Under the Union, Under the Sheets: A Soap Opera From the Mind of Sarah Jones

[Pielolz]

Make your episodes a tad longer; a lot of un-answered questions and such. Look at episode two of Omega 337 HUGE. I recommend you do the same

[Das]

Make your episodes a tad longer; a lot of un-answered questions and such. Look at episode two of Omega 337 HUGE. I recommend you do the same

Hey, the episode was only that short because it was the best place to cut off and leave a good cliffhanger, and rule of thumb is going to be 3 scenes or more. But the length doesn't really matter considering I'm WAY behind on what's happened so far, s there are going to be a lot of episodes.

[JoshB]

Did James REALLY do that?

[Pielolz]

PSA: Domestic violence is bad mkay. Its bad.. Report it to your local Civil Protection Team Immediantly.

[Das]

Did James REALLY do that?

Hell no, but he did yell, and try and kick Sarah's door down, while Cristina banged her head against the wall until it started bleeding and she passed out. I just changed it around a little to add more drama.

This is a television show BASED on Sarah's life on the server, it is not an exact retelling, but it follows the same basic track

[Pielolz]

Still the punching her thing was dramatic I'm like (Full pan dis-belief troll face) NO!

[JoshB]

You should do a stand alone episode (as in, it doesn't advance the entire story arc) that tells the 597, Nat and Sarah incident. I could give you some more details over PMs, if needed.

[Pielolz]

I remember that.. Josh please read my Combine Action Thriller. I beg you; PLEASE so much work.. And its epic.

[Das]

Still the punching her thing was dramatic I'm like (Full pan dis-belief troll face) NO!

It was a slap, not a punch, sorry if I made it unclear
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You should do a stand alone episode (as in, it doesn't advance the entire story arc) that tells the 597, Nat and Sarah incident. I could give you some more details over PMs, if needed.

Maybe, but the whole Natalie thing is a little hard to explain, especially since Sarah wasn't there for half of it, so I pretty much cut it out given that the show is mostly about Sarah, Cristina, and James, and Lottie.

I remember that.. Josh please read my Combine Action Thriller. I beg you; PLEASE so much work.. And its epic.

Please don't post stuff about your own show here, as I said, I would do an advert in my next episode for it, so don't worry.



Now if you'll excuse me, I have to type up episode 3.

[JoshB]

That's why I wrote that it could be a side episode, not a big one. . .anyways, I hope you do make that episode, but keep up the good work.

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Should go ingame and make a few screenshots for the show