u r terible riter go fuck urself awsy faget lol die retard stab urself wit pensiland i hafta put something constructive on here, so...Actually this was pretty good. Well narrated. Maybe you could have your character describe the destruction and fighting in more detail? Right now it just gets mentioned, but then again it seems like the purpose of this entry is to introduce the narrator's mental state...I'll think of some ideas to write about if I have time.
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