Author Topic: Matthew "The Old Man" Henderson  (Read 3385 times)

Matthew "The Old Man" Henderson
« on: January 18, 2012, 11:10:53 AM »
Steam Name: The Doctor RIP juggernaut.
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:15659747
Character Name: Matthew "The Old Man" Henderson.
Reason for the switch: (OOC) To help out the role-play in the city server. (IC) With the clinic in the outland's going well he wants to start one in the city to also help out.
If required, write a detailed backstory on how your character left the outlands: http://www.catalyst-gaming.net/index.php?topic=8775.0
He managed to get a undamaged pare of cloths from a refugee who just got a vest right before the combine showed up(He stole them from some one).

Extra Note: The grammar might not the best due to the size but I really wish this could be a test how well some one could do this.
I also will lose ALL contraband on me(Including weapons) and any restrictions y'all want to put on me is fine.

I know that my way in to the city must suck but there's really no information on how well the city's are guarded and any good ways back in.
« Last Edit: January 24, 2012, 01:41:42 PM by The Doctor? RIP juggernaut »
1:23 PM - Pvt. Emory[113thCav]: I think 604 is a cat :3

2:07 PM - Juggernaut: Monkey with a gun
2:07 PM - Juggernaut: + Chunkeymonkey79
2:07 PM - Juggernaut: =
2:07 PM - Juggernaut: CHUNKYMONKEY WITH A GUN69
2:07 PM - chunkeymonkey79: YOU SIR ARE GOD


9:52 PM - Rory Phelps: gosh god damnit fuck my ass

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Re: Matthew "The Old Man" Henderson
« Reply #1 on: January 20, 2012, 08:44:44 AM »
The backstory doesn't really say much about the character itself, and HOW he got back into the city.

If he was really old, he might had a chance to get amputated for 10-103M. And you never explained how he got back in the city in the first place.

This is pending until you add these details to your backstory.
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Re: Matthew "The Old Man" Henderson
« Reply #2 on: January 20, 2012, 10:33:09 AM »
The backstory doesn't really say much about the character itself, and HOW he got back into the city.

If he was really old, he might had a chance to get amputated for 10-103M. And you never explained how he got back in the city in the first place.

This is pending until you add these details to your backstory.
Guess I left part of it out. Fixing.
1:23 PM - Pvt. Emory[113thCav]: I think 604 is a cat :3

2:07 PM - Juggernaut: Monkey with a gun
2:07 PM - Juggernaut: + Chunkeymonkey79
2:07 PM - Juggernaut: =
2:07 PM - Juggernaut: CHUNKYMONKEY WITH A GUN69
2:07 PM - chunkeymonkey79: YOU SIR ARE GOD


9:52 PM - Rory Phelps: gosh god damnit fuck my ass

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Re: Matthew "The Old Man" Henderson
« Reply #3 on: January 24, 2012, 01:37:51 PM »
I will await on other admin's verdicts before a decision is made.

Re: Matthew "The Old Man" Henderson
« Reply #4 on: January 24, 2012, 01:43:25 PM »
Added a new better story.
1:23 PM - Pvt. Emory[113thCav]: I think 604 is a cat :3

2:07 PM - Juggernaut: Monkey with a gun
2:07 PM - Juggernaut: + Chunkeymonkey79
2:07 PM - Juggernaut: =
2:07 PM - Juggernaut: CHUNKYMONKEY WITH A GUN69
2:07 PM - chunkeymonkey79: YOU SIR ARE GOD


9:52 PM - Rory Phelps: gosh god damnit fuck my ass

Re: Matthew "The Old Man" Henderson
« Reply #5 on: January 30, 2012, 01:25:43 PM »
bump to avoid auto-lock.
1:23 PM - Pvt. Emory[113thCav]: I think 604 is a cat :3

2:07 PM - Juggernaut: Monkey with a gun
2:07 PM - Juggernaut: + Chunkeymonkey79
2:07 PM - Juggernaut: =
2:07 PM - Juggernaut: CHUNKYMONKEY WITH A GUN69
2:07 PM - chunkeymonkey79: YOU SIR ARE GOD


9:52 PM - Rory Phelps: gosh god damnit fuck my ass

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Re: Matthew "The Old Man" Henderson
« Reply #6 on: January 30, 2012, 11:27:04 PM »
After giving this thought and talking to you about this, I've decided to accept this.

Ask an SA ingame to bring you back.

Locking.

 

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