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General => Creations => Topic started by: Pielolz on December 15, 2012, 01:15:54 PM

Title: Escape (Creative writing)
Post by: Pielolz on December 15, 2012, 01:15:54 PM

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Title: Re: Escape (Creative writing)
Post by: Tyrex on December 15, 2012, 02:59:46 PM

I don't understand this shit at all, but I guess that's what "creative writing" is

Title: Re: Escape (Creative writing)
Post by: Dallas on December 15, 2012, 03:12:19 PM

Just saying, the term creative writing applies to all fiction in general, this would be described as "Expressive writing".
Also consider paragraphing it.

Title: Re: Escape (Creative writing)
Post by: tics on December 15, 2012, 05:17:19 PM

This only remotely makes sense, but the writing is choppy and verbose. Also, I've mentioned this to you before, and you do it in every thread I see: "whom" refers to an object. You consistently use it wrong. The great thing about "whom" is that it's not noticeable if you use "who" where "whom" is appropriate. However, if you use "whom" where "who" is appropriate it does stand out. I suggest you either learn how to use the word or just not use it at all.