Wake up bitches! (SFM)

[Darkshifter98]

I used a clip from one of my favorite Rooster Teeth: Animated Adventures (Signs and Shotguns to be exact). This is my first released SFM video, and thought I'd upload it, since its the only project I've fully completed. Critism is appreciated, by the way.
<a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3HZPd2lA1q0" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3HZPd2lA1q0</a>

[Mr. Pettit]

It wasn't very fluent, but that's to be expected as that one was your first. Just work on making it more smooth and it will be better. I liked it too, made me lol.