Vincent "Khârn" Curze's Authorization Application

[Monkey with a gun]

I do not understand how he managed to get transported from a military bunker (And still not be lumped together with military personel, as Oz stated) then wake up on a train at an un specified time wearing a citizen jumpsuit, while all the while still managing to have kept his knife after being stripped, and i don't see any possible way for him to have hidden the knife due to the fact he was unconcious during the entire thing.

[Pielolz]

We don't know how he keept the knife, and he tries to find out, he's like *wtf?* Maybe it was Gman? Too much chaos during the war? It isn't known. And he wasn't lumped together with military persons because he wasn't wearing a militaristic uniform, he was wearing a suite and tie. Also, the *nuclear project* is gonna be something he can talk about and *try* to motivate resistance members to fight for him, for he will claim he has "access" To these launch pads. When in reality, he actually doesn't.

Users need to stop targeting Renegade in his thread......

Spoiler for Hiden:

Literal pronouncement: Khârn

[EmperorDisasster]

We don't know how he keept the knife, and he tries to find out, he's like *wtf?* Maybe it was Gman? Too much chaos during the war? It isn't known.

You can't just say that, the admins need to understand how it is possible you kept the knife, otherwise it is in high risk of being denied.

And he wasn't lumped together with military persons because he wasn't wearing a militaristic uniform, he was wearing a suite and tie.

So, Combine are so idiotic they only assume military links by clothing? Yeah, no that will never be the case...

Also, the *nuclear project* is gonna be something he can talk about and *try* to motivate resistance members to fight for him, for he will claim he has "access" To these launch pads. When in reality, he actually doesn't.

So, why even bother APPLYING FOR THE KNOWLEDGE. *facepalm*

[Pielolz]

Users need to stop targeting renegade about his application, your random posts don't help the application process so please stop.

Can you read?


Locking topic so only administrators can post.

[garry :D]

The administration team has decided not to accept this application on the grounds of several punctuation and grammar errors as well as a canon mismatching plot hole:

He yelled and pumped a mag into it's face. It's head burst and it fell to the floor. He took his identity, his military identity, and burned that too. He reloaded his pistol, and fleed out the emergency escape tunnel. He was in the mountains, and he began tunning, when he felt a sharp pain in his back, and he fell, turning over, to see a combine soldier above him. He dropped his pistol and said "I surrender!" And a boot came down onto his face.

A person would not simply live after escaping from a nuclear bunker whilst armed and then killing a Combine/Xen creature.