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[DENIED] Lilly Helgon's Civil Authority Application
« on: March 24, 2012, 08:15:06 AM »
Lilly Helgon's Civil Authority Application

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IC Character Name: Lilly Helgon

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
Lilly Helgon, ever since she was put in the city she has been scared of rebellion. She has been exploring combine technology, admiring what they have made. She has always followed all orders of any unit, and given help in any way she can. Whether it be feeding or giving tips about City45.

She has kept her criminal record to a minimal, helping the combine by reporting all anti-citizen behaviour. She has always felt a need for further justice within the city.When she was the age of 22, she thought about helping to stop crime by joining the civil protection.She slowly grew a lust for justice.

She has been trying to keep citizens from disrespecting officers and letting them do their job. As the years past, her lust for justice grew stronger.She offered help to all officers, trying to be like them any way she could without getting in the officers way.She has always has always had a lust for power and justice, but it was only recently that she became seriouse about it.





2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Average Strength,Lawful,Mentally Advantaged,Straight Posture,Trustworthy,Listens well

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
I expect that the Civil Protection squad will be hard work in training, but she will pull through and avoid every obstacle to bring justice to those who rebel.I will train hard and follow all her orders, no matter what. I expect it to be great, to finally complete my quest for justice.

I believe that I will train hard and grow stronger, enforcing laws to citizens and punishing those who do not abide. I think that it will be a big opportunity for me, and the citizens of the city.She will patrol as much as she can and work as hard as she can. Whether it is morning, afternoon or night she will be there for the squad.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Lilly Helgon has been a law abiding character that often walks around observing every letter, every item, every person she encounters. She sometimes gets in to trouble for audio violation or mobility violation. She was born 20 years before the 7 hour war, when it was over her parents were killed and she was transfered to city 45. At first she was scared of the combine, but learnt to accept that this is the world. She often just helps citizens who need help, reports anti-citizens and keeps citizens out of the combines way. At the age of 21 she began to get use to the world, at the age of 22 she begun to get a lust for justice in the city. She worked helping anyway she could till the age of 23, in which she started to get a bit more seriouse about the situation about coming a unit.She was a top grade student in school, especially for medical and chemistry. When she was 24, she finally started to ask for a entry.

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
No


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
Around 14 months.

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
5 Months

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
3 Weeks recently, once every week before that for one month.

4. What Time zone are you in?
+10GMT

5. In what country do you live?
Australia

6. How old are you?
11

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
My most memorable moment that sticks out is when I discovered what seriouse RP is, where you build up your character and meet new people.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes.



IC Section

Full Name: Lilly Helgon
CID: 88699
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Height: 5'3
Hair Colour Black
Eye Colour: Blue
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 112
Mental Distinctions: Medium Neuroticism, High Introversion, Low Extraversion
Mental Defects: Easily Gets Distracted, Thinks of things off topic
Mental Advantages: Observant,High Mental Strength,Never gets stressed
Notable Qualities: Good Listener, Follows Orders, Endurant,Commited


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
No

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
To bring further justice to the citizens of city 45, and to be apart of something that can help me stay strong and be commited to.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Lilly Helgon hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
« Last Edit: March 24, 2012, 09:32:37 AM by Swoots »

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Re: Lilly Helgon's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: March 24, 2012, 09:31:58 AM »
UNIT: 275
DIVISION: NOVA
CLEARANCE: Divisional Leader
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ACCESS GRANTED

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Applicant File Opened: <Lilly Helgon>
Citizen Identification Number: 88699

Acceptance status:
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Reason:
<::|| Application does not meet requirements. Question 4 does not meet minimum standards, there are also various spelling errors. ||::>

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« Last Edit: March 24, 2012, 09:34:00 AM by Swoots »

 

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