Quote from: raged on May 08, 2013, 10:11:46 PM

my characters name is thomas mason add me to the roster please

 Don't know if troll or serious

It's not serious.

The POV sounds like it's a journal more than a story, which is something I despise in a story.

Fix some of the grammatical errors here and there, shouldn't be too hard to spot.

The story itself is patched and starts at one situation then jumps to another....no smooth transfering.

there was a small group of Overwatch guards and I silently waited for them to move away before continuing to my destination.

In CG canon, Overwatch don't randomly patrol the sewers, they only do it if something big went down. But I can see something happening in the background, but you not putting it in the backstory so i'll let it slide.

Also, military propaganda would more than likely be found in the Outlands (still hard to find). The UU did a lot to make sure military related items didn't get into their cities. So I won't agree to that.

Fix the grammar and i'll throw in my support. For now....

Neutral

Will fix it later its 4 in the morning atm and i have been up all night playing catalyst

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Quote from: Masterlordflame on May 05, 2013, 02:53:05 PM

Will fix it later its 4 in the morning atm and i have been up all night playing catalyst

How long haha I wasn't real big on writing essays but i will manage eventually but i will Prob need a little help with the perks ect either that i will have to rethink my characters entire Physical Desc.  Like the guy who replied above you said, Being a soldier isnt really lore friendly and would be shot on site but what about mercenaries

PMC's count as soldiers as they are armed and usually work with the military. As they are a private Military, then they would more than likely be treated as soldiers due to them actually fighting the combine along side other soldiers from many other countries.

Also improve your story. If you're going to have severe injuries, then you should at least tell people how you woke up in that dark room.

Spread this around for me.....USE DETAIL IN YOUR AUTHORIZATION APPLICATIONS.

What is this?

This is a group surrounded by violence (within the rules of course) and greed, but we also enjoy the passive way of life. A brand new group that, if populated, will be very powerful and influential to others. We "fight for the people" and try our best to "help out" the community.

What we do

We do a number of things:

• Raid
• Mug in groups of 3-4
• Kidnap government officals within reason
• Grow in mass numbers
• Provide Security to paying members
• Remove the mayor from Office if he can't satisify the Economy and other issues (Over Taxation and banning the sale of weapons)
• We smuggle in goods as well
• Hold public events!

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What about Government Positions?

If you're the mayor, then we shall form a council within the courtroom and discuss ways on how to...."Improve" the city. (You still have to follow the laws and rules OOCly. Which means no growing as/with mayor, no guns as mayor, etc.)

If you're an Officer of the Law, we'll leave you alone and we will cut all ties off until you quit your job, but if you stand in our way, we will not hesistate to kill you.

If you're a paramedic, then we'll treat you like a regular citizen.

If you're a firefighter, we'll leave you alone and cut off ties with you until you quit your job.

If you're a tow truck driver, we'll leave you alone and cutt off ties with you until you quit your job.

If you're a dispatcher/SS, we will not hesistate to kill you if you stand in our way of completeing an objective.

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I was alone one day and saw all of these people, jiggling around tons of cash and I saw all of these vans and cars and said to myself, what if I make an org similar to Los Zetas? That would be pretty awesome, all I need is members and i'm set. But then, I soon remembered how hard that was due to all of these old orginizations coming back. Yet, I will try my best to at least get this thing started.

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"PEOPLE OF EVOCITY! The tyranical movements of our Government have allowed our mayor, to set taxes state wide and implace state AND County rules! This is unacceptable! These police officers don't even enforce the law upon the ones that break them, but they break their sticks on the back of innocents! The gangs here, can be well oiled to form a new Government! Give them a chance and let us talk to them! If they don't agree, then we'll have to talk with the sword instead of the pen!"

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President:

IC Authorizations-

• Recruits/Enlists members
• Gives Authorization for a raid
• Calls for a mayoral "eviction"
• Organizes growing meetings
• Deals with Kidnapping deals and money handling
• Consult Security Details
• Lead a smuggle caravan
• Hold Public Events

OOC Authorizations-

• Can Accept/Deny Applications.
• Can change/revoke rules.

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Vice President:

IC Authorizations-

• Recruits/Enlists members
• Gives Authorization for a raid
• Organizes growing meetings
• Deals with Kidnapping deals and money handling
• Consult Security Details

OOC Authorizations-

• Can Accept/Deny Applications.

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Commander:

IC Authorizations-

• Gives Authorization for a raid
• Organizes growing meetings
• Deals with Kidnapping deals and money handling
• Consult Security Details

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Colonel:

IC Authorizations-

• Organizes growing meetings
• Deals with Kidnapping deals and money handling
• Consult Security Details

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Soldier(Advanced Grunt):

• Participates in Raids
• Provides Security for Growing Meetings
• Provides Security for people who hire

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Recruit(Basic Grunt)

• Provides Security for Growing Meetings
• Provides Security for people who hire

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Rules

• You must always listen to your superior officers.
• Do not fall out of your Authorization Range.
• If you want to raid, advise your superior officer first.
• ALWAYS mug/kidnap in groups. Never alone.
• If you get banned from OCRP for RDM, then you get removed. Other offenses will be determined and a verdict will be given.

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Punishments

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• First Offense: Warning
• Second Offense: Removal from group activities
• Third Offense: Finanical Compensation paid by member.
• Fourth Offense: Group Beating
• Fifth Offense: Removal followed by a firing squad.

Applications!

Probably the most important thing on this entire post.

1.Name-In game:

2.Steam Name:

3.Time spent on OCRP:

4.Country|TimeZone:

(OOC)5.Do you know the rules of OCRP and are you willing to abide by them?:

6.What is it you like to do?(Raid, Grow, Defend, etc.):

7.Have you been banned? If so, what for and how many times?:

8.Weapon of choice?:

9.Vehicals?:

10.What skills do you have?:

11.Describe Fear RP and provide a situation in which you would use it. Then provide a 5 sentence paragraph on what you would do:

12.Will you listen to those who are higher rank?:

13.As a new found member of Adfert Mortem, I,________ will stay true to my leaders and follow any order given.



Are anyone else's parents assholes or complete idiots? My mother today of all days when I was in a horrible mood is like "What are you doing on the computer? Facebook? Watching porn? Searching for something?" being really fucking annoying and pushy and like I did something horrible. I told her I was looking at forums and then she's like "What are forums?" I explained to her what a forum was then she's like, "What kind of forum is it? Gaming?" ugh, sometimes I want to shoot my parents.

It means she loves you man. Trust me, its better to have them care and ask questions and actually interact with you than not doing it all. It may seem annoying, but she's doing it for you. She just wants to talk to you and I understand you need space. Just tell her in the most understanding way you can.

Backstory and canon looks fine with me.

+Support

Hm, I like this gamemode.....All we need is to set it up, develop it (hopefully Khub/RTLK would want to do it), set up the canon, and provide an announcement. Once that is done, this can invite people who might also view our HL2RP. But I must advise people, I was in a community before who's HL2RP Server was dying and they made another form of RP. It didn't do anything and it was a waste of time and money so be advised that this may not work. Yet, it could also work and fully populate all of our servers. Kind of a toss in the dark. But its also more of a 80/50 kind of notion. Our Serious RP'ers here are devoted(I guess) and will be more than likely to try out the new Serious RP server.