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Alyssa Richards's Authorization Application
« on: November 25, 2011, 05:14:17 PM »
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Steam Name: H@Z@RD Spyro
Age: 16*gonna be random*
How long have you been Roleplaying? (can be any game): Uhm.... 2 Years
How long have you been playing Serious GMod RP?: 5 Months I guess

Character Section

Authorization(s):
Higher security skill

Name: Alyssa Richards
Age: Uhm..... It's either 19 or 20
Gender: Female
Affiliation: None

Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.
Alyssa seemed mad at Charlie locking her in a room.She looked around looking for items.
The only Item she found was an ol' rusty pick that would break easily with one fatal mistake.Alyssa thought that if she just went out the window,she would end up breaking her legs,but with the pick she could pick the door and escape.Alyssa cleared her mind,trying to pick through the door.She heared the sweet sound of success.. Alyssa escapes,hunting down Charlie with her Double Shotguns.

What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
*able to pick doors
*Can break in locked doors without wasting ammunition
*I think that is all


Defects
*The lock pick she has is very Rusty,which would break on one fatal mistake
*If she breaks it,the part of the pick would be stuck in the lock

What do you plan to do with these perks/defects?
Able to break in stealthily without wasting scarce ammunition.

Will anyone else need these auths? (If so, list OOC and IC name(s))
Ranthem (10,345 +swag)
Robert Scott Smith

Which server does this apply for?
Outlands

Extra Notes (optional):
Remember on my other auth? The weak String Trap,will it be denied or accepted?

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Re: Alyssa Richards's Authorization Application
« Reply #1 on: November 26, 2011, 06:31:54 AM »
Just a question.. why do you change your age with every app? Before you were 14, now you're 16.

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Re: Alyssa Richards's Authorization Application
« Reply #2 on: November 26, 2011, 10:54:15 AM »
 :D Guess you noticed that,if you read right next to it,it says,"GONNA BE RANDOM" So thats the reason.

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Re: Alyssa Richards's Authorization Application
« Reply #3 on: November 26, 2011, 11:13:32 AM »
But why is your age random?

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Re: Alyssa Richards's Authorization Application
« Reply #4 on: November 26, 2011, 12:45:33 PM »
I think it's cause he/she thinks that admins will age discriminate

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Re: Alyssa Richards's Authorization Application
« Reply #5 on: November 26, 2011, 02:03:43 PM »
I think it's cause he/she thinks that admins will age discriminate


It is something that we take into consideration. If you don't stick to one age, your applications will probably be instant-denied. Sorry, can't beat the system bub
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Re: Alyssa Richards's Authorization Application
« Reply #6 on: November 27, 2011, 12:43:29 PM »
Sorry I didn't respond,I got banned for Spam,The real age is 13.

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Re: Alyssa Richards's Authorization Application
« Reply #7 on: November 28, 2011, 04:55:12 AM »
Denying this for 2 reasons.

1. Can't be honest with your age, seriously, if you can RP good then we don't care about your age.

2. Overall, not enough effort was put into the application. Your backstory, I feel wasn't detailed enough. You state that you were pushed into a room  and locked in there, why not provide any information prior to being locked up?

Try again next time.

Locked.

 

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