ground distracting the second guard. As the guard approached to the guard that was on the floor Jacques sneaked through his back and broke the guard’s neck. He opened one small door that lead into a underground corridor that lead into a giant underground base. He was armed with a Tactical USP.45, a combat knife, a 30 cm steel wire and several tranquilizers. He opened a door that said "Authorized personal only", he stepped into the room without making any sound, and suddenly a figure came out from the shadows quickly hitting Jacques's cheek making him go unconscious.

-Anxi, China 1996 ? ? ? ? Hours-

Jacques woke up tied to a chair, he had a bag on his head, his gear was gone. A man with a black suit came into the room saying some words in Chinese. Jacques stayed quiet without saying a thing, a man was behind him equipped with a famas rifle. The man that just came in started talking in English "Where are you from? Japan? United States? Uhh!?" Jacques stayed quiet trying not to rebel his French accent. The Chinese man stared at him for a moment, he took Jacques combat knife away from his sleeve saying "Don't worry, we will make you talk." The Chinese man walked out of the room, as soon as he did that, the man behind Jacques (The one with the famas rifle) Pushed Jacques making him fall to the ground along with the chair, he putted the cotton bag back to his head walking out of the room leaving him alone.

-Anxi, China ? ? ? ? Hours - Next day.
Jacques woke up, he was all covered in sweat and her wrists were burning because of the ties he had. A tall man with one white eyes and a scar crossing his left eyes was staring at him. The man raised his right hand showing to Jacques some small black tweezers. “Who do you work with?” Said the man in a clear english accent. Jacques kept silence not showing any kind of fear. “Alright, we’ve got all the time of the world. You won’t get out from this place unless you tell me who sent you.” The man with the tweezers pushed Jacques to the ground squeezing the tweezers. The man placed the edge of the tweezers of Jacques upper lip saying “There will be no more chances. I will only repeat once more. Who sent you?” The MI-6? The NRS? The SVR? What about our friends from the CIA?” Said the man with a clear English accent. He closed the tweezers causing Jacques a lot of pain. As soon as he stopped a loud sound could be heard out of the room, he turned around leaving the tweezers in front of Jacques and saw that the emergency light was on. He walked out of the room and told one of the Chinese guards to stay guarding Jacques. While the man was talking with the Chinese guard Jacques pushed the tweezers with his head and hid the tweezers behind him. While the Chinese guard was waiting just outside of the room Jacques reached for the tweezers and started cutting the ties with the part of the tweezers used for cutting wires. He slowly stood up and sneaked through the Chinese guard’s back. He putted his hands against the man’s head quickly breaking his neck. Jacques took the guard’s keys and the gun, he checked the clip. The clip had 9 bullets. Jacques continued walking until the end of the corridor and found a door with the letters ‘ ???’. He opened the door using the guard’s keys and found a room with lots of computers and a locker containing Jacques equipment. He took his equipment and checked all the computers for any useful information. He found some information about some secret Chinese base located under the mountains of the region known as ‘Hami’at the north of China. He ran out of the underground base and came out through what looked to be a principal entrance, a giant metal door (Like does giant blasts doors you can see at Portal 2). The forest was around the base, there was a big strange machine with several strange letters lying on the floor, there were fire all around of it along with many men. It looked like a war zone. Jacques continued and walked into the forest. There was a strange silence on the forest; there were no sounds, not even a sound of a flying bird or any river. Jacques continued walking for two hours until a giant ship came flying out of nowhere, as soon as it passed Jacques the giant ship turned back and drop three small pods. The pods landed about thirty meters away from Jacques, he stared at the pods. Some seconds later the pods were opened and three strange figures came out from them, one of the figures was about two meters and had three long legs. This strange figure made a loud sound and started shooting towards Jacques. Jacques jumped taking cover in a tree, the two other figures started speaking in a strange dialect. Suddenly the figures started advancing towards Jacques. Jacques noticed this and started running in the opposite direction shooting his gun. He ran out of bullets and threw his gun and continued running. While Jacques was running he felt into a hole that was covered with plants leaves. He hitted his head against a branch falling down almost unconscious. The three strange figures passed the hole without noticing Jacques. Jacques felt unconscious. Two hours later he woke and, it was night he climbed out of the hole and checked then climbed a tree to see his surroundings. At the distance, he saw a small village about one hour away from his place. He walked towards the village. When he arrived he found out that there was one of those strange big ships at the entrance of the village and many other figures like the ones that chased Jacques through the forest having a group of civilians as hostages. Jacques knew that this was no army from any other nation, so he sneaked into a destroyed house and changed his clothes for normal civilian clothes. He lefts his boots with him and hid his AO Mason knife in his boot. He tied around his leg a steel wire he had and threw away his tranquilizers. He came out of the house raising his hands, as soon as the creatures saw him they took him with the rest of the civilians and tied him.
After the Seven hours war.
Jacques was taken to one of the citadels, the combine couldn’t find anything about his past so they never knew he worked for the government or was one of the best secret spies of France. Jacques told them their really name and told them that he was from Italy. The combine gave him his CID and his new clothes. They gave him a new identity. They actually never took Jacques boots as they thought that they were normal boots and Jacques (as he was a very good convincing person because of his training.) told them that he would need does boots for working.


What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
Being able to teach responsible players some fighting techniques.
Having a chance to defend myself.
If ever getting a fire gun, being able to use it and taking care of it.
Being able to to sneak and spy the people.

Defects
People might want to hurt me for any equipment I might have.
People might want ti kill my as they might see me as a threat.
If the combine would know my secret identity, I would get on the BOL list.
I would need to use 'French' instead of my real name.
Being a very paranoid person.

What do you plan to do with these perks/defects?
Improve my role-playing abilities and having the good and responsible players learn something from my character. Also creating a lot of passive role-playing as Jacques wouldn't want people knowing about his abilities. Taking care of someone's fire guns and trying to solve problems with this characters abilities.

Will anyone else need these auths? (If so, list OOC and IC name(s))
No.

Which server does this apply for?
City

Extra Notes (optional):
This is the second time I make this authorization application because the first time I did it, it was denied and they told me to make it all over again. I was told this by a ex-super admin who's name is shes (He used to have another name but I can't remember it right now.) He said: ' If you do an entirely new authorisation application without having to be editted afterward I will re-consider it.' So here it is, an entirely new application. Another extra note, I did mention how I obtained all the objects that I am applying for in case you did not see them. You just need to check once more.

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Edited. Corrected all the spelling mistakes. I hope this gets accepted. :D

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This authorization is just amazing, I don't know why the SA or Waffle has not accepted this, this application has been here for 57 days and no owner or SA has commented it scene 9 days... I give you a +SUPPORT

(I don't know if I can support this, but still. I will support it.)

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Player Section

Steam Name: Saimon-avatar
Age: 15
How long have you been Roleplaying? (can be any game): 2 Years.
How long have you been playing Serious GMod RP?: 2 Years.

Character Section

Authorization(s):
Sneaking Abilities.
Spying Abilities.
Hand to Hand combat training.
AO Mason Rescue Knife (This knifes are really little, about 13 cm).
Weapon Training.
Combat Boots.

Name: Jacques 'French' Laux
Age: 42
Gender: Male
Affiliation: Resistance

Back on 1996 Jacques Laux used to be a member of the GIGN anti-terrorist special French forces, the GIGN was formed in 1973.
On 1994 he was sent into what looked to be for the French intelligence a terrorist meting point. It was all a trap, as soon as he arrived to the location with three other men, a flash bang came out from the window exploding. The entire platoon was blinded, that's when Jacques heard several shoots and men yelling. While he tried to take cover behind some barrels he was shoot near the liver area making him fall to the ground before he could hide. He looked up, he saw how his men were being massacred; he couldn't do anything as the pain was too big for him to move. He passed out. One hour later he woke up with a big pain on his stomach; there was blood all around him. He felt that he had no energies left. He looked around noticing that his whole platoon was dead. The terrorists thought that Jacques was already dead so they left him there. He reached for his radio radioing "It was all a trap... My whole team is dead... I am bleeding out...". He left the radio, placing some instant ice he had on his pouch near the bullet wound. After 10 minutes a whole GIGN team entered the area, noticing almost all the people dead. They took Jacques away and patched him up. The French government saw an opportunity on this. They faked his death. The government told his family that he was murdered by the terrorist, soon all the newspapers and communication media were talking about this incident. Jacques Laux had no identity left. He was like a ghost. No records about him, no anything, accordingly to the government and the entire world, he was already dead. As soon as he woke up, they told him about this, he was taken into a top-secret government agency called T.O.P.S. He was trained under the sneaking abilities and Spying abilities. He was becoming a secret Spy that no one knew, as he had no records left.
After many secret missions that T.O.P.S. gave him, he was known as 'The French', that was his key name.

During the Seven hours war.

In 1996 the French military intelligence team obtained information about China making nuclear weapons.  They wanted to know if that was true, so they T.O.P.S sent one of their best agents to investigate, they sent 'French'.

-Anxi, China 1996 0200 hours-

Jacques was walking though what looked to be a secret Chinese military base near a lake called Lop. He was armed with a Tactical USP.45, a combat knife and several tranquilizers. He opened a door that said "Authorized personal only", he stepped into the room without making any sound, suddenly a figure came out from the shadows quickly hitting Jacques's cheek making him go unconscious.

-Anxi, China 1996 ? ? ? ? Hours-

Jacques woke up having a cotton bag on his head, suddenly someone removed the bag. He was tied up to a chair, legs and arms were tied, he was at a dark room, a light was hitting on him making him dazzled. A man with a black suit came into the room saying some words in Chinese. Jacques stayed quiet without saying a thing, a man was behind him equipped with a famas rifle. The man that just came in started talking in English "Where are you from? Japan? United States? Uhh!?" Jacques stayed quiet trying not to rebel his French accent. The Chinese man stared at him for a moment, he took Jacques combat knife away from his sleeve saying "Don't worry, we will make you talk." The Chinese man walked out of the room, as soon as he did that, the man behind Jacques (The one with the famas rifle) Pushed Jacques making him fall to the ground along with the chair, he putted the cotton bag back to his head walking out of the room leaving him alone.

-Anxi, China ? ? ? ? Hours - Next day.

A man entered to the room looking down at Jacques, as he was still on the ground.
"You scum. Who sends you?! Uh!" The man said on a heavy Chinese accent. The man kicked Jacques on the stomach making spit on the bag, after kicking him; the man took the bag off from his head. Jacques was sweating and thirsty. "Tell me or I will cut your fingers off!" said the Chinese man with a angry expression. Jacques said nothing looking back at a man that was standing outside of the door, holding a famas rifle. "Aren't you going to tell me, you piece of shit!" yelled the Chinese man throwing two more kicks at Jacques stomach. The Chinese man threw a little bag to the ground with various tools. He opened the bag taking a sharp object out showing it to Jacques saying "I have all the day." He inserted the sharp object into Jacques nails making him yell in pain. "Are you Russian!? French!? English?!" the Chinese man kept yelling while he tortured Jacques. He stood up taking some rusty tweezers out from the bag saying "I'm going to take your nails off if you don't speak!" Suddenly an explosion was heard out from the room, the Chinese man quickly turned around asking to the man on the door what that was in Chinese language. He walked out from the room ordering something to the man on the door, the man on the door walked towards Jacques throwing a kick on his stomach. He spitted some blood with saliva.

Some minutes later the Chinese with the strong accent came back to the room yelling some Chinese words to the man with the famas rifle. Quickly the man with the famas rifle brought a small AO Mason Rescue Knife cutting the strings that were tying Jacques's legs. As soon as the man did that, Jacques quickly pushed him down graving him by the neck with his legs. The Chinese man started yelling trying to reach for his famas rifle, Jacques quickly moved his legs around breaking the man's neck. Struggling, Jacques reaches for the small AO Mason Rescue Knife taking it and cutting the rest of his ties. As he did that, many explosions could be heard along with many strange sounds. As soon as he finished cutting the ties he stood up taking the dead man's pistol it was a Taurus "99" pistol. He walked out from the room realizing that there were no guards around. He ran out trying to find an exit, at the end of the corridor there was a door that had some Chinese letters, he pushed the door, it was locked, he aimed the gun to the lock shooting at it, the door opened. Jacques ran out to what looked to be a big storage room, there were many boxes that said Fragile, some of them had the radiation symbol. He ran out from that storage room through a back door, there was a Chinese guard with a famas aiming it towards a door, he seemed to be scared. Jacques sneaks through his back quickly stabbing the man on the gut then breaking his neck using his both hands. He ran through some stairs, reached to a room where there was a big window with an amazing look to what looked to be a city at the distance. Jacques noticed his equipment was on a table, he quickly took his communication device trying to communicate with T.O.P.S. central, he had no luck, so he left his equipment on the table rushing out of the room. After walking in circles for what seemed an eternity he found the Exit door, that lead him into a forest. There was a strange machine lying on the floor, many Chinese guards were around it, they were all dead. The strange machine looked to have a small hole at the middle. The machine had some letters he had never see; it looked like something out from this world. Jacques ran deep into the forest trying to hide anywhere he could in case a Chinese patrol saw him.
 
-Anxi, China  0912 Hours-
Jacques stopped for a moment catching some air putting the gun on his left hand, he looked up, there were many ships flying on one direction. "Does are not helicopters or any kind of combat or commercial air planes..." Said Jacques; still looking at the strange ships. As soon as he looked down three strange figures came out from the forest shooting at him, he started running away from the strange figures shooting all the bullets in his pistol. As soon as he ran out of ammo he threw the pistol to the ground and threw himself into a hole, hopping the strange figures couldn't find him. The strange figures approached talking a strange dialect; they keep silence for a minute then walked off.
About 15 minutes later Jacques came out from the hole carefully looking around for any other strange thing. He saw that the area was cleared and walked to the south.
-Anxi, China  0912 Hours- The next day
Jacques saw a small town at the distance, there was a lot of smoke coming out from the houses. He walked towards the town.
50 minutes later he arrived to the town, quickly taking cover inside a destroyed house. He peered through the window and notices that there were more of those strange figures he saw at the forest, in one side of the street there was a big group of 40 people sitting on the concrete with their hands and legs tied. Jacques looked around finding a small wooden closet; he was still wearing his tactical spying clothes. He quickly opened the closet changing his clothes into normal civilian clothes. He threw his Rescue knife on his booth slowly walking out from the room with his hands up. As soon as the strange figures saw him, they started yelling that strange dialect he heard at the forest, they took him as a prisoner and threw him with the rest of the people.
-Beijin, China  ? ? ? ? Hours-
He was giving a CID and a new name he never used. They gave him the new name as there was no record on him in any institution or anything, he was a ghost, and they also gave him new clothes but never bothered on taking his combat boots as they thought those were normal boots. They translated him into a city that the Combine called C8, Japan. That's when he met a man called Alex 'Crow', later 'Crow' was translated to C45. Some months later Jacques was also translated into City 45 for good behavior.

What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
Ability for sneaking and spying.
Having the Chance to defend myself.
If ever getting a fire gun, being able to use it and taking care of it.

Defects
People might Attack me for my boots.
If the combine would know my secret identity, I would get on the BOL list.
Having a Fake name at all times.
Probably hurting someone I care for.

What do you plan to do with these perks/defects?
Create good Rp and tell the closest people to me my back story and how I used to be a ghost. Also taking care of fire guns if I ever get one, or taking care of the guns from a friend that has one (If i ever get a friend with a weapon).

Will anyone else need these auths? (If so, list OOC and IC name(s))
No.

Which server does this apply for?
City

Extra Notes (optional):
AO Mason Rescue Knife: http://www.tuffstuff.us/f/tf-700mr.jpg

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This looks like a nice application, although you never mention how you got a Kevlar.

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Mapping / Re: City Twenty Four
« on: April 04, 2012, 02:18:04 PM »
Hello void, you were asking for suggestion and ideas, I've been working on a roleplay map that I might never finish, so I wanted to give you some ideas I drew about some buildings. (I also draw a nexus, if you want to see it reply to this or send me a Pm)

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/827/foto0206l.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/708/foto0207h.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/694/foto0208h.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/14/foto0209d.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/337/foto0210c.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/823/foto0211z.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/10/foto0221oa.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/191/foto0222pw.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/37/foto0223o.jpg/

Hope you can do something with this.
(For some reason the pictures do not load, so I will just leave the links.)

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Wooooa... **Raises hand** Can I get a bazuca?!

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