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[DENIED]Zaughi Smith's Civil Authority Application
« on: March 14, 2012, 06:54:30 PM »
Zaughi Smith's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: Zaughi

IC Character Name: Zaughi Smith

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
He wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority to keep the citizens in City 45 safe, or he atleast wants them the illusion that they are safe. What led him to this descision is the rebellion attack on District 1. He saw what kind of beasts they were, for they cared not for whom they killed, citizen, Civil Protection or Combine. He saw them as a threat to the entire city.

He understands questions like the fact that if the rebels get in, then they may destroy the Thumpers, thus letting the burrowing Headcrabs and Antlions into City 45. And without a Nexus and a City Administrator, who would make sure that the city wasn't overrun by crime and scum?

So inevitably he applied the Civil Protection in the hopes of adding one more percent to keeping the revolutionists out of civilized society. The choice in his eyes is clear. The Combine are the future.

2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Pure to the core, has never touched contraband and reported ANY crime he has witnessed, Assists in finding rebels and anti-citizens in whatever dark holes and corners they hide. If ordered by a Combine or Civil Protection unit, he will carry out that order immediately, even at the cost of his life. He finds himself indifferent among the Combine.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
Joining the CCA will be a drastic change in responsibility for my character. He will be taking the weight of the safety of every citizen in the City onto his shoulders. He will have to cut his ties to anything that he could have done on Old Earth as a human being. This would be like changing his entire race, and betraying his own. He would give up his freedom, or what's left of it.

I believe my character will be able to handle it. He did when he rebels attacked. He kept calm and made sure they were disposed of. Combine Civil Authority also has it's benefits in the eyes of my character, but what he does not know is that his entire mind would be reprogrammed in the eyes of the Combine. He understands that he will recieve better living conditions than Citizens and Union Civil Workers, and that he will be treated with respect among the Combine. Although, in his mind the Combine is best choice for him.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Zaughi Smith had woken up in the train station on a bench in City45. He could remember one thing and that was that he had been relocated. Again. The portal event was bad enough, he wondered why he had to move to a different city so frequently.  He noticed a discarded can lying on the floor, so he picked it up and tossed it into a nearby trash can. Unknown to him, an APEX unit had observed this, and had thought "Finally, a citizen who DOES something for the City". Zaughi continued through the train station and when asked to apply, did so right away. He opened the doors, which opened to the, what he saw beautiful Combine architecture of City45. He had always wondered what the barricades were made from. As he walked into the square of District 1, he saw a citizen shoved up against a wall by a Civil Protection officer. The citizen resisted judgement and attacked the officer. Zaughi ran towards the man and held him back and allowed the officer to tie him. The officer nodded towards Zaughi and began to drag the man into the Nexus. He felt quite happy with himself for assisting the Combine in stopping a crime. He gained Loyalist status through cleaning up District 1. He also earned three points by cleaning the entire District 2 Hardpoint. He was given a Loyalist Armband by a High Command officer for this. Now glad, he moved into District 6 after applying with an officer first. On his way through, he heard loud noises and clanking coming from inside the bar. He listened closer, and heard a man with a booming voice speak about a rebellion. Zaughi knocked on the door and entered, deciding to learn of their plans before reporting it. He learned that the rebels were armed with knives and 9mm pistols, and were going to attack using brute force instead of stealth against to Combine forces in City 45 and attempt to take over District 1 in one hour. Zaughi left and reported it to an officer. Not only thirty minutes later, he passed a blockade of Civil Protection officers and a Combine Overwatch Soldier protecting the Hardpoint. As the rebels began to pour out, he watched as they engaged eachother in the streets. The Combine had driven in an Armored Personnel Carrier full of Combine Overwatch Soldiers, which ended the combat with the rebels. This is when he saw the righteousness of the Combine. Then he decided that he would sign up.

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
No, but I've played as Civil Protection on other non-CG servers.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
Over 9 months in Garry's Mod, 4 Years total in gaming.

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
Over 7 months

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
About 4 months, going into 5 in 2 weeks

4. What Time zone are you in?
Eastern Time

5. In what country do you live?
United States

6. How old are you?
26 years

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
The day I held out for an entire 45 minutes against large amounts of enemy soldiers that had broken half the rules in the server including permanent death on a serious server. Eventually was overrun, but planted C4, pretty much a way to opt out. I never knew sniper rifles could be so useful.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes. I do more listening than speaking.



IC Section

Full Name: Zaughi Smith
CID: 77953
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Height: 5.8
Hair Colour Dark Brown
Eye Colour: Brown
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 130 pounds
Mental Distinctions: Very intelligent.
Mental Defects: None.
Mental Advantages: Excells in math, science and tactics.
Notable Qualities: Always vigilant, reports any crimes, always speaks the truth to the Civil Protection officers.


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
No.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
No, only sometimes when my character requires it.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes.

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
In the hopes of securing the lives every citizen in City 45. To keep them alive and safe from the rebellion menace.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Zaughi Smith hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
I agree to these terms.
Zaughi Smith
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Re: Zaughi Smith's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: March 14, 2012, 08:33:02 PM »
UNIT: 03109
DIVISION: Universal Union
CLEARANCE: Commander
Enter Password: ************

ACCESS GRANTED

Connecting to Network
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Applicant File Opened: <Zaughi Smith>
Citizen Identification Number: 77953

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| It seems that you put poor effort into your backstory, not explaining things as how he got to City 45 from another City or anything before that point. It seems more like you just stated what you have done since you first joined the server. You also leave out key information, such as why your character is highly intelligent or why he excels at math. ||::>

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Disconnecting <UU.C45.CmD.03109>
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C18.MPF.RAZOR-OfC.448

 

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