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[DENIED]James Blackberry's Civil Authority Application
« on: April 10, 2012, 11:41:29 AM »
James Blackberry's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: aerialrocket

IC Character Name: James Blackberry

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
My character, James Blackberry was running low on token's and needed to live a better life . In the past, James has been categorized as being a loyal person to the authorities.

He had always wanted to become a Combine Civil Authority since his best friend was killed by a rebel in crossfire. He swore from that day he was going to join the Civil Authority and be as cruel as possible to the people of the cities for he was just angry at people in general.

James has also been aiding the local civil protection with key information on the rebel's in the city, in hope's that he can earn there respect, that could help get to where he want's to get.

2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Law-Abiding, Good with Strategy, Loyal to the CCA. Respects everyone who is a official. will obey commands no matter what it is. 

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
As this is my first time applying for Civil Authority, I think this will be a learning experience for me. It will give me the opprotunity to learn how to play as the CCA, and even improve my role playing, along with making new friends.

James will be where he wanted to be, serving the Combine
for the rest of his life, a goal that he has waited for.


4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.

James Blackberry was born in Nottingham, England on April 24th, 1987. When he was only 3 years old his father was killed in action in the golf war. At age 8, his mother remarried. James and his step-dad became close, and starting at age 13, they would go to Football matches and watch Manchester united play. James attended public school from the age of 4 to 16, stopping in his last year when the Combine invaded. His mother and step-dad were killed during the initial genocides of the human populace.

James was initially sent to City 28, where he worked in a dirty, overcrowded, near-uninhabitable factory, producing weapons for the Civil Protection and other Combine military forces. City 28 was polluted beyond belief, probably more so than City 18. The sun never shone in City 28, resulting in around the clock darkness. City 28 also had terrible living conditions, and the Civil Protection unit in City 28 was often abusive. In 2010, City 28 was becoming overpopulated due to other cities sending their misbehaved citizens there to work in the factories. James received a transfer notice.

At age 23, James was transferred from City 28 to City 45. James had earned enough tokens in the factory to afford an apartment for 6 years. In that time, he had conversed with loyalists, who sought to brainwash him into liking the Union (The more, the merrier). From age 24 to 29, James began increasingly liking the Union. He would watch CPs do their daily duties from his apartment window and even helped them catch anti citizens by spying on them in return for rewards.

 At age 29, James began to run low on tokens. He needed a job, and the CWU denied him due to no positions at the time. James decided to speak to one of the civil protection unit's about joining and was told where to go to sign up for the Combine Civil Authority's Civil Protection.

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
No, I do not.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
About 3 and a half years.

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
About 3 and a half years.

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
Since last year.

4. What Time zone are you in?
GMT London

5. In what country do you live?
United Kingdom.

6. How old are you?
18

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
When i was asked to do a police raid on a server and i had to rp i was using a door rammer to knock the door off.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes.



IC Section

Full Name: James Blackberry
CID: 42061
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Height: 6ft
Hair Colour blond
Eye Colour: blue
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 120 pounds
Mental Distinctions: Quiet.
Mental Defects: N/A
Mental Advantages: Good at taking pain.
Notable Qualities: Able to work in a team, Good at assessing a situation.


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
Yes, I was accused of being a rebel leader by no other then a rebel himself, whom i had told the Civil protraction about. The rebel was later found to have lied to try and get his way out of death.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes, I enjoy them.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Of course, it's for the good of everyone.

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
To serve the Civil Authority and To protect those deemed valuable to the Union, enforce Law and Order.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, James Blackberry hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
« Last Edit: April 11, 2012, 03:22:22 AM by KillmePlz »

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Re: James Blackberry's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: April 11, 2012, 03:22:02 AM »
UNIT: 03109
DIVISION: Universal Union
CLEARANCE: Commander
Enter Password: ************

ACCESS GRANTED

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Applicant File Opened: <James Blackberry>
Citizen Identification Number: 42061

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| Application does not meet requirements. Application question 1 and 3 do not meet minimum standards. From an eighteen year old, I would expect a better effort. The application made it seem like you didn't care enough about your character to even write a detailed story. ||::>

Saving Record...
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