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Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« on: January 31, 2012, 06:32:20 PM »
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Steam Name: -APC- DA FUNNEEZ DUDE -GIS-
Age: 24
How long have you been Roleplaying? (can be any game): 2 Yrs
How long have you been playing Serious GMod RP?: 4 months

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Authorization(s):
Refugee leadership outfit (Tan shirt Citizen model), recognization as the leader of the group "The Safehevan", medical knowledge, knowledge in the areas of the Outlands.

Name: Aleksander Boshliveik
Age: 45
Gender: Male
Affiliation: None

Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.
Aleksander escaped from City 45 at the age of 20, took a bullet in the leg in the process and had gained a almost godly reputation in the eyes of the refugees. As he had been in the Outlands of City 45 for almost 25 years, he was very acquainted with the area. He went from place to place, examining the area around him and helping refugees escape the combine. He was annoyed with his Citizen uniform, which by now had become ripped and it's boots tarnished. He found some fabric from the area and sowed it to make a better outfit, and then proceeded to found a underground refugee group "The Safehevan" and employed them to help other refugees escape the Combine, and even to fight them openly.

Aleksander escaped City 45 in a daring move when his block was raided. He ran to the window as soon as the CCA entered his room, and threw a TV out to break it. Several CPs chased after him as he jumped, in an incredibly stupid move, and he landed and barely escaped death. He ended up with a permanently crippled leg, but nevertheless he "ran" out of the district. He found the Canals, and climbed down a ladder into the pit. Immediately after he had gotten down, a swarm of Manhacks rushed at him, and he thought he was doomed. He was panting and looked over and noticed a crowbar lying at the bottom of the ladder. He picked up the crowbar and began to rush at the Manhacks; he took out five, but the others regrouped and flew at him again. He ran until he reached a cave full of barnacles, and he dodged their "tongues", but the Manhacks didn't. The barnacles made quick work of the Manhacks, and he continued his journey. Along his way, he was faced with many harrowing threats such as Metrocops, Manhacks, City-Scanners,and Headcrabs, to name a few. After a long journey of several weeks, he arrived at the Outlands. Along the course of several years, he gained various skills, including: Herbal healing, stealth, hand to hand combat, to name a few. He chose to return to the edge of the canals to help other refugees find their way to safehouses, and he earned a strong reputation. Today you can find him with his group, "The Safehevan", whom he teaches survival skills to.

What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
No longer recognizable as just another runaway citizen

Recognized as a Group  Leader

A more durable, strong outfit

Free of the horrifying "CID Print" on the old shirt's back

A better understanding of the universe

Defects
Recognized as a Group Leader by OTA, leading to possible Amputation, instead of just detention





What do you plan to do with these perks/defects?
Lead new refugees to the safety of established safehouses and bases, and teach inquisitive minds the wonders of our Mind.

Will anyone else need these auths? (If so, list OOC and IC name(s))
No.

Which server does this apply for?
Outlands

Extra Notes (optional):
« Last Edit: January 31, 2012, 07:17:11 PM by EliteOps12 »
Mikhel Kharlamov | Alive | CWU Tier 3 |

Marcel Huber | Alive] | Living in City 45 |

Ian Kharlamov | Alive | Hiding from the CCA, after becoming AC#4 |

Dr. Cole Matthews | Alive | Administrating C45 |

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Re: Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« Reply #1 on: January 31, 2012, 06:37:42 PM »
I think this will need some more detail before consideration, namely in the backstory part. I'd reccomend adding in specific details about why he was seen as godly, his escape, ect. Anything you can add will help.

UU.OTA-VANGUARD.6.94250 | Online (THETA.EOW)
C45.CCA.CLASSIFIED.326 | In Service (VOID-DvL.326)
C45.CCA.APEX-01.199 | In Service
Dr. Wolfgang Metzger | Dead | Shot after throwing a Breen bust at the SeC.


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Re: Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« Reply #2 on: January 31, 2012, 07:07:39 PM »
NEW EDITS: I added backstory and more Auth requests to go with the flow of the story
Mikhel Kharlamov | Alive | CWU Tier 3 |

Marcel Huber | Alive] | Living in City 45 |

Ian Kharlamov | Alive | Hiding from the CCA, after becoming AC#4 |

Dr. Cole Matthews | Alive | Administrating C45 |

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Re: Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2012, 07:17:56 PM »
EVEN MORE EDITS: I removed story and Auth requests after rereading the Auth Info Page
Mikhel Kharlamov | Alive | CWU Tier 3 |

Marcel Huber | Alive] | Living in City 45 |

Ian Kharlamov | Alive | Hiding from the CCA, after becoming AC#4 |

Dr. Cole Matthews | Alive | Administrating C45 |

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Re: Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« Reply #4 on: January 31, 2012, 09:11:50 PM »
 After reading this. I am quite concerned in a few points, even though this story is contained in such a small paragraph, it shows most of the needs to make a successful authorization. By the looks of it, your auth. is far more then average.

 I got some concerns though which I could ask.

 -Any pre-war skills you learn?
 -How did you become Godly?
 -Survival techniques? How did you learn this?
 -20 years of being in a area? The events of the Combine didn't do any of this in the last 20 years.
 -Jumping out of a window? Wouldn't that break your leg?

 Anyways, that's all for now.

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Re: Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« Reply #5 on: January 31, 2012, 09:46:21 PM »
After reading this. I am quite concerned in a few points, even though this story is contained in such a small paragraph, it shows most of the needs to make a successful authorization. By the looks of it, your auth. is far more then average.

 I got some concerns though which I could ask.

 -Any pre-war skills you learn?
 -How did you become Godly?
 -Survival techniques? How did you learn this?
 -20 years of being in a area? The events of the Combine didn't do any of this in the last 20 years.
 -Jumping out of a window? Wouldn't that break your leg?

 Anyways, that's all for now.

-Not many
-It is stated up there
-Infer
-It depends on when you would consider the Black Mesa Incident to have taken place.
-It says " He ended up with a permanently crippled leg, but nevertheless he "ran" out of the district."
Mikhel Kharlamov | Alive | CWU Tier 3 |

Marcel Huber | Alive] | Living in City 45 |

Ian Kharlamov | Alive | Hiding from the CCA, after becoming AC#4 |

Dr. Cole Matthews | Alive | Administrating C45 |

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Re: Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« Reply #6 on: January 31, 2012, 09:56:17 PM »
Alright, nice edits. My final (for now) points-
If possible, would you mind having some sort of defect related to your jump from the window? Your leg dosent need to be broken, but some sign or somthing would be nice.

In addition, I believe only Raiden and Rofl can auth your group, so to expediate that, I'd reccomend either posting the OOC names of the members of your group, maybe with IC names aswell- or, if you don't feel confortable doing that, send a PM with that info to Rofl and Raide.

UU.OTA-VANGUARD.6.94250 | Online (THETA.EOW)
C45.CCA.CLASSIFIED.326 | In Service (VOID-DvL.326)
C45.CCA.APEX-01.199 | In Service
Dr. Wolfgang Metzger | Dead | Shot after throwing a Breen bust at the SeC.


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9:19 PM - RoflWaffle - fuck off please: i'm an idiot for assuming things her


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9:22 PM - Lord Bravery: have sex with m

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Re: Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« Reply #7 on: January 31, 2012, 11:01:07 PM »
Brandon, rofl stated that there will be no more official resistance/ref groups. Also its needs to be established first and such.
I am ded not big surprise.

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Re: Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« Reply #8 on: January 31, 2012, 11:09:12 PM »
Brandon, rofl stated that there will be no more official resistance/ref groups. Also its needs to be established first and such.

The auth isn't asking for the recognition of the group as official. It's asking to be recognized as the head (which I think is completely IC, nor do you need an auth, but nevertheless).

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Re: Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« Reply #9 on: February 01, 2012, 07:21:30 PM »
Que pasa?


What happens when I say "bump" on a Auth page?
« Last Edit: February 01, 2012, 07:25:38 PM by EliteOps12 »
Mikhel Kharlamov | Alive | CWU Tier 3 |

Marcel Huber | Alive] | Living in City 45 |

Ian Kharlamov | Alive | Hiding from the CCA, after becoming AC#4 |

Dr. Cole Matthews | Alive | Administrating C45 |

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Re: Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« Reply #10 on: February 03, 2012, 05:38:21 PM »
Bump  8)
Mikhel Kharlamov | Alive | CWU Tier 3 |

Marcel Huber | Alive] | Living in City 45 |

Ian Kharlamov | Alive | Hiding from the CCA, after becoming AC#4 |

Dr. Cole Matthews | Alive | Administrating C45 |

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Re: Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« Reply #11 on: February 03, 2012, 11:03:47 PM »
Stop bumping this thread every few days, just be patient.


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Re: Aleksander Boshliveik's Authorization Application
« Reply #12 on: February 05, 2012, 07:42:02 PM »
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A minimum of 5 posts is required for all applications.  VIP/Gold members are exempt from this rule.

Denied for this reason and the fact I've never seen this group online so you need an established one that is running with members and everything before you wish for it to become official.
« Last Edit: June 03, 2012, 02:28:31 AM by Kom??Як »

 

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